Update tutorial-connected-registry-upgrade.md

Updated section contents for upgrade and rollback.

Author: getk12

articles/container-registry/tutorial-connected-registry-upgrade.md

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-title: " Upgrade and Rollback Connected registry with Azure arc"
-description: "Upgrade and Roll back the Connected registry extension with Azure Arc for secure the extension deployment."
+title: " Upgrade and Rollback of the connected registry Arc extension version"
+description: "Upgrade and roll back the connected registry Arc extension version."
 author: tejaswikolli-web
 ms.author: tejaswikolli
 ms.service: azure-container-registry
 ms.topic: tutorial  #Don't change.
 ms.date: 06/17/2024
 
-#customer intent: Learn how to upgrade and rollback the Connected registry extension with Azure Arc to secure the extension deployment.
+#customer intent: Learn how to upgrade and rollback the connected registry Arc extension.
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-# Upgrade and Rollback with Connected registry with Azure arc
+# Upgrade and Rollback the connected registry extension version
 
-In this tutorial, you learn how to upgrade the Connected registry extension with Azure Arc. The upgrade process includes securing the extension deployment with HTTPS, Transport Layer Security (TLS) encryption, and upgrades/rollbacks.
+In this tutorial, you learn how to upgrade and rollback the connected registry extension version. 
 
 You learn how to:
 
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ You learn how to:
 
 To complete this tutorial, you need the following resources:
 
-* Follow the [quickstart][quickstart] to create an Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster. Deploying with Secure-by-default settings imply the following configuration is being used: HTTPS, Read Only, Trust Distribution, Cert Manager service. 
+* Follow the [quickstart][quickstart] as needed. 
 
-## Deploy the Connected registry Arc extension with auto upgrade
+## Deploy the connected registry extension with auto upgrade enabled
 
 1. Follow the [quickstart][quickstart] to edit the [az-k8s-extension-create][az-k8s-extension-create] command and include the `--auto-upgrade-minor-version true` parameter. This parameter automatically upgrades the extension to the latest version whenever a new version is available. 
 
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ To complete this tutorial, you need the following resources:
     --auto-upgrade-minor-version true
     ```
 
-## Deploy the Connected registry Arc extension with auto rollback
+## Deploy the connected registry extension with auto rollback enabled
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> When a customer pins to a specific version, the extension does not auto-rollback. Auto-rollback will only occur if the--auto-upgrade-minor-version is set to true.
+> When a customer pins to a specific version, the extension does not auto-rollback. Auto-rollback will only occur if the--auto-upgrade-minor-version flag is set to true.
 
 1. Follow the [quickstart][quickstart] to edit the [az k8s-extension update] command and add --version with your desired version. This example uses version 0.6.0. This parameter updates the extension version to the desired pinned version. 
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ To complete this tutorial, you need the following resources:
     --version 0.6.0 
     ```
 
-## Deploy the Connected registry arc extension with manual upgrade
+## Deploy the connected registry extension using manual upgrade steps
 
 1. Follow the [quickstart][quickstart] to edit the [az-k8s-extension-update][az-k8s-extension-update] command and add--version with your desired version. This example uses version 0.6.1. This parameter upgrades the extension version to 0.6.1. 
 
@@ -88,4 +88,4 @@ In this tutorial, you learned how to upgrade the Connected registry extension wi
 
 [quickstart]: quickstart-connected-registry-arc-cli.md
 [az-k8s-extension-create]: /cli/azure/k8s-extension#az-k8s-extension-create
-[az-k8s-extension-update]: /cli/azure/k8s-extension#az-k8s-extension-update
+[az-k8s-extension-update]: /cli/azure/k8s-extension#az-k8s-extension-update