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articles/jenkins/deploy-jenkins-app-service-plugin.md

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ You can use the Jenkins plugin to deploy a web app in any language that is suppo
 > [!NOTE]
 > The Java JDK and Maven are required to build the Java project. Install these components on the Jenkins Master, or on the VM agent if you use the agent for continuous integration. 
 
-To install the components, log in to the Jenkins instance with SSH and run the following commands:
+To install the components, sign in to the Jenkins instance with SSH and run the following commands:
 
 ```bash
 sudo apt-get install -y openjdk-7-jdk
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ Web Apps on Linux also supports traditional deployment methods, like Git and FTP
 Before setting up the job in Jenkins, you need a web app on Linux. You also need a container registry to store and manage your private Docker container images. You can use DockerHub to create the container registry. In this example, we use Azure Container Registry.
 
 * [Create your web app on Linux](../app-service/containers/quickstart-nodejs.md).
-* Azure Container Registry is a managed [Docker Registry](https://docs.docker.com/registry/) service that is based on the open source Docker Registry version 2.0. [Create an Azure container registry](/azure/container-registry/container-registry-get-started-azure-cli). You can also use DockerHub.
+* Azure Container Registry is a managed [Docker Registry](https://docs.docker.com/registry/) service that is based on the open-source Docker Registry version 2.0. [Create an Azure container registry](/azure/container-registry/container-registry-get-started-azure-cli). You can also use DockerHub.
 
 ### Set up the Jenkins job for Docker
 

articles/jenkins/execute-cli-jenkins-pipeline.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Ensure you have version 1.2 or later:
 * Within the Jenkins dashboard, click **Manage Jenkins -> Plugin Manager ->** and search for **Azure Credential**. 
 * Update the plugin if the version is earlier than 1.2.
 
-Java JDK and Maven are also required in the Jenkins master. To install, log in to Jenkins master using SSH and run the following commands:
+Java JDK and Maven are also required in the Jenkins master. To install, sign in to Jenkins master using SSH and run the following commands:
 ```bash
 sudo apt-get install -y openjdk-7-jdk
 sudo apt-get install -y maven

articles/jenkins/install-jenkins-solution-template.md

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Select the **Build** tab, then select **Add build step**, **Invoke Gradle script
 
 ![Use the Gradle wrapper to build](./media/install-jenkins-solution-template/jenkins-job-gradle-config.png) 
 
-Select **Advanced..** and then enter `complete` in the **Root Build script** field. Select **Save**.
+Select **Advanced** and then enter `complete` in the **Root Build script** field. Select **Save**.
 
 ![Set advanced settings in the Gradle wrapper build step](./media/install-jenkins-solution-template/jenkins-job-gradle-advances.png) 
 

articles/jenkins/java-deploy-webapp-tutorial.md

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ You will perform the following tasks in this tutorial:
 
 To complete this tutorial, you need:
 
-* [Jenkins](https://jenkins.io/) with JDK and Maven tools configured . If you don't have a Jenkins system, create one now in Azure from the [Jenkins solution template](/azure/jenkins/install-jenkins-solution-template).
+* [Jenkins](https://jenkins.io/) with JDK and Maven tools configured. If you don't have a Jenkins system, create one now in Azure from the [Jenkins solution template](/azure/jenkins/install-jenkins-solution-template).
 * A [GitHub](https://github.com) account.
 * [Azure CLI 2.0](/cli/azure), either from your local command line or in the [Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/overview)
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Set up Jenkins to receive [GitHub webhooks](https://developer.github.com/webhook
 ## Configure the Azure App Service Jenkins plug-in
 
 1. In the Jenkins web console, select the **MyJavaApp** job you created and then select **Configure** on the left hand of the page.
-2. Scroll down to **Post-build Actions**, then select **Add post-build action** and choose **Publish an Azure Web App**.
+2. Scroll down to **Post-build Actions**, select **Add post-build action**, and choose **Publish an Azure Web App**.
 3. Under **Azure Profile Configuration**, select **Add** next to **Azure Credentials** and choose **Jenkins**.
 4. In the **Add Credentials** dialog, select **Microsoft Azure Service Principal** from the **Kind** drop-down.
 5. Create an Active Directory Service principal from the Azure CLI or [Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/overview).
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ Set up Jenkins to receive [GitHub webhooks](https://developer.github.com/webhook
 ## Deploy the app from GitHub
 
 1. From the Jenkins project, select **Build Now** to deploy the sample app to Azure.
-2. Once the build completes, your app is live on Azure at it's publishing URL , for example http://myjavaapp.azurewebsites.net.   
+2. Once the build completes, your app is live on Azure at its publishing URL, for example http://myjavaapp.azurewebsites.net.   
    ![View your deployed app on Azure](media/jenkins-java-quickstart/hello_docker_world_unedited.png)
 
 ## Push changes and redeploy

articles/jenkins/jenkins-azure-vm-agents.md

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ In the **Image Configuration** section of the plugin configuration, select **Ubu
 
 ![Configure VM OS and tools](./media/jenkins-azure-vm-agents/jenkins-os-config.png)
 
-Select **Add** next to **Admin Credentials**, then select **Jenkins**. Enter a username and password used to log in to the agents, making sure they satisfy the [username and password policy](/azure/virtual-machines/linux/faq#what-are-the-username-requirements-when-creating-a-vm) for administrative accounts on Azure VMs.
+Select **Add** next to **Admin Credentials**, then select **Jenkins**. Enter a username and password used to sign in to the agents, making sure they satisfy the [username and password policy](/azure/virtual-machines/linux/faq#what-are-the-username-requirements-when-creating-a-vm) for administrative accounts on Azure VMs.
 
 Select **Verify Template** to verify the configuration and then select **Save** to save your changes and return to the Jenkins dashboard.
 

articles/jenkins/overview.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.date: 07/25/2018
 
 [Jenkins](https://jenkins.io/) is a popular open-source automation server used to set up continuous integration and delivery (CI/CD) for your software projects. You can host your Jenkins deployment in Azure or extend your existing Jenkins configuration using Azure resources. Jenkins plugins are also available to simplify CI/CD of your applications to Azure.
 
-This article is an introduction to using Azure with Jenkins, detailing the core Azure features available to Jenkins users. To get started with your own Jenkins server in Azure, see our [quickstart](install-jenkins-solution-template.md).
+This article is an introduction to using Azure with Jenkins, detailing the core Azure features available to Jenkins users. For more information about getting started with your own Jenkins server in Azure, see [Create a Jenkins server on Azure](install-jenkins-solution-template.md).
 
 ## Host your Jenkins servers in Azure