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Author: RoseHJM

articles/deployment-environments/overview-what-is-azure-deployment-environments.md

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 Azure Deployment Environments empowers development teams to quickly and easily spin up app infrastructure with project-based templates that establish consistency and best practices while maximizing security. This on-demand access to secure environments accelerates the stages of the software development lifecycle in a compliant and cost-efficient way.
 
-A [*deployment environment*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environments) is a collection of Azure infrastructure resources defined in a template called an [*environment definition*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environment-definitions). Developers can deploy infrastructure defined in these templates in subscriptions where they have access, and build their applications on the infrastructure. For example, you can define a deployment environment that includes a web app, a database, and a storage account. Your web developer can begin coding the web app without worrying about the underlying infrastructure.
+A [*deployment environment*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environments) is a collection of Azure infrastructure resources defined in a template called an [*environment definition*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environment-definitions). Developers can deploy infrastructure defined in the templates in subscriptions where they have access, and build their applications on the infrastructure. For example, you can define a deployment environment that includes a web app, a database, and a storage account. Your web developer can begin coding the web app without worrying about the underlying infrastructure.
 
-Platform engineers can create and manage the environment definitions. To specify which environment definitions are available to developers platform engineers can associate environment definitions with projects, and assign permissions to developers. They can also apply Azure governance to the subscriptions based on the type of environment, such as sandbox, testing, staging, or production.
+Platform engineers can create and manage environment definitions. To specify which environment definitions are available to developers, platform engineers can associate environment definitions with projects, and assign permissions to developers. They can also apply Azure governance based on the type of environment, such as sandbox, testing, staging, or production.
 
-The following diagram shows an overview of Azure Deployment Environments capabilities. Platform engineers define infrastructure templates and configure subscriptions, identity, and permissions. Developers create environments based on these templates, and build and deploy applications on the infrastructure. Environments can support different scenarios, like on-demand environments, sandbox environments for testing, and CI/CD pipelines for continuous integration and continuous deployment.
+The following diagram shows an overview of Azure Deployment Environments capabilities. Platform engineers define infrastructure templates and configure subscriptions, identity, and permissions. Developers create environments based on the templates, and build and deploy applications on the infrastructure. Environments can support different scenarios, like on-demand environments, sandbox environments for testing, and CI/CD pipelines for continuous integration and continuous deployment.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/overview-what-is-azure-deployment-environments/azure-deployment-environments-scenarios-sml.png" lightbox="./media/overview-what-is-azure-deployment-environments/azure-deployment-environments-scenarios.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows the Azure Deployment Environments scenario flow.":::