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articles/azure-web-pubsub/concept-service-internals.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: vicancy
 ms.author: lianwei
 ms.service: azure-web-pubsub
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 09/30/2022
+ms.date: 08/09/2024
 ---
 
 # Azure Web PubSub service internals
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Azure Web PubSub Service provides an easy way to publish/subscribe messages usin
 
 - Clients can be written in any language that has Websocket support.
 - Both text and binary messages are supported within one connection.
-- There's a simple protocol for clients to do direct client-to-client message publishing.
+- A simple protocol allows you to publish massages directly to each other.
 - The service manages the WebSocket connections for you.
 
 ## Terms
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Workflow as shown in the above graph:
 
 ## Client protocol
 
-A client connection connects to the `/client` endpoint of the service using [WebSocket protocol](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6455). The WebSocket protocol provides full-duplex communication channels over a single TCP connection and was standardized by the IETF as RFC 6455 in 2011. Most languages have native support to start WebSocket connections.
+A client connection connects to the `/client` endpoint of the service using [WebSocket protocol](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6455). The WebSocket protocol provides full-duplex communication channels over a single TCP connection and follows all the standards of the IETF as RFC 6455 in 2011. Most languages have native support to start WebSocket connections.
 
 Our service supports two kinds of clients:
 
@@ -59,12 +59,12 @@ var client2 = new WebSocket(
 );
 ```
 
-A simple WebSocket client follows a client<->server architecture, as the below sequence diagram shows:
+A simple WebSocket client follows a client<->server architecture, as the following sequence diagram shows:
 ![Diagram showing the sequence for a client connection.](./media/concept-service-internals/simple-client-sequence.png)
 
 1. When the client starts a WebSocket handshake, the service tries to invoke the `connect` event handler for WebSocket handshake. Developers can use this handler to handle the WebSocket handshake, determine the subprotocol to use, authenticate the client, and join the client to groups.
 2. When the client is successfully connected, the service invokes a `connected` event handler. It works as a notification and doesn't block the client from sending messages. Developers can use this handler to do data storage and can respond with messages to the client. The service also pushes a `connected` event to all concerning event listeners, if any.
-3. When the client sends messages, the service triggers a `message` event to the event handler to handle the messages sent. This event is a general event containing the messages sent in a WebSocket frame. Your code needs to dispatch the messages inside this event handler. If the event handler returns non-successful response code for, the service drops the client connection. The service also pushes a `message` event to all concerning event listeners, if any. If the service can't find any registered servers to receive the messages, the service also drops the connection.
+3. When the client sends messages, the service triggers a `message` event to the event handler to handle the messages sent. This event is a general event containing the messages sent in a WebSocket frame. Your code needs to dispatch the messages inside this event handler. If the event handler returns nonsuccessful response code for, the service drops the client connection. The service also pushes a `message` event to all concerning event listeners, if any. If the service can't find any registered servers to receive the messages, the service also drops the connection.
 4. When the client disconnects, the service tries to trigger the `disconnected` event to the event handler once it detects the disconnect. The service also pushes a `disconnected` event to all concerning event listeners, if any.
 
 #### Scenarios
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ A PubSub WebSocket client can:
 
 [PubSub WebSocket Subprotocol](./reference-json-webpubsub-subprotocol.md) contains the details of the `json.webpubsub.azure.v1` subprotocol.
 
-You may have noticed that for a [simple WebSocket client](#the-simple-websocket-client), the _server_ is a **must have** role to receive the `message` events from clients. A simple WebSocket connection always triggers a `message` event when it sends messages, and always relies on the server-side to process messages and do other operations. With the help of the `json.webpubsub.azure.v1` subprotocol, an authorized client can join a group and publish messages to a group directly. It can also route messages to different event handlers / event listeners by customizing the _event_ the message belongs.
+You noticed that for a [simple WebSocket client](#the-simple-websocket-client), the _server_ is a **must have** role to receive the `message` events from clients. A simple WebSocket connection always triggers a `message` event when it sends messages, and always relies on the server-side to process messages and do other operations. With the help of the `json.webpubsub.azure.v1` subprotocol, an authorized client can join a group and publish messages to a group directly. It can also route messages to different event handlers / event listeners by customizing the _event_ the message belongs.
 
 #### Scenarios
 
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ Client events fall into two categories:
   - `connect`: This event is for event handler only. When the client starts a WebSocket handshake, the event is triggered and developers can use `connect` event handler to handle the WebSocket handshake, determine the subprotocol to use, authenticate the client, and join the client to groups.
   - `message`: This event is triggered when a client sends a message.
 - Asynchronous events (non-blocking)
-  Asynchronous events don't block the client workflow, it acts as some notification to server. When such an event trigger fails, the service logs the error detail.
+  Asynchronous events don't block the client workflow. Instead, they act as some notification to the server. When such an event trigger fails, the service logs the error detail.
   - `connected`: This event is triggered when a client connects to the service successfully.
   - `disconnected`: This event is triggered when a client disconnected with the service.
 
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ The following graph describes the workflow.
 
 ![Diagram showing the client authentication workflow.](./media/concept-service-internals/client-connect-workflow.png)
 
-As you may have noticed when we describe the PubSub WebSocket clients, that a client can publish to other clients only when it's _authorized_ to. The `role`s of the client determines the _initial_ permissions the client have:
+As you noticed when we describe the PubSub WebSocket clients, that a client can publish to other clients only when it's _authorized_ to. The `role`s of the client determines the _initial_ permissions the client have:
 
 | Role                               | Permission                                          |
 | ---------------------------------- | --------------------------------------------------- |
@@ -250,11 +250,13 @@ For now, we don't support [WebHook-Request-Rate](https://github.com/cloudevents/
 
 #### Authentication/Authorization between service and webhook
 
+To Establish secure authentication and authorization between your service and webhook, consider the following options and steps:
+
 - Anonymous mode
 - Simple authentication that `code` is provided through the configured Webhook URL.
 - Use Microsoft Entra authorization. For more information, see [how to use managed identity](howto-use-managed-identity.md) for details.
-  - Step1: Enable Identity for the Web PubSub service
-  - Step2: Select from existing Microsoft Entra application that stands for your webhook web app
+  - Step 1: Enable Identity for the Web PubSub service
+  - Step 2: Select from existing Microsoft Entra application that stands for your webhook web app
 
 ### Connection manager
 
@@ -292,17 +294,17 @@ Currently we support [**Event Hubs**](https://azure.microsoft.com/products/event
 
 You need to register event listeners beforehand, so that when a client event is triggered, the service can push the event to the corresponding event listeners. See [this doc](./howto-develop-event-listener.md#configure-an-event-listener) for how to configure an event listener with an event hub endpoint.
 
-You can configure multiple event listeners. The order of the event listeners doesn't matter. If an event matches with multiple event listeners, it will be sent to all the listeners it matches. See the following diagram for an example. Let's say you configure four event listeners at the same time. Then a client event that matches with three of those listeners will be sent to three listeners, leaving the rest one untouched.
+You can configure multiple event listeners, and their order doesn't affect their functionality. If an event matches multiply listeners, the event is dispatched to all matching listeners. See the following diagram for an example. For example, if you configure four event listeners simultaneously, each listener receiving a match processes the event. A client event that matches with three of those listeners is sent to three listeners, leaving the rest one untouched.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/concept-service-internals/event-listener-data-flow.svg" alt-text="Event listener data flow diagram sample":::
 
-You can combine an [event handler](#event-handler) and event listeners for the same event. In this case, both event handler and event listeners will receive the event.
+You can combine an [event handler](#event-handler) and event listeners for the same event. In this case, both event handler and event listeners receive the event.
 
 Web PubSub service delivers client events to event listeners using [CloudEvents AMQP extension for Azure Web PubSub](reference-cloud-events-amqp.md).
 
 ### Summary
 
-You may have noticed that the _event handler role_ handles communication from the service to the server while _the manager role_ handles communication from the server to the service. After combining the two roles, the data flow between service and server looks similar to the following diagram using HTTP protocol.
+You noticed that the _event handler role_ handles communication from the service to the server while _the manager role_ handles communication from the server to the service. Once you combine the two roles, the data flow between service and server looks similar to the following diagram using HTTP protocol.
 
 ![Diagram showing the Web PubSub service bi-directional workflow.](./media/concept-service-internals/http-service-server.png)