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Author: EdB-MSFT

articles/azure-monitor/includes/prometheus-case-sensitivity.md

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 ms.service: azure-monitor
 ms.topic: include
-ms.date: 08/04/2023
+ms.date: 04/01/2023
 ms.author: edbaynash
 author: EdB-MSFT
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 ## Case sensitivity
-Azure managed Prometheus is a case insensitive system. If one time series differs from another only by a difference in the case of a string - metric name, label name, label value etc, it is treated as the same time series. This behavior is different from native open source Prometheus which is a case sensitive system.   
+Azure managed Prometheus is a case insensitive system. If one time series differs from another only by a difference in the case of a string - metric name, label name, label value, etc. - it's treated as the same time series. This behavior is different from native open source Prometheus, which is a case sensitive system.   
 
-In Azure managed Prometheus the follow time series are considered the same: 
+In Azure managed Prometheus the following time series are considered the same: 
 
-  `diskSize(cluster=”eastus”, node=”node1”, filesystem=”usr_mnt”)`  
-  `diskSize(cluster=”eastus”, node=”node1”, filesystem=”usr_MNT”)` 
+  `diskSize(cluster="eastus", node="node1", filesystem="usr_mnt")`  
+  `diskSize(cluster="eastus", node="node1", filesystem="usr_MNT")` 
 
-The above examples are a single time series in time series database.
--	Any samples ingested against them are be stored as if they're scraped/ingested against a single time series.
+The above examples are a single time series in a time series database.
+-	Any samples ingested against them are stored as if they're scraped/ingested against a single time series.
 -	If the examples above are ingested with the same timestamp, one of them is randomly dropped.
 -	The casing that's stored in the time series database and returned in query, is unpredictable. Different casing may be returned at different times for the same time series.
--	Any metric name or label name/value matcher present in the query, is retrieved from time series database by making a case-insensitive comparison. If there is a case sensitive matcher in a query, it's automatically treated as a case-insensitive matcher when making string comparisons.
+-	Any metric name or label name/value matcher present in the query is retrieved from time series database by making a case-insensitive comparison. If there's a case sensitive matcher in a query, it's automatically treated as a case-insensitive matcher when making string comparisons.
 
-It is best practice to insure that a time series is produced or scraped using a single consistent case.
+It is best practice to ensure that a time series is produced or scraped using a single consistent case.
 
-In OSS Prometheus the above time series are treated as two different time series. Any samples scraped/ingested against them are stored separately.
+In OSS Prometheus, the above time series are treated as two different time series. Any samples scraped/ingested against them are stored separately.