Update site-to-site-deprecation.md

Author: Rajani-Janaki-Ram

articles/site-recovery/site-to-site-deprecation.md

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-title: Deprecation of disaster recovery between customer managed sites (with VMM) using Azure Site Recovery | Microsoft Docs
+title: Deprecation of disaster recovery between customer-managed sites (with VMM) using Azure Site Recovery | Microsoft Docs
 description: Details about Upcoming deprecation of DR between customer owned sites using Hyper-V and between sites managed by SCVMM to Azure and alternate options
 services: site-recovery
 author: rajani-janaki-ram 
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 ms.author: rajanaki  
 
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-# Deprecation of disaster recovery between customer managed sites (with VMM) using Azure Site Recovery
+# Deprecation of disaster recovery between customer-managed sites (with VMM) using Azure Site Recovery
 
 This article describes the upcoming deprecation plan, the corresponding implications, and the alternative options available for the customers for the following scenario:
 
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 - Option 1 (Recommended): Choose to [start using Azure as the DR target for VMs on Hyper-V hosts](hyper-v-azure-tutorial.md).
 
     > [!IMPORTANT]
-    > Please note that your on-premises environment can still have SCVMMM, but you'll configure ASR with references to only the Hyper-V hosts.
+    > Note that your on-premises environment can still have SCVMMM, but you'll configure ASR with references to only the Hyper-V hosts.
 
 - Option 2: Choose to continue with site-to-site replication  using the underlying [Hyper-V Replica solution](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/manage/set-up-hyper-v-replica), but you will be unable to manage DR configurations using Azure Site Recovery in the Azure portal. 
 
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 4. [Prepare on-premises Hyper-V servers](hyper-v-prepare-on-premises-tutorial.md)
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Please note that you don't need to execute the steps under  prepare VMM.
+> Note that you don't need to execute the steps under  prepare VMM.
 
 5. [Set up replication for the VMs](hyper-v-azure-tutorial.md)
 6. Optional but recommended: [Run a DR drill](tutorial-dr-drill-azure.md)
 
-If you are choosing to go with Option 2 of using Hyper-V replica, please execute the following steps:
+If you are choosing to go with Option 2 of using Hyper-V replica, execute the following steps:
 
 1. In **Protected Items** > **Replicated Items**, right-click the machine > **Disable replication**.
 2. In **Disable replication**, select **Remove**.
 
     This removes the replicated item from Azure Site Recovery (billing is stopped). Replication configuration on the on-premises virtual machine **will not** be cleaned up. 
 
 ## Next steps
-Plan for the deprecation and choose an alternate option that's best suited for your infrastructure and business. In case you have any queries regarding this, please reach out to Microsoft Support
+Plan for the deprecation and choose an alternate option that's best suited for your infrastructure and business. In case you have any queries regarding this, reach out to Microsoft Support