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Author: laujan

articles/ai-services/document-intelligence/concept-id-document.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: laujan
 manager: nitinme
 ms.service: azure-ai-document-intelligence
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 11/21/2023
+ms.date: 03/06/2024
 ms.author: lajanuar
 ms.custom:
   - references.regions
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Document Intelligence Identity document (ID) model combines Optical Character Re
 
 ::: moniker range="doc-intel-2.1.0"
 
-Document Intelligence can analyze and extract information from government-issued identification documents (IDs) using its prebuilt IDs model. It combines our powerful [Optical Character Recognition (OCR)](../../ai-services/computer-vision/overview-ocr.md) capabilities with ID recognition capabilities to extract key information from Worldwide Passports and U.S. Driver's Licenses (all 50 states and D.C.). The IDs API extracts key information from these identity documents, such as first name, last name, date of birth, document number, and more. This API is available in the Document Intelligence v2.1 as a cloud service. 
+Document Intelligence can analyze and extract information from government-issued identification documents (IDs) using its prebuilt IDs model. It combines our powerful [Optical Character Recognition (OCR)](../../ai-services/computer-vision/overview-ocr.md) capabilities with ID recognition capabilities to extract key information from Worldwide Passports and U.S. Driver's Licenses (all 50 states and D.C.). The IDs API extracts key information from these identity documents, such as first name, surname, date of birth, document number, and more. This API is available in the Document Intelligence v2.1 as a cloud service. 
 
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@@ -131,19 +131,19 @@ Document Intelligence v2.1 supports the following tools, applications, and libra
 
 ::: moniker range="doc-intel-2.1.0"
 
-* Supported file formats: JPEG, PNG, PDF, and TIFF
+* Supported file formats: JPEG, PNG, PDF, and TIFF.
 
-* Document Intelligence processes PDF and TIFF files up to 2000 pages or only the first two pages for free-tier subscribers.
+* Supported number of pages for PDF and TIFF files: up to 2,000 pages or only the first two pages for free-tier subscribers.
 
-* The file size must be less than 50 MB and dimensions at least 50 x 50 pixels and at most 10,000 x 10,000 pixels.
+* Supported file size: less than 50 MB TOTAL; minimum pixels: 50 x 50 px; maximum pixels 10,000 x 10,000 px.
 
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 ### ID document model data extraction
 
 Extract data, including name, birth date, and expiration date, from ID documents. You need the following resources:
 
-* An Azure subscription—you can [create one for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/cognitive-services/)
+* An Azure subscription—you can [create one for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/cognitive-services/).
 
 * A [Document Intelligence instance](https://portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.CognitiveServicesFormRecognizer) in the Azure portal. You can use the free pricing tier (`F0`) to try the service. After your resource deploys, select **Go to resource** to get your key and endpoint.
 
@@ -154,16 +154,17 @@ Extract data, including name, birth date, and expiration date, from ID documents
 > [!NOTE]
 > Document Intelligence Studio is available with v3.1 and v3.0 APIs and later versions.
 
-1. On the Document Intelligence Studio home page, select **Identity documents**
+1. On the Document Intelligence Studio home page, select **Identity documents**.
 
 1. You can analyze the sample invoice or upload your own files.
 
-1. Select the **Run analysis** button and, if necessary, configure the **Analyze options** :
+1. Select the **Run analysis** button and, if necessary, configure the **Analyze options**:
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/studio/run-analysis-analyze-options.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Run analysis and Analyze options buttons in the Document Intelligence Studio.":::
 
     > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-    > [Try Document Intelligence Studio](https://formrecognizer.appliedai.azure.com/studio/prebuilt?formType=idDocument)
+    > [Try Document Intelligence Studio](https://formrecognizer.appliedai.azure.com/studio/prebuilt?formType=idDocument).
+
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 ::: moniker range="doc-intel-2.1.0"
@@ -197,7 +198,7 @@ Extract data, including name, birth date, and expiration date, from ID documents
 
 1. Select **Run analysis**. The Document Intelligence Sample Labeling tool calls the Analyze Prebuilt API and analyzes the document.
 
-1. View the results - see the key-value pairs extracted, line items, highlighted text extracted and tables detected.
+1. View the results - see the key-value pairs extracted, line items, highlighted text extracted, and tables detected.
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/id-example-drivers-license.jpg" alt-text="Screenshot of the identity model analyze results operation.":::
 
@@ -244,8 +245,8 @@ The following are the fields extracted per document type. The Document Intellige
 |`DateOfBirth`|`date`|Date of birth|01/06/1958|
 |`DateOfExpiration`|`date`|Date of expiration|08/12/2020|
 |`DateOfIssue`|`date`|Date of issue|08/12/2012|
-|`EyeColor`|`string`|Eye color|BLU|
-|`HairColor`|`string`|Hair color|BRO|
+|`EyeColor`|`string`|Eye color|Blue|
+|`HairColor`|`string`|Hair color|Brown|
 |`Height`|`string`|Height|5'11"|
 |`Weight`|`string`|Weight|185LB|
 |`Sex`|`string`|Sex|M|
@@ -262,7 +263,7 @@ The following are the fields extracted per document type. The Document Intellige
 |`MiddleName`|`string`|Name between given name and surname|REYES|
 |`LastName`|`string`|Surname|BROOKS|
 |`Aliases`|`array`|||
-|`Aliases.*`|`string`|Also known as|MAY LIN|
+|`Aliases.*`|`string`|Also known as|MAT LIN|
 |`DateOfBirth`|`date`|Date of birth|1980-01-01|
 |`DateOfExpiration`|`date`|Date of expiration|2019-05-05|
 |`DateOfIssue`|`date`|Date of issue|2014-05-06|
@@ -271,7 +272,7 @@ The following are the fields extracted per document type. The Document Intellige
 |`DocumentType`|`string`|Document type|P|
 |`Nationality`|`countryRegion`|Nationality|USA|
 |`PlaceOfBirth`|`string`|Place of birth|MASSACHUSETTS, U.S.A.|
-|`PlaceOfIssue`|`string`|Place of issue|LA PAZ|
+|`PlaceOfIssue`|`string`|Place of issue|LISBON|
 |`IssuingAuthority`|`string`|Issuing authority|United States Department of State|
 |`PersonalNumber`|`string`|Personal ID. No.|A234567893|
 |`MachineReadableZone`|`object`|Machine readable zone (MRZ)|P<USABROOKS<<JENNIFER<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< 3400200135USA8001014F1905054710000307<715816|
@@ -298,8 +299,8 @@ The following are the fields extracted per document type. The Document Intellige
 |`DateOfBirth`|`date`|Date of birth|01/06/1958|
 |`DateOfExpiration`|`date`|Date of expiration|08/12/2020|
 |`DateOfIssue`|`date`|Date of issue|08/12/2012|
-|`EyeColor`|`string`|Eye color|BLU|
-|`HairColor`|`string`|Hair color|BRO|
+|`EyeColor`|`string`|Eye color|BLUE|
+|`HairColor`|`string`|Hair color|BROWN|
 |`Height`|`string`|Height|5'11"|
 |`Weight`|`string`|Weight|185LB|
 |`Sex`|`string`|Sex|M|
@@ -375,15 +376,15 @@ The following are the fields extracted per document type. The Document Intellige
 
 ::: moniker range=">=doc-intel-3.0.0"
 
-* Try processing your own forms and documents with the [Document Intelligence Studio](https://formrecognizer.appliedai.azure.com/studio)
+* Try processing your own forms and documents with the [Document Intelligence Studio](https://formrecognizer.appliedai.azure.com/studio).
 
 * Complete a [Document Intelligence quickstart](quickstarts/get-started-sdks-rest-api.md?view=doc-intel-3.0.0&preserve-view=true) and get started creating a document processing app in the development language of your choice.
 
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-* Try processing your own forms and documents with the [Document Intelligence Sample Labeling tool](https://fott-2-1.azurewebsites.net/)
+* Try processing your own forms and documents with the [Document Intelligence Sample Labeling tool](https://fott-2-1.azurewebsites.net/).
 
 * Complete a [Document Intelligence quickstart](quickstarts/get-started-sdks-rest-api.md?view=doc-intel-2.1.0&preserve-view=true) and get started creating a document processing app in the development language of your choice.