Merge pull request #283484 from paulth1/synapse-workspace-quickstarts

[AQ] edit pass: Synapse workspace quickstarts

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/synapse-analytics/quickstart-create-workspace-cli.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: 'Quickstart: Create a Synapse workspace using Azure CLI'
-description: Create an Azure Synapse workspace using Azure CLI by following the steps in this guide.
+title: 'Quickstart: Create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace using Azure CLI'
+description: Create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace using the Azure CLI by following the steps in this article.
 author: WilliamDAssafMSFT
 ms.service: azure-synapse-analytics
 ms.topic: quickstart
@@ -11,46 +11,48 @@ ms.reviewer: whhender
 ms.custom: mode-api, devx-track-azurecli
 ---
 
-# Quickstart: Create an Azure synapse workspace with Azure CLI
+# Quickstart: Create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace with the Azure CLI
 
 The Azure CLI is Azure's command-line experience for managing Azure resources. You can use it in your browser with Azure Cloud Shell. You can also install it on macOS, Linux, or Windows and run it from the command line.
 
-In this quickstart, you learn to create a Synapse workspace by using the Azure CLI.
+In this quickstart, you learn how to create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace by using the Azure CLI.
 
 [!INCLUDE [quickstarts-free-trial-note](~/reusable-content/ce-skilling/azure/includes/quickstarts-free-trial-note.md)]
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- Download and install [jq](https://stedolan.github.io/jq/download/), a lightweight and flexible command-line JSON processor
-- [Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 storage account](../storage/common/storage-account-create.md)
+- Download and install [jq](https://stedolan.github.io/jq/download/), a lightweight and flexible command-line JSON processor.
+- [Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 storage account](../storage/common/storage-account-create.md).
 
     > [!IMPORTANT]
-    > The Azure Synapse workspace needs to be able to read and write to the selected ADLS Gen2 account. In addition, for any storage account that you link as the primary storage account, you must have enabled **hierarchical namespace**  at the creation of the storage account, as described on the [Create a Storage Account](../storage/common/storage-account-create.md?tabs=azure-portal#create-a-storage-account) page. 
+    > An Azure Synapse Analytics workspace needs to be able to read and write to the selected Data Lake Storage Gen2 account. In addition, for any storage account that you link as the primary storage account, you must have enabled **hierarchical namespace** at the creation of the storage account, as described in [Create a storage account](../storage/common/storage-account-create.md?tabs=azure-portal#create-a-storage-account).
 
 [!INCLUDE [azure-cli-prepare-your-environment.md](~/reusable-content/azure-cli/azure-cli-prepare-your-environment-no-header.md)]
 
-## Create an Azure Synapse workspace using the Azure CLI
+## Create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace by using the Azure CLI
 
-1. Define necessary environment variables to create resources for Azure Synapse workspace.
+1. Define necessary environment variables to create resources for an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace.
 
-    | Environment Variable Name | Description |
+    | Environment Variable name | Description |
     |---|---|---|
-    |StorageAccountName| Name for your existing ADLS Gen2 storage account.|
-    |StorageAccountResourceGroup| Name of your existing ADLS Gen2 storage account resource group. |
+    |StorageAccountName| Name for your existing Data Lake Storage Gen2 storage account.|
+    |StorageAccountResourceGroup| Name of your existing Data Lake Storage Gen2 storage account resource group. |
     |FileShareName| Name of your existing storage file system.|
-    |SynapseResourceGroup| Choose a new name for your Azure Synapse resource group. |
+    |SynapseResourceGroup| Choose a new name for your Azure Synapse Analytics resource group. |
     |Region| Choose one of the [Azure regions](https://azure.microsoft.com/global-infrastructure/geographies/#overview). |
-    |SynapseWorkspaceName| Choose a unique name for your new Azure Synapse Workspace. |
+    |SynapseWorkspaceName| Choose a unique name for your new Azure Synapse Analytics workspace. |
     |SqlUser| Choose a value for a new username.|
     |SqlPassword| Choose a secure password.|
     |||
 
-1. Create a resource group as a container for your Azure Synapse workspace:
+1. Create a resource group as a container for your Azure Synapse Analytics workspace:
+
     ```azurecli
     az group create --name $SynapseResourceGroup --location $Region
     ```
 
-1. Create an Azure Synapse Workspace:
+1. Create an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace:
+
     ```azurecli
     az synapse workspace create \
       --name $SynapseWorkspaceName \
@@ -62,14 +64,15 @@ In this quickstart, you learn to create a Synapse workspace by using the Azure C
       --location $Region
     ```
 
-1. Get Web and Dev URL for Azure Synapse Workspace:
+1. Get the web and dev URLs for the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace:
+
     ```azurecli
     WorkspaceWeb=$(az synapse workspace show --name $SynapseWorkspaceName --resource-group $SynapseResourceGroup | jq -r '.connectivityEndpoints | .web')
 
     WorkspaceDev=$(az synapse workspace show --name $SynapseWorkspaceName --resource-group $SynapseResourceGroup | jq -r '.connectivityEndpoints | .dev')
     ```
 
-1. Create a Firewall Rule to allow your access to Azure Synapse Workspace from your machine:
+1. Create a firewall rule to allow access to your Azure Synapse Analytics workspace from your machine:
 
     ```azurecli
     ClientIP=$(curl -sb -H "Accept: application/json" "$WorkspaceDev" | jq -r '.message')
@@ -79,33 +82,35 @@ In this quickstart, you learn to create a Synapse workspace by using the Azure C
     az synapse workspace firewall-rule create --end-ip-address $ClientIP --start-ip-address $ClientIP --name "Allow Client IP" --resource-group $SynapseResourceGroup --workspace-name $SynapseWorkspaceName
     ```
 
-1. Open the Azure Synapse Workspace Web URL address stored in environment variable `WorkspaceWeb` to access your workspace:
+1. Open the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace web URL address stored in the environment variable `WorkspaceWeb` to access your workspace:
 
     ```azurecli
     echo "Open your Azure Synapse Workspace Web URL in the browser: $WorkspaceWeb"
     ```
     
-    [ ![Azure Synapse workspace web](media/quickstart-create-synapse-workspace-cli/create-workspace-cli-1.png) ](media/quickstart-create-synapse-workspace-cli/create-workspace-cli-1.png#lightbox)
+    :::image type="content" source="media/quickstart-create-synapse-workspace-cli/create-workspace-cli-1.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace web." lightbox="media/quickstart-create-synapse-workspace-cli/create-workspace-cli-1.png":::
 
-1. Once deployed, additional permissions are required. 
-- In the Azure portal, assign other users of the workspace to the **Contributor** role in the workspace. For detailed steps, see [Assign Azure roles using the Azure portal](../role-based-access-control/role-assignments-portal.yml). 
-- Assign other users the appropriate **[Synapse RBAC roles](security/synapse-workspace-synapse-rbac-roles.md)** using Synapse Studio.
-- A member of the **Owner** role of the Azure Storage account must assign the **Storage Blob Data Contributor** role to the Azure Synapse workspace MSI and other users.
+1. After it's deployed, more permissions are required:
+
+   - In the Azure portal, assign other users of the workspace to the Contributor role in the workspace. For more information, see [Assign Azure roles using the Azure portal](../role-based-access-control/role-assignments-portal.yml).
+   - Assign other users the appropriate [Azure Synapse Analytics role-based access control roles](security/synapse-workspace-synapse-rbac-roles.md) by using Synapse Studio.
+   - A member of the Owner role of the Azure Storage account must assign the Storage Blob Data Contributor role to the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace managed service identity and other users.
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-Follow the steps below to delete the Azure Synapse workspace.
+Follow these steps to delete the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace.
+
 > [!WARNING]
-> Deleting an Azure Synapse workspace will remove the analytics engines and the data stored in the database of the contained SQL pools and workspace metadata. It will no longer be possible to connect to the SQL or Apache Spark endpoints. All code artifacts will be deleted (queries, notebooks, job definitions and pipelines).
+> Deleting an Azure Synapse Analytics workspace removes the analytics engines and the data stored in the database of the contained SQL pools and workspace metadata. It will no longer be possible to connect to the SQL or Apache Spark endpoints. All code artifacts will be deleted (queries, notebooks, job definitions, and pipelines).
 >
-> Deleting the workspace will **not** affect the data in the Data Lake Store Gen2 linked to the workspace.
+> Deleting the workspace won't affect the data in the Data Lake Storage Gen2 account linked to the workspace.
 
-If you want to delete the Azure Synapse workspace, complete the following command:
+If you want to delete the Azure Synapse Analytics workspace, complete the following command:
 
 ```azurecli
 az synapse workspace delete --name $SynapseWorkspaceName --resource-group $SynapseResourceGroup
 ```
 
-## Next steps
+## Related content
 
 Next, you can [create SQL pools](quickstart-create-sql-pool-studio.md) or [create Apache Spark pools](quickstart-create-apache-spark-pool-studio.md) to start analyzing and exploring your data.