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Signed-off-by: Hannah Hunter <[email protected]>

Author: hhunter-ms

articles/azure-monitor/snapshot-debugger/snapshot-debugger-data.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ You can view debug snapshots in the portal to see the call stack and inspect var
 
 ## View Snapshots in the Portal
 
-After an exception has occurred in your application and a snapshot has been created, you should have snapshots to view in the Azure portal within 5 to 10 minutes. To view snapshots, in the **Failure** pane, either:
+After an exception has occurred in your application and a snapshot is created, you can view snapshots in the Azure portal within 5 to 10 minutes. To view snapshots, in the **Failure** pane, either:
 
 * Select the **Operations** button when viewing the **Operations** tab, or
 * Select the **Exceptions** button when viewing the **Exceptions** tab.
@@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ In the Debug Snapshot view, you see a call stack and a variables pane. When you
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/snapshot-debugger/open-snapshot-portal.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Open debug snapshot highlighted in the Azure portal.":::
 
-Snapshots might include sensitive information. By default,  you can only view snapshots if you've been assigned the `Application Insights Snapshot Debugger` role.
+Snapshots might include sensitive information. By default,  you can only view snapshots if you are assigned the `Application Insights Snapshot Debugger` role.
 
-## View Snapshots in Visual Studio 2017 Enterprise or above
+## View Snapshots in Visual Studio 2017 Enterprise or greater
 
 1. Click the **Download Snapshot** button to download a `.diagsession` file, which can be opened by Visual Studio Enterprise.
 
-1. To open the `.diagsession` file, you need to have the Snapshot Debugger Visual Studio component installed. The Snapshot Debugger component is a required component of the ASP.NET workload in Visual Studio and can be selected from the Individual Component list in the Visual Studio installer. If you're using a version of Visual Studio before Visual Studio 2017 version 15.5, you'll need to install the extension from the [Visual Studio Marketplace](https://aka.ms/snapshotdebugger).
+1. To open the `.diagsession` file, you need to have the Snapshot Debugger Visual Studio component installed. The Snapshot Debugger component is a required component of the ASP.NET workload in Visual Studio and can be selected from the Individual Component list in the Visual Studio installer. If you're using a version of Visual Studio before Visual Studio 2017 version 15.5, you need to install the extension from the [Visual Studio Marketplace](https://aka.ms/snapshotdebugger).
 
 1. After you open the snapshot file, the Minidump Debugging page in Visual Studio appears. Click **Debug Managed Code** to start debugging the snapshot. The snapshot opens to the line of code where the exception was thrown so that you can debug the current state of the process.