Update advisor-reference-reliability-recommendations.md

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@@ -52,13 +52,13 @@ Learn more about Azure FarmBeats - [Democratizing agriculture intelligence: intr
 
 ### Hostname certificate rotation failed
 
-API Management service failed to refresh hostname certificate from Key Vault. Ensure that certificate exists in Key Vault and API Management service identity is granted secret read access. Otherwise, API Management service will not be able to retrieve certificate updates from Key Vault, which may lead to the service using stale certificate and runtime API traffic being blocked as a result.
+API Management service failed to refresh hostname certificate from Key Vault. Ensure that certificate exists in Key Vault and API Management service identity is granted secret read access. Otherwise, API Management service is not able to retrieve certificate updates from Key Vault, which may lead to the service using stale certificate and runtime API traffic being blocked as a result.
 
 Learn more about [Api Management - HostnameCertRotationFail (Hostname certificate rotation failed)](https://aka.ms/apimdocs/customdomain).
 
 ### SSL/TLS renegotiation blocked
 
-SSL/TLS renegotiation attempt blocked. Renegotiation happens when a client certificate is requested over an already established connection. When it is blocked, reading 'context.Request.Certificate' in policy expressions will return 'null'. To support client certificate authentication scenarios, enable 'Negotiate client certificate' on listed hostnames. For browser-based clients, enabling this option might result in a certificate prompt being presented to the client.
+SSL/TLS renegotiation attempt blocked. Renegotiation happens when a client certificate is requested over an already established connection. When it is blocked, reading 'context.Request.Certificate' in policy expressions returns 'null'. To support client certificate authentication scenarios, enable 'Negotiate client certificate' on listed hostnames. For browser-based clients, enabling this option might result in a certificate prompt being presented to the client.
 
 Learn more about [Api Management - TlsRenegotiationBlocked (SSL/TLS renegotiation blocked)](../api-management/api-management-howto-mutual-certificates-for-clients.md).
 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Learn more about [Virtual machine (classic) - EnableBackup (Enable Backups on yo
 
 ### Upgrade the standard disks attached to your premium-capable VM to premium disks
 
-We have identified that you are using standard disks with your premium-capable Virtual Machines and we recommend you consider upgrading the standard disks to premium disks. For any Single Instance Virtual Machine using premium storage for all Operating System Disks and Data Disks, we guarantee you will have Virtual Machine Connectivity of at least 99.9%. Consider these factors when making your upgrade decision. The first is that upgrading requires a VM reboot and this process takes 3-5 minutes to complete. The second is if the VMs in the list are mission-critical production VMs, evaluate the improved availability against the cost of premium disks.
+We have identified that you are using standard disks with your premium-capable Virtual Machines and we recommend you consider upgrading the standard disks to premium disks. For any Single Instance Virtual Machine using premium storage for all Operating System Disks and Data Disks, we guarantee you have Virtual Machine Connectivity of at least 99.9%. Consider these factors when making your upgrade decision. The first is that upgrading requires a VM reboot and this process takes 3-5 minutes to complete. The second is if the VMs in the list are mission-critical production VMs, evaluate the improved availability against the cost of premium disks.
 
 Learn more about [Virtual machine - MigrateStandardStorageAccountToPremium (Upgrade the standard disks attached to your premium-capable VM to premium disks)](https://aka.ms/aa_storagestandardtopremium_learnmore).
 
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ Learn more about [Virtual machine - CheckPointPlatformServicingKnownIssueA (Chec
 
 ### Access to mandatory URLs missing for your Azure Virtual Desktop environment
 
-In order for a session host to deploy and register to Azure Virtual Desktop properly, you need to add a set of URLs to allowed list in case your virtual machine runs in restricted environment. After visiting the "Learn More" link, you will be able to see the minimum list of URLs you need to unblock to have a successful deployment and functional session host. For specific URL(s) missing from allowed list, you may also search Application event log for event 3702.
+In order for a session host to deploy and register to Azure Virtual Desktop properly, you need to add a set of URLs to allowed list in case your virtual machine runs in restricted environment. After visiting the "Learn More" link, you see the minimum list of URLs you need to unblock to have a successful deployment and functional session host. For specific URL(s) missing from allowed list, you may also search Application event log for event 3702.
 
 Learn more about [Virtual machine - SessionHostNeedsAssistanceForUrlCheck (Access to mandatory URLs missing for your Azure Virtual Desktop environment)](../virtual-desktop/safe-url-list.md).
 
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ Learn more about [Azure Cosmos DB account - CosmosDBMongoSelfServeUpgrade (Upgra
 Based on their names and configuration, we have detected the Azure Cosmos DB accounts below as being potentially used for production workloads. These accounts currently run in a single Azure region. You can increase their availability by configuring them to span at least two Azure regions.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Additional regions will incur extra costs.
+> Additional regions incur extra costs.
 
 Learn more about [Azure Cosmos DB account - CosmosDBSingleRegionProdAccounts (Add a second region to your production workloads on Azure Cosmos DB)](../cosmos-db/high-availability.md).
 
@@ -249,27 +249,27 @@ Learn more about [Azure Cosmos DB account - CosmosDBMaxGlobalLSNReachedV4 (Upgra
 
 ### Upgrade your Azure Fluid Relay client library
 
-You have recently invoked the Azure Fluid Relay service with an old client library. Your Azure Fluid Relay client library should now be upgraded to the latest version to ensure your application remains operational. Upgrading will provide the most up-to-date functionality, as well as enhancements in performance and stability. For more information on the latest version to use and how to upgrade, please refer to the article.
+You have recently invoked the Azure Fluid Relay service with an old client library. Your Azure Fluid Relay client library should now be upgraded to the latest version to ensure your application remains operational. Upgrading provides the most up-to-date functionality, as well as enhancements in performance and stability. For more information on the latest version to use and how to upgrade, please refer to the article.
 
 Learn more about [FluidRelay Server - UpgradeClientLibrary (Upgrade your Azure Fluid Relay client library)](https://github.com/microsoft/FluidFramework).
 
 ## HDInsight
 
 ### Deprecation of Kafka 1.1 in HDInsight 4.0 Kafka cluster
 
-Starting July 1, 2020, customers will not be able to create new Kafka clusters with Kafka 1.1 on HDInsight 4.0. Existing clusters will run as is without support from Microsoft. Consider moving to Kafka 2.1 on HDInsight 4.0 by June 30 2020 to avoid potential system/support interruption.
+Starting July 1, 2020, customers can't create new Kafka clusters with Kafka 1.1 on HDInsight 4.0. Existing clusters run as is without support from Microsoft. Consider moving to Kafka 2.1 on HDInsight 4.0 by June 30 2020 to avoid potential system/support interruption.
 
 Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - KafkaVersionRetirement (Deprecation of Kafka 1.1 in HDInsight 4.0 Kafka cluster)](https://aka.ms/hdiretirekafka).
 
 ### Deprecation of Older Spark Versions in HDInsight Spark cluster
 
-Starting July 1, 2020, customers will not be able to create new Spark clusters with Spark 2.1 and 2.2 on HDInsight 3.6, and Spark 2.3 on HDInsight 4.0. Existing clusters will run as is without support from Microsoft.
+Starting July 1, 2020, customers can't create new Spark clusters with Spark 2.1 and 2.2 on HDInsight 3.6, and Spark 2.3 on HDInsight 4.0. Existing clusters run as is without support from Microsoft.
 
 Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - SparkVersionRetirement (Deprecation of Older Spark Versions in HDInsight Spark cluster)](https://aka.ms/hdiretirespark).
 
 ### Enable critical updates to be applied to your HDInsight clusters
 
-HDInsight service is applying an important certificate related update to your cluster. However, one or more policies in your subscription are preventing HDInsight service from creating or modifying network resources (Load balancer, Network Interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters and applying this update. Take actions to allow HDInsight service to create or modify network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters before Jan 13, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. The HDInsight team will be performing updates between Jan 13, 2021 05:00 PM UTC and Jan 16, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. Failure to apply this update may result in your clusters becoming unhealthy and unusable.
+HDInsight service is applying an important certificate related update to your cluster. However, one or more policies in your subscription are preventing HDInsight service from creating or modifying network resources (Load balancer, Network Interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters and applying this update. Take actions to allow HDInsight service to create or modify network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters before Jan 13, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. The HDInsight team performs updates between Jan 13, 2021 05:00 PM UTC and Jan 16, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. Failure to apply this update may result in your clusters becoming unhealthy and unusable.
 
 Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - GCSCertRotation (Enable critical updates to be applied to your HDInsight clusters)](../hdinsight/hdinsight-hadoop-provision-linux-clusters.md).
 
@@ -287,13 +287,13 @@ Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - GCSCertRotationR3DropRecreate (Drop and re
 
 ### Apply critical updates to your HDInsight clusters
 
-The HDInsight service has attempted to apply a critical certificate update on all your running clusters. However, one or more policies in your subscription are preventing HDInsight service from creating or modifying network resources (Load balancer, Network Interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters and applying this update. Remove or update your policy assignment to allow HDInsight service to create or modify network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters before Jan 21, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. The HDInsight team will be performing updates between Jan 21, 2021 05:00 PM UTC and Jan 23, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. To verify the policy update, you can try to create network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) in the same resource group and Subnet where your cluster is in. Failure to apply this update may result in your clusters becoming unhealthy and unusable. You can also drop and recreate your cluster before Jan 25th, 2021 to prevent the cluster from becoming unhealthy and unusable. The HDInsight service will send another notification if we failed to apply the update to your clusters.
+The HDInsight service has attempted to apply a critical certificate update on all your running clusters. However, one or more policies in your subscription are preventing HDInsight service from creating or modifying network resources (Load balancer, Network Interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters and applying this update. Remove or update your policy assignment to allow HDInsight service to create or modify network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) associated with your clusters before Jan 21, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. The HDInsight team performs updates between Jan 21, 2021 05:00 PM UTC and Jan 23, 2021 05:00 PM UTC. To verify the policy update, you can try to create network resources (Load balancer, Network interface and Public IP address) in the same resource group and Subnet where your cluster is in. Failure to apply this update may result in your clusters becoming unhealthy and unusable. You can also drop and recreate your cluster before Jan 25th, 2021 to prevent the cluster from becoming unhealthy and unusable. The HDInsight service sends another notification if we failed to apply the update to your clusters.
 
 Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - GCSCertRotationR3PlanPatch (Apply critical updates to your HDInsight clusters)](../hdinsight/hdinsight-hadoop-provision-linux-clusters.md).
 
 ### Action required: Migrate your A8–A11 HDInsight cluster before 1 March 2021
 
-You're receiving this notice because you have one or more active A8, A9, A10 or A11 HDInsight cluster. The A8-A11 virtual machines (VMs) will be retired in all regions on 1 March 2021. After that date, all clusters using A8-A11 will be deallocated. Migrate your affected clusters to another HDInsight supported VM (https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/hdinsight/) before that date. For more details, see 'Learn More' link or contact us at [email protected]
+You're receiving this notice because you have one or more active A8, A9, A10 or A11 HDInsight cluster. The A8-A11 virtual machines (VMs) are retired in all regions on 1 March 2021. After that date, all clusters using A8-A11 are deallocated. Migrate your affected clusters to another HDInsight supported VM (https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/hdinsight/) before that date. For more details, see 'Learn More' link or contact us at [email protected]
 
 Learn more about [HDInsight cluster - VM Deprecation (Action required: Migrate your A8–A11 HDInsight cluster before 1 March 2021)](https://azure.microsoft.com/updates/a8-a11-azure-virtual-machine-sizes-will-be-retired-on-march-1-2021/).
 
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ Learn more about [Media Service - AccountQuotaLimit (Increase Media Services quo
 
 ### Upgrade your SKU or add more instances to ensure fault tolerance
 
-Deploying two or more medium or large sized instances will ensure business continuity during outages caused by planned or unplanned maintenance.
+Deploying two or more medium or large sized instances ensures business continuity during outages caused by planned or unplanned maintenance.
 
 Learn more about [Application gateway - AppGateway (Upgrade your SKU or add more instances to ensure fault tolerance)](https://aka.ms/aa_gatewayrec_learnmore).
 
@@ -349,13 +349,13 @@ Learn more about [Traffic Manager profile - GeneralProfile (Add at least one mor
 
 ### Add an endpoint configured to "All (World)"
 
-For geographic routing, traffic is routed to endpoints based on defined regions. When a region fails, there is no pre-defined failover. Having an endpoint where the Regional Grouping is configured to "All (World)" for geographic profiles will avoid traffic black holing and guarantee service remains available.
+For geographic routing, traffic is routed to endpoints based on defined regions. When a region fails, there is no pre-defined failover. Having an endpoint where the Regional Grouping is configured to "All (World)" for geographic profiles avoids traffic black holing and guarantee service remains available.
 
 Learn more about [Traffic Manager profile - GeographicProfile (Add an endpoint configured to \""All (World)\"")](https://aka.ms/Rf7vc5).
 
 ### Add or move one endpoint to another Azure region
 
-All endpoints associated to this proximity profile are in the same region. Users from other regions may experience long latency when attempting to connect. Adding or moving an endpoint to another region will improve overall performance for proximity routing and provide better availability in case all endpoints in one region fail.
+All endpoints associated to this proximity profile are in the same region. Users from other regions may experience long latency when attempting to connect. Adding or moving an endpoint to another region improves overall performance for proximity routing and provide better availability in case all endpoints in one region fail.
 
 Learn more about [Traffic Manager profile - ProximityProfile (Add or move one endpoint to another Azure region)](https://aka.ms/Ldkkdb).
 
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ Learn more about [Virtual network - natGateway (Use NAT gateway for outbound con
 
 ### Enable Active-Active gateways for redundancy
 
-In active-active configuration, both instances of the VPN gateway will establish S2S VPN tunnels to your on-premises VPN device. When a planned maintenance or unplanned event happens to one gateway instance, traffic will be switched over to the other active IPsec tunnel automatically.
+In active-active configuration, both instances of the VPN gateway establish S2S VPN tunnels to your on-premises VPN device. When a planned maintenance or unplanned event happens to one gateway instance, traffic is switched over to the other active IPsec tunnel automatically.
 
 Learn more about [Virtual network gateway - VNetGatewayActiveActive (Enable Active-Active gateways for redundancy)](https://aka.ms/aa_vpnha_learnmore).
 
@@ -428,19 +428,19 @@ Learn more about [Recovery Services vault - Enable CRR (Enable Cross Region Rest
 
 ### You are close to exceeding storage quota of 2GB. Create a Standard search service.
 
-You are close to exceeding storage quota of 2GB. Create a Standard search service. Indexing operations will stop working when storage quota is exceeded.
+You are close to exceeding storage quota of 2GB. Create a Standard search service. Indexing operations stops working when storage quota is exceeded.
 
 Learn more about [Search service - BasicServiceStorageQuota90percent (You are close to exceeding storage quota of 2GB. Create a Standard search service.)](https://aka.ms/azs/search-limits-quotas-capacity).
 
 ### You are close to exceeding storage quota of 50MB. Create a Basic or Standard search service.
 
-You are close to exceeding storage quota of 50MB. Create a Basic or Standard search service. Indexing operations will stop working when storage quota is exceeded.
+You are close to exceeding storage quota of 50MB. Create a Basic or Standard search service. Indexing operations stops working when storage quota is exceeded.
 
 Learn more about [Search service - FreeServiceStorageQuota90percent (You are close to exceeding storage quota of 50MB. Create a Basic or Standard search service.)](https://aka.ms/azs/search-limits-quotas-capacity).
 
 ### You are close to exceeding your available storage quota. Add additional partitions if you need more storage.
 
-You are close to exceeding your available storage quota. Add additional partitions if you need more storage. After exceeding storage quota, you can still query, but indexing operations will no longer work.
+You are close to exceeding your available storage quota. Add additional partitions if you need more storage. After exceeding storage quota, you can still query, but indexing operations no longer work.
 
 Learn more about [Search service - StandardServiceStorageQuota90percent (You are close to exceeding your available storage quota. Add additional partitions if you need more storage.)](https://aka.ms/azs/search-limits-quotas-capacity).