made changes based on feedback

Author: ajburnle

articles/active-directory/governance/entitlement-management-organization.md

@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ How users from the Azure AD directory or domain will authenticate depends on the
 - [Direct federation](../b2b/direct-federation.md)
 - [One-time passcode](../b2b/one-time-passcode.md) (domain)
 
-The following video provides a demonstration of adding connected organizations to your directory:
+For a demonstration of how to add a connected organization, watch the following video:
 
->[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/videoplayer/embed/RE4dskS]
+>[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/videoplayer/embed/RE4dskS]
 
 ## Add a connected organization
 

includes/active-directory-entitlement-management-request-policy.md

@@ -101,9 +101,13 @@ In the Approval section, you specify whether an approval is required when users
 - Approval from every selected approver isn't required for single or 2-stage approval.
 - The approval decision is based on whichever approver reviews the request first.
 
-The following video provides more information about adding approvers to a request policy:
+For a demonstration of how to add approvers to a request policy, watch the following video:
 
->[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/videoplayer/embed/RE4cZfg]
+>[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/videoplayer/embed/RE4cZfg]
+
+For a demonstration of how to add a multi-stage approval to a request policy, watch the following video:
+
+>[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/videoplayer/embed/RE4d1Jw]
 
 Follow these steps to specify the approval settings for requests for the access package:
 
@@ -115,10 +119,6 @@ Follow these steps to specify the approval settings for requests for the access
 
     ![Access package - Requests - Approval settings](./media/active-directory-entitlement-management-request-policy/approval.png)
 
-For a demonstration of adding multi-stage approval to a request policy, watch the following video:
-
->[!VIDEO https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/videoplayer/embed/RE4d1Jw]
-
 Use the following steps to add approvers after selecting how many stages you require: 
 
 ### Single-stage approval