Merge pull request #108346 from stevemunk/how-to-secure-daemon-app

How to secure daemon app: Improve grammar.

Author: Jak-MS

articles/azure-maps/how-to-secure-daemon-app.md

@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ Some managed identity benefits are:
 
 ### Host a daemon on non-Azure resources
 
-When running on a non-Azure environment, managed identities aren't available. As such, you must configure a service principal through an Azure AD application registration for the daemon application.
+Managed identities are only available when running on an Azure environment. As such, you must configure a service principal through an Azure AD application registration for the daemon application.
 
 #### Create new application registration
 
-If you've already created your application registration, go to [Assign delegated API permissions](#assign-delegated-api-permissions).
+If you have already created your application registration, go to [Assign delegated API permissions](#assign-delegated-api-permissions).
 
 To create a new application registration:
 
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ To create a client secret:
 
    :::image type="content" border="true" source="./media/how-to-manage-authentication/new-client-secret-add.png" alt-text="Add new client secret.":::
 
-5. Copy the secret and store it securely in a service such as Azure Key Vault. Also, We'll use the secret in the [Request token with Managed Identity](#request-a-token-with-managed-identity) section of this article.
+5. Copy the secret and store it securely in a service such as Azure Key Vault. Also, use the secret in the [Request token with Managed Identity](#request-a-token-with-managed-identity) section of this article.
 
       :::image type="content" border="true" source="./media/how-to-manage-authentication/copy-client-secret.png" alt-text="Copy client secret.":::
 
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ To acquire the access token:
 
       :::image type="content" border="true" source="./media/how-to-manage-authentication/get-token-params.png" alt-text="Copy token parameters.":::
 
-We'll use the [Postman](https://www.postman.com/) application to create the token request, but you can use a different API development environment.
+This article uses the [Postman](https://www.postman.com/) application to create the token request, but you can use a different API development environment.
 
 1. In the Postman app, select **New**.