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Author: hhunter-ms

articles/azure-monitor/profiler/profiler-servicefabric.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Enable Profiler for Azure Service Fabric applications
 description: Profile live Azure Service Fabric apps with Application Insights
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.custom: devx-track-dotnet
-ms.date: 06/21/2022
+ms.date: 06/23/2022
 ---
 
 # Enable Profiler for Azure Service Fabric applications
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Application Insights Profiler is included with Azure Diagnostics. You can instal
 In this article, you will:
 
 - Add the Application Insights Profiler property to your Azure Resource Manager template.
-- Deploy your Service Fabric cluster using the Azure Resource Manager template.
+- Deploy your Service Fabric cluster with the Application Insights Profiler instrumentation key.
 - Enable Application Insights on your Service Fabric application.
 - Redeploy your Service Fabric cluster to enable Profiler.
 
@@ -24,11 +24,11 @@ In this article, you will:
   - Confirm that the deployed OS is `Windows Server 2012 R2` or later. 
 - [An Azure Service Fabric managed cluster.](../../service-fabric/quickstart-managed-cluster-portal.md).
 
-## Set up the environment deployment definition
+## Create deployment template
 
-1. In your Service Fabric managed cluster, navigate to your [Azure Resource Manager template](https://github.com/Azure/azure-docs-json-samples/blob/master/application-insights/ServiceFabricCluster.json).
+1. In your Service Fabric managed cluster, navigate to where you've implemented the [Azure Resource Manager template](https://github.com/Azure/azure-docs-json-samples/blob/master/application-insights/ServiceFabricCluster.json).
 
-1. Locate `WadCfg` in the [Azure Diagnostics](../agents/diagnostics-extension-overview.md) extension in the deployment template file.
+1. Locate the `WadCfg` tags in the [Azure Diagnostics](../agents/diagnostics-extension-overview.md) extension in the deployment template file.
 
 1. Add the following `SinksConfig` section as a child element of `WadCfg`. Replace the `ApplicationInsightsProfiler` property value with your own Application Insights instrumentation key:  
 
@@ -39,34 +39,39 @@ In this article, you will:
               "Sink": [
                   {
                       "name": "MyApplicationInsightsProfilerSinkVMSS",
-                      "ApplicationInsightsProfiler": "[parameters('applicationInsightsFrontendIkey')]"
+                      "ApplicationInsightsProfiler": "YOUR_APPLICATION_INSIGHTS_INSTRUMENTATION_KEY"
                   }
               ]
           },
       },
   }  
   ```
 
-  For information about adding the Diagnostics extension to your deployment template, see [Use monitoring and diagnostics with a Windows VM and Azure Resource Manager templates](../../virtual-machines/extensions/diagnostics-template.md?toc=/azure/virtual-machines/windows/toc.json).
+  For information about adding the Diagnostics extension to your deployment template, see [Use monitoring and diagnostics with a Windows VM and Azure Resource Manager templates](../../virtual-machines/extensions/diagnostics-template.md).
 
-1. Deploy your Service Fabric cluster by using your Azure Resource Manager template.  
+## Deploy your Service Fabric cluster
+
+After updating the `WadCfg` with your instrumentation key, deploy your Service Fabric cluster.  
 
-   Application Insights Profiler will be installed and enabled when the Azure Diagnostics extension is installed. 
+Application Insights Profiler will be installed and enabled when the Azure Diagnostics extension is installed. 
+
+## Enable Application Insights on your Service Fabric application
 
-1. Enable Application Insights for your Service Fabric application.  
+For Profiler to collect profiles for your requests, your application must be tracking operations with Application Insights. 
 
-   For Profiler to collect profiles for your requests, your application must be tracking operations with Application Insights. 
+- **For stateless APIs**, you can refer to instructions for [tracking requests for profiling](./profiler-trackrequests.md). 
+- **For tracking custom operations in other kinds of apps**, see [track custom operations with Application Insights .NET SDK](../app/custom-operations-tracking.md).
 
-   - **For stateless APIs**, you can refer to instructions for [tracking requests for profiling](./profiler-trackrequests.md). 
-   - **For tracking custom operations in other kinds of apps**, see [track custom operations with Application Insights .NET SDK](../app/custom-operations-tracking.md).
+Redeploy your application once you've enabled Application Insights.
 
-1. Redeploy your application.
+## Generate traffic and view Profiler traces
 
+1. Launch an [availability test](../app/monitor-web-app-availability.md)) to generate traffic to your application. 
+1. Wait 10 to 15 minutes for traces to be sent to the Application Insights instance.
+1. View the [Profiler traces](./profiler-overview.md) via the Application Insights instance the Azure portal.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- Generate traffic to your application (for example, launch an [availability test](../app/monitor-web-app-availability.md)). Then, wait 10 to 15 minutes for traces to start to be sent to the Application Insights instance.
-- See [Profiler traces](./profiler-overview.md) in the Azure portal.
-- For help with troubleshooting Profiler issues, see [Profiler troubleshooting](./profiler-troubleshooting.md).
+For help with troubleshooting Profiler issues, see [Profiler troubleshooting](./profiler-troubleshooting.md).
 
-[!INCLUDE [azure-monitor-log-analytics-rebrand](../../../includes/azure-monitor-instrumentation-key-deprecation.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [azure-monitor-log-analytics-rebrand](../../../includes/azure-monitor-instrumentation-key-deprecation.md)]