Changes from Acrolinx

Author: alkohli

articles/databox-online/data-box-edge-deploy-prep.md

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Before you begin, make sure that:
 - Your Microsoft Azure subscription is enabled for a Data Box Edge resource. Pay-as-you-go subscriptions are not supported.
 - You have owner or contributor access at resource group level for the Data Box Edge/Data Box Gateway, IoT Hub, and Azure Storage resources.
 
-    - To create any Data Box Edge/ Data Box Gateway resource, you permissions as a contributor (or greater) scoped at resource group level. You also need to make sure that the `Microsoft.DataBoxEdge` provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-edge-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
+    - To create any Data Box Edge/ Data Box Gateway resource, you should have permissions as a contributor (or higher) scoped at resource group level. You also need to make sure that the `Microsoft.DataBoxEdge` provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-edge-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
     - To create any IoT Hub resource, make sure that Microsoft.Devices provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-edge-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
     - To create a Storage account resource, again you need contributor or higher access scoped at the resource group level. Azure Storage is by default a registered resource provider.
 - You have admin or user access to Azure Active Directory Graph API. For more information, see [Azure Active Directory Graph API](https://docs.microsoft.com/previous-versions/azure/ad/graph/howto/azure-ad-graph-api-permission-scopes#default-access-for-administrators-users-and-guest-users-).

articles/databox-online/data-box-gateway-deploy-prep.md

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Before you begin, make sure that:
 - Your Microsoft Azure subscription should be supported for Data Box Gateway resource. Pay-as-you-go subscriptions are not supported.
 - You have owner or contributor access at resource group level for the Data Box Edge/Data Box Gateway, IoT Hub, and Azure Storage resources.
 
-    - To create any Data Box Edge/ Data Box Gateway resource, you permissions as a contributor (or greater) scoped at resource group level. You also need to make sure that the `Microsoft.DataBoxEdge` provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-gateway-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
+    - To create any Data Box Edge/ Data Box Gateway resource, you should have permissions as a contributor (or higher) scoped at resource group level. You also need to make sure that the `Microsoft.DataBoxEdge` provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-gateway-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
     - To create any IoT Hub resource, make sure that Microsoft.Devices provider is registered. For information on how to register, go to [Register resource provider](data-box-gateway-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md#register-resource-providers).
     - To create a Storage account resource, again you need contributor or higher access scoped at the resource group level. Azure Storage is by default a registered resource provider.
 - You have admin or user access to Azure Active Directory Graph API. For more information, see [Azure Active Directory Graph API](https://docs.microsoft.com/previous-versions/azure/ad/graph/howto/azure-ad-graph-api-permission-scopes#default-access-for-administrators-users-and-guest-users-).