Title and Acrolinx updates

Author: rolyon

articles/active-directory/roles/protected-actions-add.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Add, remove, or test protected actions in Azure AD (preview)
-description: Learn how to add, remove, or test protected actions in Azure Active Directory.
+title: Add, test, or remove protected actions in Azure AD (preview)
+description: Learn how to add, test, or remove protected actions in Azure Active Directory.
 services: active-directory
 author: rolyon
 manager: amycolannino
@@ -12,13 +12,13 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 04/05/2022
 ---
 
-# Add, remove, or test protected actions in Azure AD (preview)
+# Add, test, or remove protected actions in Azure AD (preview)
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Protected actions are currently in PREVIEW.
 > See the [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/) for legal terms that apply to Azure features that are in beta, preview, or otherwise not yet released into general availability.
 
-[Protected actions](./protected-actions-overview.md) in Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) are permissions that have been assigned Conditional Access polices that are enforced when a user attempts to perform an action. This article describes how to add, remove, and test protected actions.
+[Protected actions](./protected-actions-overview.md) in Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) are permissions that have been assigned Conditional Access polices that are enforced when a user attempts to perform an action. This article describes how to add, test, or remove protected actions.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ To add protection actions, assign a Conditional Access policy to one or more per
 
     If no values are available, [configure a Conditional Access authentication context](../conditional-access/concept-conditional-access-cloud-apps.md#authentication-context) for your tenant.
 
-1. Select **Select permissions** and select the permission that will be protected by Conditional Access.
+1. Select **Select permissions** and select the permissions to protect with Conditional Access.
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-select.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Add protected actions page with permissions selected." lightbox="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-select.png":::
 
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ To remove protection actions, unassign Conditional Access policy requirements fr
 
 1. Find and select the permission Conditional Access policy to unassign.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-remove.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Protected actions page with permissions selected to remove." lightbox="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-remove.png":::
+    :::image type="content" source="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-remove.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Protected actions page with permission selected to remove." lightbox="media/protected-actions-add/permissions-remove.png":::
 
 1. On the toolbar, select **Remove**.
 

articles/active-directory/roles/protected-actions-overview.md

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ For this preview, Conditional Access policies can be applied to limited set of p
 - Custom rules that define network locations
 - Protected action management
 
-Here is the initial set of permissions:
+Here's the initial set of permissions:
 
 > [!div class="mx-tableFixed"]
 > | Permission | Description |
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Here is the initial set of permissions:
 
 ## How do protected actions compare with Privileged Identity Management role activation?
 
-[Privileged Identity Management role activation](../privileged-identity-management/pim-how-to-change-default-settings.md) can also be assigned Conditional Access policies. This allows for policy enforcement only when a user activates a role, providing the most comprehensive protection. Protected actions are enforced only when a user takes an action that requires permissions with Conditional Access policy assigned to it. This allows for high impact permissions to be protected, independent of a user role. Privileged Identity Management role activation and protected actions can be used together, for the strongest coverage.
+[Privileged Identity Management role activation](../privileged-identity-management/pim-how-to-change-default-settings.md) can also be assigned Conditional Access policies. This capability allows for policy enforcement only when a user activates a role, providing the most comprehensive protection. Protected actions are enforced only when a user takes an action that requires permissions with Conditional Access policy assigned to it. Protected actions allows for high impact permissions to be protected, independent of a user role. Privileged Identity Management role activation and protected actions can be used together, for the strongest coverage.
 
 ## Steps to use protected actions
 
@@ -119,4 +119,4 @@ Here are some best practices for using protected actions.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- [Add, remove, or test protected actions in Azure AD](./protected-actions-add.md)
+- [Add, test, or remove protected actions in Azure AD](./protected-actions-add.md)