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@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.custom: references_regions
 
 # Quickstart: Configure Microsoft Dev Box Preview
 
-This quickstart describes how to configure the Microsoft Dev Box Preview service by using the Azure portal to enable development teams to self-serve dev boxes.
+This quickstart describes how to configure Microsoft Dev Box Preview by using the Azure portal to enable development teams to self-serve their dev boxes.
 
 This quickstart takes you through the process of setting up your Dev Box environment. You create a dev center to organize your dev box resources, configure network components to enable dev boxes to connect to your organizational resources, and create a dev box definition that will form the basis of your dev boxes. You then create a project and a dev box pool, which work together to help you give access to users who will manage or use the dev boxes.
 
@@ -26,8 +26,7 @@ To complete this quickstart, you need:
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) before you begin.
 - Owner or Contributor role on an Azure subscription or a specific resource group.
-- An existing virtual network and subnet. If you don't have them, [follow these instructions to create them](#create-a-virtual-network-and-subnet).
-- Network Contributor permissions on an existing virtual network (Owner or Contributor), or permission to create a new virtual network and subnet.
+- - Network Contributor permissions on an existing virtual network (Owner or Contributor), or permission to create a new virtual network and subnet.
 - User licenses. To use Dev Box Preview, each user must be licensed for Windows 11 Enterprise or Windows 10 Enterprise, Microsoft Intune, and Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) P1. These licenses are available independently and are included in the following subscriptions:
 
   - Microsoft 365 F3
@@ -36,12 +35,7 @@ To complete this quickstart, you need:
   - Microsoft 365 Business Premium
   - Microsoft 365 Education Student Use Benefit
 - [Azure Hybrid Benefit](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/hybrid-benefit/), which allows you to use your Windows licenses on Azure with Dev Box.
-- A configured and working Azure AD join or hybrid Active Directory join:
-
-  - To learn how to join devices directly to Azure AD, see [Plan your Azure Active Directory join deployment](../active-directory/devices/azureadjoin-plan.md).
-  - To learn how to join your AD DS domain-joined computers to Azure AD from an on-premises Azure Active Directory Domain Services (AD DS) environment, see [Plan your hybrid Azure Active Directory join deployment](../active-directory/devices/hybrid-azuread-join-plan.md).
-- Certain ports to be open so that the Dev Box service can function, if your organization routes egress traffic through a firewall. For more information, see [Network requirements](/windows-365/enterprise/requirements-network).
-
+- Certain ports to be open so that the Dev Box service can function if your organization routes egress traffic through a firewall. For more information, see [Network requirements](/windows-365/enterprise/requirements-network).
 ## Create a dev center
 
 Use the following steps to create a dev center so that you can manage your dev box resources:  
@@ -114,13 +108,20 @@ You must have a virtual network and subnet available for your network connection
 
 1. Select **Create**.
 
-### Create the connection
+### Create the network connection
+
+You now need a network connection to associate the virtual network and subnet with the dev center. A network connection specifies the type of join dev boxes use to join your Azure AD domain, either an Azure AD join or a hybrid Active Directory join.
+
+- To determine which type of join is appropriate for your dev boxes, refer to:
+   
+   - [Azure AD joined devices](/azure/active-directory/devices/concept-azure-ad-join).
+   - [Hybrid Azure AD joined devices](/azure/active-directory/devices/concept-azure-ad-join-hybrid).
 
-You now need a network connection to associate the virtual network and subnet with the dev center. To create the connection, complete the steps on the relevant tab.
+To create the network connection, complete the steps on the relevant tab.
 
 #### [Azure AD join](#tab/AzureADJoin/)
 
-1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
+1. 1. 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
 1. In the search box, enter **network connections**. In the list of results, select **Network connections**.
 
@@ -181,7 +182,6 @@ You now need a network connection to associate the virtual network and subnet wi
 1. When the deployment is complete, select **Go to resource**. The network connection appears on the **Network connections** page.
 
 ---
-
 ## Attach a network connection to a dev center
 
 To provide network configuration information for dev boxes, associate a network connection with a dev center:
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ To provide network configuration information for dev boxes, associate a network
 
 1. Select the dev center that you created, and then select **Networking**.
 
-1. Select  **+ Add**.
+1. Select **+ Add**.
 
 1. On the **Add network connection** pane, select the network connection that you created, and then select **Add**.
 
@@ -335,11 +335,11 @@ To assign roles:
 
 [!INCLUDE [supported accounts note](./includes/note-supported-accounts.md)]
 
-## Assign the Project Admin role
+## Project Admins
 
-The Microsoft Dev Box Preview service makes it possible for you to delegate administration of projects to a member of the project team. Project administrators can assist with the day-to-day management of projects for their teams, like creating and managing dev box pools. To give users permissions to manage projects, assign the DevCenter Project Admin role to them.
+Microsoft Dev Box Preview makes it possible for you to delegate administration of projects to a member of the project team. Project administrators can assist with the day-to-day management of projects for their teams, like creating and managing dev box pools. To give users permissions to manage projects, assign the DevCenter Project Admin role to them.
 
-You can assign the DevCenter Project Admin role by using the steps described earlier in [Provide access to a dev box project](#provide-access-to-a-dev-box-project), but select the Project Admin role instead of the Dev Box User role. For more information, see [Provide access to projects for project admins](how-to-project-admin.md).
+You can assign the DevCenter Project Admin role by using the steps described earlier in [Provide access to a dev box ](#provide-access-to-a-dev-box-project)project and select the Project Admin role instead of the Dev Box User role. For more information, see [Provide access to projects for project admins](how-to-project-admin.md).
 
 [!INCLUDE [permissions note](./includes/note-permission-to-create-dev-box.md)]
 
@@ -349,3 +349,4 @@ In this quickstart, you created a dev box project and the resources that are nec
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Create a dev box](./quickstart-create-dev-box.md)
+