Minor copy updates to incorporate CELA feedback.

Author: jesscraze

articles/signups/TOC.yml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 - name: Overview
   items:
-  - name: Overview of startup credit offer
+  - name: Overview of Azure startup credit offer
     href: overview.md
 - name: Concepts
   items: 

articles/signups/overview.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: jesscraze
 ms.author: jecru
 ms.service: azure
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 04/04/2025
+ms.date: 04/08/2025
 
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@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ Eligible startups can receive $1,000 USD in Azure credits to explore the latest
 
 To qualify for the startup credit offer, you must meet the following criteria:
 
-- You must be a new customer with no prior Azure account.
-- You must sign up or sign in using a valid personal Microsoft account (MSA).
+- You must be a new Azure customer with no prior Azure account.
+- You must sign up or sign in using a valid personal Microsoft Account (MSA).
 - You must be in a country/region where this Azure offer is available.
 
 Learn more about the [Azure sponsorship offer](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/offers/ms-azr-0036p/) and review the [Azure Service Agreement & Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/).
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ By redeeming the startup credit offer, you agree not to facilitate, engage in, o
 
 ### How do I redeem my startup credit offer?
 
-Get started at [microsoft.com/startups](https://microsoft.com/startups). Sign in with your personal Microsoft account (MSA) to redeem the $1,000 startup credit offer for eligible startups directly in the Azure portal. Once you sign up, your credits are automatically applied to your Azure Sponsorship subscription. You can start using your credits immediately for eligible Azure services.
+Get started at [microsoft.com/startups](https://microsoft.com/startups). Sign in with your personal Microsoft Account (MSA) to redeem the $1,000 startup credit offer for eligible startups directly in the Azure portal. Once you sign up, your credits are automatically applied to your Azure Sponsorship subscription. You can start using your credits immediately for eligible Azure services.
 
 ### Why do I need a credit card to redeem my startup credit offer?
 
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Learn how to [troubleshoot credit card issues](/azure/cost-management-billing/tr
 
 ### How long do I have to use my startup credit offer?
 
-You have 90 days after creating your Azure Sponsorship subscription to use your startup credits. Unused credits will expire after 90 days.
+You have 90 days after activating your startup credit offer to use your credits. Any unused credits will expire after 90 days.
 
 ### What happens when my $1,000 startup credit runs out or expires?
 
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ No, Azure benefits are applied on an account level and can't be shared or merged
 
 ### I signed in but I'm seeing an error about my eligibility. What should I do?
 
-The startup credit offer is only available for new customers using a personal Microsoft account (MSA). If you see an eligibility error:
+The startup credit offer is only available for new Azure customers using a personal Microsoft Account (MSA). If you see an eligibility error:
 
 - Check your account type. If signed in with a work or school account, sign out and switch to an MSA.
 - Check your Azure account. If you have an existing Azure subscription, you aren't eligible for the startup credit offer.

articles/signups/startup-programs.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: jesscraze
 ms.author: jecru
 ms.service: azure
 ms.topic: concept-article
-ms.date: 04/04/2025
+ms.date: 04/08/2025
 
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@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ These two paths are designed to make accessing Azure credits and resources easie
 
 To qualify for the [startup credit offer](/overview.md), you must meet the following criteria:
 
-- You must be a new customer with no prior Azure account.
-- You must sign up or sign in using a valid personal Microsoft account (MSA).
+- You must be a new Azure customer with no prior Azure account.
+- You must sign up or sign in using a valid personal Microsoft Account (MSA).
 - You must be in a country/region where this Azure offer is available.
 
 ### How do I apply for Microsoft for Startups?
@@ -35,6 +35,6 @@ Learn more about [how to apply, explore program benefits, and find answers to co
 
 ### Can I receive the startup credit offer and join Microsoft for Startups?
 
-Yes! Founders that begin with the Azure startup credit offer can apply for Microsoft for Startups once they incorporate or register as a legal entity.
+Yes! Startups that begin with the Azure startup credit offer can apply for Microsoft for Startups once they incorporate or register as a legal entity.
 
 If you have already redeemed Azure credits through Microsoft for Startups, you aren't eligible for the startup credit offer.