Merge pull request #108272 from stevemunk/how-to-render-custom-data

how-to-render-custom-data.md: Grammar improvements

Author: Jak-MS

articles/azure-maps/how-to-render-custom-data.md

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ The following are examples of custom data:
 
 This article uses the [Postman] application, but you may use a different API development environment.
 
-We'll use the Azure Maps [Data service] to store and render overlays.
+Use the Azure Maps [Data service] to store and render overlays.
 
 ## Render pushpins with labels and a custom image
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ To get a static image with custom pins and labels:
 > [!NOTE]
 > The procedure in this section requires an Azure Maps account Gen 1 (S1) or Gen 2 pricing tier.
 
-In this section, we'll upload path and pin data to Azure Map data storage.
+In this section, you upload path and pin data to Azure Map data storage.
 
 To upload pins and path data:
 
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ To render a polygon with color and opacity:
 > [!NOTE]
 > The procedure in this section requires an Azure Maps account Gen 1 (S1) or Gen 2 pricing tier.
 
-You can modify the appearance of the pins by adding style modifiers. For example, to make pushpins and their labels larger or smaller, use the `sc` "scale style" modifier. This modifier takes a value that's greater than zero. A value of 1 is the standard scale. Values larger than 1 will make the pins larger, and values smaller than 1 will make them smaller. For more information about style modifiers, see [static image service path parameters].
+You can modify the appearance of the pins by adding style modifiers. For example, to make pushpins and their labels larger or smaller, use the `sc` "scale style" modifier. This modifier takes a value that's greater than zero. A value of 1 is the standard scale. Values larger than 1 makes the pins larger, and values smaller than 1 makes them smaller. For more information about style modifiers, see [static image service path parameters].
 
 To render a circle and pushpins with custom labels:
 
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ To render a circle and pushpins with custom labels:
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/how-to-render-custom-data/circle-custom-pins.png" alt-text="Render a circle with custom pushpins.":::
 
-8. Now we'll change the color of the pushpins by modifying the `co` style modifier. If you look at the value of the `pins` parameter (`pins=default|la15+50|al0.66|lc003C62|co002D62|`), you'll see that the current color is `#002D62`. To change  the color to `#41d42a`, we'll replace `#002D62` with `#41d42a`.  Now the `pins` parameter is `pins=default|la15+50|al0.66|lc003C62|co41D42A|`. The request  looks like the following URL:
+8. Next, change the color of the pushpins by modifying the `co` style modifier. If you look at the value of the `pins` parameter (`pins=default|la15+50|al0.66|lc003C62|co002D62|`), notice that the current color is `#002D62`. To change  the color to `#41d42a`, replace `#002D62` with `#41d42a`.  Now the `pins` parameter is `pins=default|la15+50|al0.66|lc003C62|co41D42A|`. The request  looks like the following URL:
 
     ```HTTP
     https://atlas.microsoft.com/map/static/png?api-version=1.0&style=main&layer=basic&zoom=14&height=700&Width=700&center=-122.13230609893799,47.64599069048016&path=lcFF0000|lw2|la0.60|ra1000||-122.13230609893799 47.64599069048016&pins=default|la15+50|al0.66|lc003C62|co41D42A||'Microsoft Corporate Headquarters'-122.14131832122801  47.64690503939462|'Microsoft Visitor Center'-122.136828 47.642224|'Microsoft Conference Center'-122.12552547454833 47.642940335653996|'Microsoft The Commons'-122.13687658309935  47.64452336193245&subscription-key={Your-Azure-Maps-Subscription-key}
@@ -285,17 +285,20 @@ Similarly, you can change, add, and remove other style modifiers.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- Explore the [Azure Maps Get Map Image API] documentation.
-- To learn more about Azure Maps Data service, see the [service documentation].
+> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
+> [Render - Get Map Image]
+
+> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
+> [Data service]
+
 
 [Azure Maps account]: quick-demo-map-app.md#create-an-azure-maps-account
-[Subscription key]: quick-demo-map-app.md#get-the-subscription-key-for-your-account
-[Postman]: https://www.postman.com/
+[Render - Get Map Image]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage
 [Data service]: /rest/api/maps/data
-[static image service]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage
 [Data Upload]: /rest/api/maps/data-v2/upload
-[Render service]: /rest/api/maps/render/get-map-image
 [path parameter]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage#uri-parameters
-[Azure Maps Get Map Image API]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage
-[service documentation]: /rest/api/maps/data
+[Postman]: https://www.postman.com/
+[Render service]: /rest/api/maps/render/get-map-image
 [static image service path parameters]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage#uri-parameters
+[static image service]: /rest/api/maps/render/getmapimage
+[Subscription key]: quick-demo-map-app.md#get-the-subscription-key-for-your-account