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Co-authored-by: Dan Lepow <[email protected]>

Author: Court72

includes/api-management-multi-region-concepts.md

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 * With multi-region deployment, only the [gateway component](../articles/api-management/api-management-key-concepts.md#api-management-components) of your API Management instance is replicated to multiple regions. The instance's management plane and developer portal remain hosted only in the *primary* region, the region where you originally deployed the service.
 
-* If you want to configure secondary location for your APIM, the VNET and subnet region should match with the secondary location you are configuring. If you're adding/removing/enabling Availability zone in Primary region, or changing subnet of primary region, then VIP of APIM will change. Refer IP addresses of Azure API Management service (https://learn.microsoft.com/azure/api-management/api-management-howto-ip-addresses#changes-to-the-ip-addresses).
-However, if you're adding a secondary region, primary region's VIP of APIM will not change as every region has its own private VIP.
+* If you want to configure a secondary location for your APIM, the VNET and subnet region should match with the secondary location you're configuring. If you're adding, removing, or enabling the Availability zone in the Primary region, or if you're changing the subnet of the primary region, then the VIP of APIM will change. For more information, see [IP addresses of Azure API Management service](/azure/api-management/api-management-howto-ip-addresses#changes-to-the-ip-addresses).
 
 * Gateway configurations such as APIs and policy definitions are regularly synchronized between the primary and secondary regions you add. Multi-region deployment provides availability of the API gateway in more than one region and provides service availability if one region goes offline.