More changes and date update

roygara · roygara · commit 1c8b4a747922 · 2020-04-09T08:47:15.000-07:00
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-enable-ultra-ssd.md b/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-enable-ultra-ssd.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about ultra disks for Azure VMs
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-shared-enable.md b/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-shared-enable.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Configure an Azure managed disk with shared disks (preview) so that
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-shared.md b/articles/virtual-machines/linux/disks-shared.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about sharing Azure managed disks across multiple VMs.
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-enable-ultra-ssd.md b/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-enable-ultra-ssd.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about ultra disks for Azure VMs
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines-windows
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-shared-enable.md b/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-shared-enable.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Configure an Azure managed disk with shared disks (preview) so that
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines-windows
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-shared.md b/articles/virtual-machines/windows/disks-shared.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about sharing Azure managed disks across multiple VMs.
 author: roygara
 ms.service: virtual-machines-windows
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/09/2020
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: disks
 ---
diff --git a/includes/managed-disks-ultra-disks-GA-scope-and-limitations.md b/includes/managed-disks-ultra-disks-GA-scope-and-limitations.md
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ The following table outlines the available regions and their corresponding avail
 
 |Regions  |No infrastructure Redundancy  |Availability zones  |
 |---------|---------|---------|
-|West US     |Yes         |         |
+|West US     |Yes         |No         |
 |West US 2    |No         |Yes         |
 |East US     |No         |Yes         |
 |East US 2     |No         |Yes         |
@@ -39,4 +39,4 @@ The following table outlines the available regions and their corresponding avail
 - Doesn't currently support integration with Azure Backup or Azure Site Recovery
 - The current maximum limit for IOPS on GA VMs is 80,000.
 
-Azure ultra disks offer up to 16 TiB per region per subscription by default, but ultra disks support higher capacity by request. To request an increase in account limits, contact Azure Support.
+Azure ultra disks offer up to 16 TiB per region per subscription by default, but ultra disks support higher capacity by request. To request an increase in capacity, contact Azure Support.
diff --git a/includes/virtual-machines-disks-shared-limitations.md b/includes/virtual-machines-disks-shared-limitations.md
@@ -5,12 +5,12 @@
  author: roygara
  ms.service: virtual-machines
  ms.topic: include
- ms.date: 04/03/2020
+ ms.date: 04/09/2020
  ms.author: rogarana
  ms.custom: include file
 ---
 
-While in preview, enabling shared disks is only available to a subset of disk types. Currently only ultra disks and premium SSDs can enable shared disks. Each managed disks that have shared disks enabled are subject to the following limitations, organized by disk type:
+While in preview, enabling shared disks is only available to a subset of disk types. Currently only ultra disks and premium SSDs can enable shared disks. Each managed disk that have shared disks enabled are subject to the following limitations, organized by disk type:
 
 ### Ultra disks
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Ultra disks have their own separate list of limitations, unrelated to shared dis
 When sharing ultra disks, they have the following additional limitations:
 
 - Currently only supported in West US.
-- Currently limited to ARM or SDK support.
+- Currently limited to Azure Resource Manager or SDK support.
 - Only basic disks can be used with some versions of Windows Server Failover Cluster, for details see [Failover clustering hardware requirements and storage options](https://docs.microsoft.com/windows-server/failover-clustering/clustering-requirements).
 
 ### Premium SSDs
diff --git a/includes/virtual-machines-disks-shared.md b/includes/virtual-machines-disks-shared.md
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ Ultra disks have the unique capability of allowing you to set your performance b
 |DiskMBpsReadWrite     |The total throughput (MB/s) allowed across all VMs mounting the shared disk with write access.         |
 |DiskIOPSReadOnly*     |The total number of IOPS allowed across all VMs mounting the shared disk as ReadOnly.         |
 |DiskMBpsReadOnly*     |The total throughput (MB/s) allowed across all VMs mounting the shared disk as ReadOnly.         |
- * Applies to shared ultra disks only
+\* Applies to shared ultra disks only
 
 The following formulas explain how the performance attributes can be set, since they are user modifiable:
 
@@ -103,6 +103,8 @@ The following formulas explain how the performance attributes can be set, since
 
 ### Examples
 
+The following examples depict a few scenarios that show how the throttling can work with shared ultra disks, specifically.
+
 #### Two nodes cluster using cluster shared volumes
 
 The following is an example of a 2-node WSFC using clustered shared volumes. With this configuration, both VMs have simultatenous write-access to the disk which results in the ReadWrite throttle being split across the two VMs and the ReadOnly throttle not being used.
@@ -121,8 +123,7 @@ The following is an example of a 2-node WSFC that isn't using clustered shared v
 
 #### Four node Linux cluster
 
-
-The following is an example of a 4-node Linux cluster with a single Writer and three scale-out Readers. With this configuration, only one VM has write-access to the disk. This results in the ReadWrite throttle being used exclusively for the primary VM and the ReadOnly throttle being split by the secondary VMs.
+The following is an example of a 4-node Linux cluster with a single writer and three scale-out readers. With this configuration, only one VM has write-access to the disk. This results in the ReadWrite throttle being used exclusively for the primary VM and the ReadOnly throttle being split by the secondary VMs.
 
 :::image type="complex" source="media/virtual-machines-disks-shared-disks/ultra-four-node-example.png" alt-text="Four node ultra throttling example":::
 
