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Author: stevenmatthew

articles/databox/data-box-v2-overview.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.author: shaas
 ms.custom: references_regions
 #Customer intent: As an IT admin, I need to understand what Data Box is and how it works so I can use it to import on-premises data into Azure or export data from Azure.
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-# What is Azure Data Box?
+# What is Azure Data Box V2?
 
 The Microsoft Azure Data Box cloud solution lets you send terabytes of data into and out of Azure in a quick, inexpensive, and reliable way. The secure data transfer is accelerated by shipping you a proprietary Data Box storage device. These storage devices come in two variations having a maximum usable storage capacity of 120 TB and 525 TB respectively. These are transported to your data center through a regional carrier. These devices have a rugged casing to protect and secure data during the transit. 
 

articles/databox/data-box-v2-quickstart-export.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.custom: mode-other
 #Customer intent: As an IT admin, I need to quickly deploy Data Box so as to import data into Azure.
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-# Quickstart: Get started with Azure Data Box to export data from Azure
+# Quickstart: Get started with Azure Data Box V2 to export data from Azure
 
 This quickstart describes how to export data out of Azure into your location using the Azure portal. The steps include how to cable, configure, and copy data from Azure. The quickstart is performed in the Azure portal and on the local web UI of the device.
 

articles/databox/data-box-v2-quickstart-import.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Quickstart for Microsoft Azure Data Box Microsoft Docs
-description: In this quickstart, learn how to deploy Azure Data Box V2 using the Azure portal for an import order. Configure Azure Data Box next gen device and copy data to upload to Azure.
+description: In this quickstart, learn how to deploy Azure Data Box V2 using the Azure portal for an import order. Configure Azure Data Box next-gen device and copy data to upload to Azure.
 services: databox
 author: stevenmatthew
 ms.service: azure-databox
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@ ms.custom: mode-other
 #Customer intent: As an IT admin, I need to quickly deploy Data Box so as to import data into Azure.
 ---
 
-# Get started with Azure Data Box to import data into Azure
+# Get started with Azure Data Box V2
 
 ::: zone target="docs"
 
 This quickstart describes how to deploy the Azure Data Box using the Azure portal for an import order. The steps include how to cable, configure, and copy data to Data Box so that it uploads to Azure. The quickstart steps are performed in the Azure portal and on the local web UI of the device.
 
-For detailed step-by-step deployment and tracking instructions, go to [Tutorial: Order Azure Data Box](data-box-deploy-ordered.md)
+For detailed step-by-step deployment and tracking instructions, refer to the [Order Data Box](data-box-deploy-ordered.md) tutorial.
 
 ::: zone-end 
 
@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@ Before you begin:
     - Microsoft Azure Sponsorship. Learn more about [Azure sponsorship program](https://azure.microsoft.com/offers/ms-azr-0036p/). 
 
 - Ensure that you have owner or contributor access to the subscription to create a Data Box order.
-- You have [registered the Microsoft.DataBox resource provider](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types#register-resource-provider) against this subscription in the Azure portal. 
+- Register the [Microsoft.DataBox resource provider](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types#register-resource-provider) against this subscription in the Azure portal. 
 - Review the [safety guidelines for your Data Box](data-box-safety.md).
 - You have a host computer that has the data that you want to copy over to Data Box. Your host computer must
     - Run a [Supported operating system](data-box-system-requirements.md).
-    - Be connected to high-speed network. We recommend that you have at least one 100-GbE connection. If a 100-GbE connection isn't available,  10-GbE or 1-GbE data link can be used but the copy speeds are impacted. 
+    - Be connected to high-speed network. We recommend that you have at least one 100-GbE connection. If a 100-GbE connection isn't available, you can use a 10-GbE or 1-GbE data link, though copy speeds are impacted.
 - You must have access to a flat surface where you can place the Data Box. If you want to place the device on a standard rack shelf, you need a 7U slot in your datacenter rack. You can place the device flat or upright in the rack.
-- You have procured the following cables to connect your Data Box to the host computer. These are recommended, however, the next generation devices will work with 10G cables too.
+- You have the following cables to connect your Data Box to the host computer. These cables are recommended, however, the next generation devices will work with 10G cables too.
     - 2 x 10G-BaseT RJ-45 cables (CAT-5e or CAT6)
     - 2 x 100-GbE QSFP28 passive direct attached cable (use with DATA 1, DATA 2 network interfaces)  
 
@@ -55,16 +55,16 @@ Before you begin:
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-Before you begin, make sure that you've:
+Before you begin, make sure that:
 
-1. Completed the [Tutorial: Order Azure Data Box](data-box-deploy-ordered.md).
-2. Received your Data Box and the order status in the portal is **Delivered**. 
-3. Reviewed the [Data Box safety guidelines](data-box-safety.md).
-4. Received one grounded power cord to use with your 120 TB or 525 TB storage device.
-5. Access to a host computer that has the data that you want to copy over to Data Box. Your host computer must
+1. You complete the [Order Azure Data Box](data-box-deploy-ordered.md) tutorial.
+2. Your Data Box device is unpacked and the order status in the portal is **Delivered**. 
+3. You reviewed the [Data Box safety guidelines](data-box-safety.md).
+4. You received one grounded power cord to use with your 120 TB or 525-TB storage device.
+5. You have access to a host computer that has the data that you want to copy over to Data Box. Your host computer must
     - Run a [Supported operating system](data-box-system-requirements.md).
-    - Be connected to high-speed network. We recommend that you have at least one 100-GbE connection. If a 100-GbE connection isn't available,  10-GbE or 1-GbE data link can be used but the copy speeds are impacted. 
-6. Access to a flat surface to place the Data Box. To place the device flat or upright in a standard rack shelf, you need a 7U slot in your rack.
+    - Be connected to high-speed network. We recommend that you have at least one 100-GbE connection. If a 100-GbE or 10-GbE connection isn't available, a 1-GbE data link is sufficient, though copy speeds are impacted. 
+6. You have access to a flat surface to place the Data Box. To place the device flat or upright in a standard rack shelf, you need a 7U slot in your rack.
 
 ::: zone-end
 
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ This step takes roughly 5 minutes.
 
 1. Create a new Azure Data Box resource in Azure portal.
 2. Select an existing subscription enabled for this service and choose transfer type as **Import**. Provide the **Source country** where the data resides and **Azure destination region** for the data transfer.
-3. Select **Data Box**. The maximum usable capacity is 120 TB or 525TB and you can create multiple orders for larger data sizes.
+3. Select **Data Box**. The maximum usable capacity is 120 TB or 525 TB and you can create multiple orders for larger data sizes.
 4. Enter the order details and shipping information. If the service is available in your region, provide notification email addresses, review the summary, and then create the order.
 
 Once the order is created, the device is prepared for shipment.
@@ -91,24 +91,24 @@ Once the order is created, the device is prepared for shipment.
 
 This step takes roughly 10 minutes.
 
-When you receive the Data Box, do the following steps to cable, connect to and turn on the device. This step takes about 10 minutes.
+When you receive the Data Box, perform the following steps to cable, connect, and turn on the device. This step requires approximately 10 minutes.
 
-1. If there is any evidence that the device is tampered with or damaged, do not proceed. Contact Microsoft Support to ship you a replacement device.
-2. Before you cable your device, ensure that you have the following cables:
+1. Don't proceed if evidence of tampering or damage is observed. Contact Microsoft Support to request a replacement device.
+2. Before cabling your device, ensure that you have the following cables:
 
    - 1 x power cable (included).
    - 2 x 10G-BaseT RJ-45 cables (CAT-5e or CAT6) (not included).
    - 2 x 100-GbE QSFP28 passive direct attached cable (not included). 
 
 3. Remove and place the device on a flat surface. 
 
-4. Cable the device as shown below.  
+4. Cable the device as described in the following steps.
 
     ![Data Box device backplane cabled](media/data-box-v2-quickstart-import/data-box-cabled-dhcp.png)  
 
     1. Connect the power cable to the device.
     2. Use the RJ-45 CAT 6 network cable to connect your host computer to the management port (MGMT) on the device. 
-    3. Use the QFSP28 copper cable to connect at least one 100 Gbps (preferred over 10 or 1 Gbps) network interface, DATA 1 or DATA 2 for data. 
+    3. Use the QFSP28 copper cable to connect at least one 100 Gbps (preferred over 10 Gbps or 1 Gbps) network interface, DATA 1 or DATA 2 for data. 
     4. Turn on the device. The power button is on the front panel of the device.
 
 
@@ -117,9 +117,9 @@ When you receive the Data Box, do the following steps to cable, connect to and t
 This step takes about 5-7 minutes to complete.
 
 1. To get the device password, go to **General > Device details** in the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
-2. Assign a static IP address of 192.168.100.5 and subnet 255.255.255.0 to the Ethernet adapter on the computer you are using to connect to Data Box. Access the local web UI of the device at `https://192.168.100.10`. The connection could take up to 5 minutes after you turned on the device. 
+2. Assign a static IP address of 192.168.100.5 and subnet 255.255.255.0 to the Ethernet adapter on the computer you're using to connect to Data Box. Access the local web UI of the device at `https://192.168.100.10`. The connection could take up to 5 minutes after you turned on the device. 
 3. Sign in using the password from the Azure portal. You see an error indicating a problem with the website’s security certificate. Follow the browser-specific instructions to proceed to the web page.
-4. By default, the network settings for the 100 Gbps data interface (or 1 Gbps) are configured as DHCP. If needed, you can configure this interface as static and provide an IP address. 
+4. By default, the network settings for the 100-Gbps data interface (or 1 Gbps) are configured as DHCP. If needed, you can configure this interface as static and provide an IP address. 
 
 ## Copy data
 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ The time to complete this operation depends upon your data size and network spee
 This operation takes about 10-15 minutes to complete.
 
 1. Go to **Prepare to ship** page in the local web UI and start the ship preparation. 
-2. After prepare to ship completes successfully with no critical errors, download and print the return shipping label.
+2. After the **Prepare to ship** process completes successfully with no critical errors, download and print the return shipping label.
 3. Turn off the device from the local web UI. Remove the cables from the device. 
 4. Pack the device in the original box and secure firmly. Paste the return shipping label on the box and remove any previous labels and barcode stickers from the external packaging.
 5. Follow local return shipping instructions and ship the device back to Microsoft. 
@@ -147,19 +147,19 @@ The time to complete this operation depends upon your data size.
 2. Azure Data Box service notifies you that the data copy is complete via the Azure portal. 
 
     1. Check error logs for any failures and take appropriate actions.
-    2. Verify that your data is in the storage account(s) before you delete it from the source.
+    2. Verify that your data is in the storage accounts before you delete it from the source.
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
 This step takes 2-3 minutes to complete.
 
-- You can cancel the Data Box order in the Azure portal before the order is processed. Once the order is processed, the order cannot be canceled. The order progresses until it reaches the completed stage. To cancel the order, go to **Overview** and click **Cancel** from the command bar.
+- You can cancel the Data Box order in the Azure portal before the order is processed. Once the order is processed, the order can't be canceled. The order progresses until it reaches the completed stage. To cancel the order, go to **Overview** and select **Cancel** from the command bar.
 
-- You can delete the order once the status shows as **Completed** or **Canceled** in the Azure portal. To delete the order, go to **Overview** and click **Delete** from the command bar.
+- You can delete the order once the status shows as **Completed** or **Canceled** in the Azure portal. To delete the order, go to **Overview** and select **Delete** from the command bar.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this quickstart, you’ve deployed an Azure Data Box to help import your data into Azure. To learn more about Azure Data Box management, advance to the following tutorial: 
+In this quickstart, you deployed an Azure Data Box to help import your data into Azure. To learn more about Azure Data Box management, advance to the following tutorial: 
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Use the Azure portal to administer Data Box](data-box-portal-admin.md)