Update troubleshoot-baremetalmachine-provisioning.md

Minor wording updates.

Author: bartpinto

articles/operator-nexus/troubleshoot-baremetalmachine-provisioning.md

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Name            ReadyState    ProvisioningState    DetailedStatus    DetailedSta
 BMM_NAME        RSTATE        PROV_STATE           STATUS            STATUS_MSG                                 POWER_STATE   BMM_ROLE                                          CREATE_DATE
 ```
 
-Where the output fields are the following:
+Where the output is defined as follows:
 | Output | Definition |
 | --- | --- |
 | BMM_NAME | BareMetal Machine Name |
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ The following conditions can cause provisioning failures:
 | Preboot eXecution Environment (PXE) MAC Address mismatch | BareMetal Machine Replace |
 | BMC MAC Address mismatch | BareMetal Machine Replace |
 | Boot Network Data not Retrieved from Redfish | Bounce Port, Remote Flea drain, Physical Flea Drain, BareMetal Machine Replace |
-| Disk Data not retrieved from Redfish | Re-seat Disk, Re-seat PERC, Remote Flea drain, Physical Flea Drain, BareMetal Machine Replace |
+| Disk Data not retrieved from Redfish | Re-seat Disk, Re-seat RAID Controller (PERC), Remote Flea drain, Physical Flea Drain, BareMetal Machine Replace |
 | BMC Unreachable | Bounce Port, Reseat Cable, Remote Flea drain, Physical Flea Drain, BareMetal Machine Replace |
 | BMC fails log in | Update Credentials on BMC, BareMetal Machine Replace |
 | DIMM, CPU, OEM Critical Errors | Resolve Hardware Issue, BareMetal Machine Replace |
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ The following conditions can cause provisioning failures:
 Look for failures related to invalid credentials or BMC unavailable.
 
 ### Determine BMC IPv4 address
-The IPv4 address of the BMC (BMC_IP) is the `Connect` value returned from the `BareMetal Machine Details` section (see above).
+The IPv4 address of the BMC (BMC_IP) is the `Connect` value returned from the `BareMetal Machine Details` section.
 
 ### Validate MAC address of BMM against BMC data
 
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ Attempt to run ping against the BMC IPv4 address:
 If the BMC_IP is not responsive, a reset of the fabric port retriggers autonegotiation on the port and may bring it back online.
 
 To find the `Network Fabric` port from Azure:
-1. Obtain the RackID and RackSlot from the previous `BareMetal Machine Details` section (see above).
+1. Obtain the RackID and RackSlot from the previous `BareMetal Machine Details` section.
 2. In `Azure Portal`, drill down to the `Network Rack` RackID for the BareMetal Machine Rack.
 3. Select `Network Devices` tab and the Management (Mgmt) switch for the rack.
 4. Under `Resources`, select `Network Interfaces` and then the interface for the BMC (iDRAC) or Boot (PXE) for the port that requires reset.
@@ -200,15 +200,15 @@ racadm serveraction powercycle
 For a physical flea drain, the local site hands physically disconnect the power cables from both power adapters for 5 minutes and then restore power. This process ensures the server, capacitors, and all components have complete power removal and all cached data are cleared.
 
 ### Reset NVRAM
-If provisioning failed due to an OEM or hardware error, the boot sequence may be locked in NVRAM to `PXE boot` instead of transitioning to `hdd` or `hard drive` boot. . 
+If provisioning failed due to an OEM or hardware error, the boot sequence may be locked in NVRAM to `PXE boot` instead of `hdd` or `hard drive` listed first in the boot order. 
 
 This condition typically shows the BareMetal Machine at the GRUB Bootloader on the console and is blocked without intervention. 
 
 To reset the NVRAM, use the following BMC Sequence:
 `Maintenance` -> `Diagnostics` -> `Reset iDrac to Factory Defaults` -> `Discard All Settings, but preserve user and network settings` -> `Apply and reboot`
 
 ### Reset BMC password
-If the Activity Log indicates invalid credentials on the BMC, the following can be run from a Jumpbox that has access to the BMC network:
+If the Activity Log indicates invalid credentials on the BMC, run the following command from a Jumpbox that has access to the BMC network:
 ```bash
 racadm -r $BMC_IP -u $BMC_USER -p $CURRENT_PASSWORD  set iDRAC.Users.2.Password $BMC_PWD
 ```