Merge pull request #96758 from bwren/am-okr-description

ttorble · web-flow · commit 09f682896a21 · 2019-11-21T16:28:49.000Z
Azure Monitor OKR descriptions
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/insights/solutions-resources-searches-alerts.md b/articles/azure-monitor/insights/solutions-resources-searches-alerts.md
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 title: Saved searches in management solutions | Microsoft Docs
-description: Management solutions typically include saved searches in Log Analytics to analyze data collected by the solution. They may also define alerts to notify the user or automatically take action in response to a critical issue. This article describes how to define Log Analytics saved searches in a Resource Manager template so they can be included in management solutions.
+description: Management solutions typically include saved log queries to analyze data collected by the solution. This article describes how to define Log Analytics saved searches in a Resource Manager template.
 ms.service:  azure-monitor
 ms.subservice: 
 ms.topic: conceptual
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/insights/vminsights-faq.md b/articles/azure-monitor/insights/vminsights-faq.md
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 title: Azure Monitor for VMs (preview) Frequently Asked Questions | Microsoft Docs
-description: Azure Monitor for VMs is a solution in Azure that combines health and performance monitoring of the Azure VM operating system, as well as automatically discovering application components and dependencies with other resources and maps the communication between them. This article answers common questions.
+description: Answers to common questions for Azure Monitor for VMs which monitors the health and performance of the Azure VMs in addition to automatically discovering and mapping application components and their dependencies. 
 ms.service:  azure-monitor
 ms.subservice: 
 ms.topic: conceptual
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/insights/vminsights-overview.md b/articles/azure-monitor/insights/vminsights-overview.md
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 title: What is Azure Monitor for VMs (preview)? | Microsoft Docs
-description: Azure Monitor for VMs is a feature of Azure Monitor that combines health and performance monitoring of the Azure VM operating system, as well as automatically discovering application components and dependencies with other resources and maps the communication between them. This article provides an overview.
+description: Overview of Azure Monitor for VMs which monitors the health and performance of the Azure VMs in addition to automatically discovering and mapping application components and their dependencies. 
 ms.service:  azure-monitor
 ms.subservice: 
 ms.topic: conceptual
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/learn/tutorial-archive-data.md b/articles/azure-monitor/learn/tutorial-archive-data.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Archive Azure metric and log data using Azure Storage
-description: Archive log and metric data produced within Azure to a storage account.
+description: Archive log and metric data generated by Azure resources to a storage account.
 author: johnkemnetz
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/activity-log-schema.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/activity-log-schema.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Azure Activity Log event schema
-description: Understand the event schema for data emitted into the Activity Log
+description: Describes the event schema for each category in the Azure Activity log.
 author: johnkemnetz
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/collect-custom-metrics-guestos-vm-cloud-service-classic.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/collect-custom-metrics-guestos-vm-cloud-service-classic.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Send classic Cloud Services metrics to Azure Monitor metrics database
-description: Send Guest OS metrics to the Azure Monitor metric store Cloud Services
+description: Describes the process for sending Guest OS performance metrics for Azure classic Cloud Services to the Azure Monitor metric store. 
 author: anirudhcavale
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/collect-custom-metrics-linux-telegraf.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/collect-custom-metrics-linux-telegraf.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Collect custom metrics for Linux VM with the InfluxData Telegraf agent
-description: Collect custom metrics for a Linux VM with the InfluxData Telegraf agent
+description: instructions on how to deploy the InfluxData Telegraf agent on a Linux VM in Azure and configure the agent to publish metrics to Azure Monitor. 
 author: anirudhcavale
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/diagnostic-logs-append-blobs.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/diagnostic-logs-append-blobs.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Prepare for format change to Azure Monitor diagnostic logs
-description: Azure Diagnostic Logs will be moved to use append blobs on November 1, 2018.
+description: Describes the impact and how to update your tooling to handle the new Azure Diagnostic logs that was changed to use append blobs on November 1, 2018.
 author: johnkemnetz
 services: monitoring
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/diagnostics-extension-to-storage.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/diagnostics-extension-to-storage.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Store and View Diagnostic Data in Azure Storage
-description: Get Azure diagnostics data into Azure Storage and view it
+description: Learn how to collect Azure diagnostics data in an Azure Storage account so you can view it with one of several available tools.
 services: azure-monitor
 author: jpconnock
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/monitoring-classic-retirement.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/monitoring-classic-retirement.md
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 title: Update of classic alerting & monitoring in Azure Monitor
-description: Overview of retirement of classic monitoring services and functionality, earlier shown in Azure portal under Alerts (classic). Classic alerting & monitoring includes classic metric alerts for Azure resources, classic metric alerts for Application Insights, classic webtest alerts for Application Insights, classic custom metric based alerts for Application Insights and classic alerts for Application Insights SmartDetection v1
+description: Description of the retirement of classic monitoring services and functionality, earlier shown in Azure portal under Alerts (classic). 
 author: yanivlavi
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/resource-logs-stream-event-hubs.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/resource-logs-stream-event-hubs.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Stream Azure resource logs to an event hub
-description: Learn how to stream Azure resource logs to an event hub.
+description: Learn how to stream Azure resource logs to an event hub to send data to external systems such as third-party SIEMs and other log analytics solutions.
 author: bwren
 services: azure-monitor
 ms.service: azure-monitor
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/platform/roles-permissions-security.md b/articles/azure-monitor/platform/roles-permissions-security.md
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ ms.date: 11/27/2017
 ms.author: johnkem
 ms.subservice: ""
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-# Get started with roles, permissions, and security with Azure Monitor
+# Roles, permissions, and security in Azure Monitor
 
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