Update network-security-perimeter.md

Author: samurp

articles/event-hubs/network-security-perimeter.md

@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@ Operating as a service under Azure Private Link, the Network Security Perimeter
 
 ## Associate Event Hubs with a Network Security Perimeter in the Azure portal
 1. Search for "Network Security Perimeter" in the Portal search bar and then click on **Create** button and create the resource
-1. In the first screen provide a Name and Region and choose the subscription
-1. Under the **Resources** section click on the **Associate** button and navigate to the Event Hubs namespace you want to add. 
+1. In the first screen, provide a Name and Region and choose the subscription
+1. Under the **Resources** section, click on the **Associate** button and navigate to the Event Hubs namespace you want to add. 
 
 ## Related content
-- Overview of [network service perimeter](https://aka.ms/networksecurityperimeter)
+- For an overview of [network service perimeter](https://aka.ms/networksecurityperimeter)
 
-- Learn to monitor with [diagnostic logs in network security perimeter](https://aka.ms/networksecurityperimeter)
+- For monitoring with [diagnostic logs in network security perimeter](https://aka.ms/networksecurityperimeter)
 
-- For additional Event Hubs security features, see [Network Security for Azure Event Hubs](network-security.md)
+- For other Event Hubs security features, see [Network Security for Azure Event Hubs](network-security.md)
 
 - For additional information on using private endpoints, see [Use Private Endpoints](https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/event-hubs/private-link-service)