Update articles/cosmos-db/mongodb/introduction.md

Author: gahl-levy

articles/cosmos-db/mongodb/introduction.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Azure Cosmos DB for MongoDB makes it easy to use Azure Cosmos DB as if it were a
 
 ## Cosmos DB for MongoDB benefits
 
-Cosmos DB for MongoDB has numerous added benefits of being built on Azure Cosmos DB when compared to service offerings such as MongoDB Atlas:
+Cosmos DB for MongoDB has numerous benefits compared to other MongoDB service offerings such as MongoDB Atlas:
 
 - **Instantaneous scalability**: With the [Autoscale](../provision-throughput-autoscale.md) feature, your database scales instantaneously with zero warmup period. Other MongoDB offerings such as MongoDB Atlas can take hours to scale up and up to days to scale down.