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Author: stevenmatthew

includes/storage-import-export-shipping-prerequisites.md

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 Have a valid carrier account and a tracking number for the order:
 - You must use a carrier in the **Carrier names** list on the **Shipping** tab for your order. If you don't have a carrier account, contact the carrier to create one.
-- The carrier account must be valid, should have a balance, and must have return shipping capabilities. Microsoft will ship back all storage media using the selected carrier.<!--If I remove "back," same prerequisites can be shared with imports and exports. May not even need to do that.-->
+- The carrier account must be valid, should have a balance, and must have return shipping capabilities. Microsoft uses the selected carrier to return all storage media. <!--If I remove "back," same prerequisites can be shared with imports and exports. May not even need to do that.-->
 - Generate a tracking number for the import/export job in the carrier account. Every job should have a separate tracking number. Multiple jobs with the same tracking number aren't supported.

includes/storage-import-export-verify-data-copy.md

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-Track the job to completion. Then make sure that your data has been uploaded to Azure successfully. 
+Track the job to completion, then verify that the upload was successful and all data is present. 
 
 Review the **Data copy details** of the completed job to locate the logs for each drive included in the job:
 

includes/storage-import-export-view-jobs-and-drives.md

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-1. Log on to [https://portal.azure.com/](https://portal.azure.com/).
+1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 2. Search for **azure data box**.
 
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     [ ![Screenshot of Data Box resources in the Azure portal filtered to Import Export jobs. The job name, transfer type, status, and model are highlighted.](./media/storage-import-export-view-jobs-and-drives/jobs-list.png) ](./media/storage-import-export-view-jobs-and-drives/jobs-list.png#lightbox)
 
-4. Select a job name to view job details.
+4. View job details by selecting a job name.
 
-   You'll see the **Current order status** and also the **Data copy details** for each drive.
+   The selected job's **Current order status** and **Data copy details** are displayed for each drive.
 
    * If you have access to the storage account, you can select a **Copy log path** or **Verbose log path** to view the log.