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articles/communications-gateway/configure-test-customer-teams-direct-routing.md

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You must have a Microsoft 365 tenant that you can use as a test customer. You must have at least one number that you can allocate to this test customer.
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- [Prepare to deploy Azure Communications Gateway](prepare-to-deploy.md)
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- [Deploy Azure Communications Gateway](deploy.md)
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- [Connect Azure Communications Gateway to Microsoft Teams Direct Routing](connect-teams-direct-routing.md)
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Your organization must have integrated with Azure Communications Gateway's Provisioning API. Someone in your organization must be able to make requests using the Provisioning API during this procedure.
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Your organization must [integrate with Azure Communications Gateway's Provisioning API](integrate-with-provisioning-api.md). Someone in your organization must be able to make requests using the Provisioning API during this procedure.
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articles/communications-gateway/configure-test-numbers-teams-direct-routing.md

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- [Prepare to deploy Azure Communications Gateway](prepare-to-deploy.md)
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- [Deploy Azure Communications Gateway](deploy.md)
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- [Connect Azure Communications Gateway to Microsoft Teams Direct Routing](connect-teams-direct-routing.md)
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- [Configure a test customer for Microsoft Teams Direct Routing](configure-test-customer-teams-direct-routing.md)
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Your organization must [integrate with Azure Communications Gateway's Provisioning API](integrate-with-provisioning-api.md). Someone in your organization must be able to make requests using the Provisioning API during this procedure.
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## Configure the test numbers on Azure Communications Gateway with the Provisioning API

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- [Prepare to deploy Azure Communications Gateway](prepare-to-deploy.md)
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This step requires Azure Communications Gateway's Provisioning API. The API allows you to indicate to Azure Communications Gateway which service(s) you are supporting for each number, using _account_ and _number_ resources.
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This step requires Azure Communications Gateway's Provisioning API. The API allows you to indicate to Azure Communications Gateway which service(s) you're supporting for each number, using _account_ and _number_ resources.
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- Account resources are descriptions of your customers (typically, an enterprise), and per-customer settings for service provisioning.
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Upload the numbers for integration testing to Zoom. When you do this, you can optionally configure Zoom to add a header with custom contents to SIP INVITEs. You can use this header to identify the Zoom account for the number or indicate that these are test numbers. For more information on this header, see Zoom's _Zoom Phone Provider Exchange Solution Reference Guide_.
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Upload the numbers for integration testing to Zoom. When you upload numbers, you can optionally configure Zoom to add a header containing custom contents to SIP INVITEs. You can use this header to identify the Zoom account for the number or indicate that these numbers are test numbers. For more information on this header, see Zoom's _Zoom Phone Provider Exchange Solution Reference Guide_.
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Use [https://support.zoom.us/hc/en-us/articles/360020808292-Managing-phone-numbers](https://support.zoom.us/hc/en-us/articles/360020808292-Managing-phone-numbers) to assign the numbers for integration testing to the user accounts that you will use for testing.
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Use [https://support.zoom.us/hc/en-us/articles/360020808292-Managing-phone-numbers](https://support.zoom.us/hc/en-us/articles/360020808292-Managing-phone-numbers) to assign the numbers for integration testing to the user accounts that you need to use for integration testing. Integration testing is part of preparing for live traffic.
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articles/communications-gateway/connect-operator-connect.md

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