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 title: Azure API Management - API version retirements (September 2023) | Microsoft Docs
-description: Azure API Management is retiring all API versions prior to 2021-08-01. If you use one of these API versions, you must update your tools, scripts, or programs to use the latest versions.
+description: The Azure API Management service is retiring all API versions prior to 2021-08-01. If you use one of these API versions, you must update your tools, scripts, or programs to use the latest versions.
 services: api-management
 documentationcenter: ''
-author: adrianhall
+author: dlepow
 ms.service: api-management
 ms.topic: reference
 ms.date: 07/25/2022
-ms.author: adhal
+ms.author: danlep
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 # API version retirements (September 2023)
 
 Azure API Management uses Azure Resource Manager (ARM) to configure your API Management instances. The API version is embedded in your use of templates that describe your infrastructure, tools that are used to configure the service, and programs that you write to manage your Azure API Management services. 
 
-On 30 September 2023, all API versions prior to **2021-08-01** will be retired and API calls using those API versions will fail. This means you'll no longer be able to create or manage your API Management services using your existing templates, tools, scripts, and programs until they've been updated. Data operations (such as accessing the APIs or Products configured on Azure API Management) will be unaffected by this update, including after 30 September 2023. 
+On 30 September 2023, all API versions for the Azure API Management service prior to **2021-08-01** will be retired and API calls using those API versions will fail. This means you'll no longer be able to create or manage your API Management services using your existing templates, tools, scripts, and programs until they've been updated. Data operations (such as accessing the APIs or Products configured on Azure API Management) will be unaffected by this update, including after 30 September 2023. 
 
 From now through 30 September 2023, you can continue to use the templates, tools, and programs without impact. You can transition to API version 2021-08-01 or later at any point prior to 30 September 2023. 
 
 ## Is my service affected by this?
 
-While your service isn't* affected by this change, any tool, script, or program that uses the Azure Resource Manager (such as the Azure CLI, Azure PowerShell, Azure API Management DevOps Resource Kit, or Terraform) is affected by this change. You'll be unable to run those tools successfully unless you update the tools.
+While your service isn't affected by this change, any tool, script, or program that uses the Azure Resource Manager (such as the Azure CLI, Azure PowerShell, Azure API Management DevOps Resource Kit, or Terraform) to interact with the API Management service is affected by this change. You'll be unable to run those tools successfully unless you update the tools.
 
 ## What is the deadline for the change?