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-title: Overview for EIoT networks
-description: Learn more about Microsoft Defender for IoT features and services, and understand how Microsoft Defender for IoT provides comprehensive IoT security for EIoT networks.
+title: Enterprise IoT network protection
+description: This article discusses Microsoft Defender for IoT features and services and how it helps provide comprehensive IoT security for enterprise IoT networks.
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.date: 12/27/2021
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 # Enterprise IoT network protection
 
-The Microsoft Defender for IoT team is responsible for securing IoT, and Operational Technology (OT) devices end-to-end whether they are connected to IT, OT, or dedicated IoT networks.  
+The Microsoft Defender for IoT team is responsible for securing IoT and operational technology (OT) devices end-to-end, whether they're connected to IT, OT, or dedicated IoT networks.  
 
-The enterprise IoT network protection extends the agentless capabilities to go beyond operational environments, and advance into the enterprise environments. This protection provides coverage for the entire breadth of IoT devices in your environment including corporate printers, cameras, to purpose-built devices, proprietary, and unique devices.
+Enterprise IoT network protection extends agentless capabilities beyond operational environments and into enterprise environments. This protection provides coverage for the entire breadth of IoT devices in these environments, devices that include corporate printers, cameras, and purpose-built or proprietary devices.
 
-The expansion into the enterprise network, creates a unique opportunity to apply Microsoft 365 Defender’s asset discovery capabilities.
+The expansion of IoT into the enterprise network creates a unique opportunity to apply the asset-discovery capabilities of Microsoft 365 Defender.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/overview-eiot/defender-for-endpoint-architecture.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Microsoft Defender for Endpoint integration architecture with Microsoft Defender for IoT.":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/overview-eiot/defender-for-endpoint-architecture.png" alt-text="Diagram illustrating the integration of Microsoft Defender for Endpoint architecture with Microsoft Defender for IoT.":::
 
-## Microsoft Defender for Endpoint integration
+## Integration with Microsoft Defender for Endpoint
 
-Microsoft Defender for IoT can now integrate with Microsoft Defender for Endpoint. This integration combines Microsoft Defender for Endpoint’s device discovery capabilities, with the agentless monitoring capabilities to secure enterprise IoT devices connected to an IT network (for example, Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP), printers, and smart TVs). The integration allows organizations to take advantage of a single integrated solution that secures all of their IoT, and OT infrastructure.
+You can now integrate Defender for IoT with Defender for Endpoint. When you do so, you're combining Defender for Endpoint device-discovery and agentless monitoring capabilities to help secure enterprise IoT devices that are connected to an IT network. Two examples of such devices are Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP) printers and smart TVs. The result of this integration is a single, integrated solution that helps secure your entire IoT and OT infrastructure.
 
-Microsoft Defender for IoT's sensors can now be used an additional data source providing visibility in area's of your organizations network where Microsoft Defender for Endpoint is not deployed and when employees are accessing information remotely. Microsoft Defender for IoT's sensors provide visibility into the IoT to IoT and the IoT to internet communications.
+With this integration, you can use Defender for IoT sensors as additional data sources. Defender for IoT sensors provide visibility into areas of your network where Defender for Endpoint is not deployed and employees need to access data remotely. These sensors also provide visibility into IoT-to-IoT and IoT-to-internet communications.
 
-Once this integration has been enabled, any devices discovered on the network by either Defender for Iot, or Microsoft Defender for Endpoint will be synced automatically across both portals.
+After you've enabled this integration, any devices that are discovered on the network by either Defender for Iot or Defender for Endpoint will be synced automatically across both portals.
 
-To learn how to integrate Microsoft Defender for Endpoint with your Microsoft Defender for IoT solution, see Microsoft Defender for Endpoint documentation.
+To learn how to integrate Defender for Endpoint with your Defender for IoT solution, see the Microsoft Defender for Endpoint documentation.
 
 ## Automatic discovery for IT, IoT, and OT
 
-Use passive agentless network monitoring to gain insight into your complete inventory of all your IT, IoT, and OT devices. The discovery process continuously identifies and classifies devices in your network, and resolves all device details. The discovery process is performed with zero impact to the network.  
+Use passive, agentless network monitoring to gain insight into your entire inventory of IT, IoT, and OT devices. The discovery process continuously identifies and classifies devices in your network, and it resolves all device details, with zero effect on the network.  
 
 ## Single pane of glass
 
-A centralized user experience lets the security team visualize, and secure all their IT, IoT, and OT devices regardless of where the devices are located.
+A centralized user experience lets your security team visualize and secure all IT, IoT, and OT devices, no matter where they're located.
 
 ## The power of unified SIEM and XDR  
 
-Microsoft Defender for IoT shares its high-resolution signal data with Microsoft Defender 365, and Microsoft Sentinel, to accelerate incident response and provide a bird's eye view across IT/OT/IoT boundaries, Microsoft Defender for IoT shares rich telemetry data seamlessly with Microsoft’s SIEM and XDR platforms—Microsoft Sentinel and Microsoft 365 Defender—and interoperates with other SOC tools such as Splunk, IBM QRadar, and ServiceNow. Azure Sentinel customers no longer need to switch consoles to put the story together!  
+Defender for IoT shares its high-resolution signal data with Microsoft Defender 365 and Microsoft Sentinel. This sharing accelerates incident response and provides a bird's eye view across IT, OT, and IoT boundaries. 
+
+Defender for IoT shares rich telemetry data seamlessly with security information and event management (SIEM) and extended detection and response (XDR) platforms, such as Microsoft Sentinel and Microsoft 365 Defender. It also interoperates with other Security Operations Center (SOC) tools, such as Splunk, IBM QRadar, and ServiceNow. Azure Sentinel customers no longer need to switch consoles to put the story together.  
 
 ## Easy deployment for a scalable solution
 
-Microsoft Defender for IoT ensures a quick, and frictionless deployment of network sensor  (physical, or virtual) appliances, Support is offered all of our teams if needed. Reach out to our customer support team with any issues.
+Defender for IoT helps ensure a quick, frictionless deployment of network sensor appliances, both physical and virtual. 
+
+If you experience any issues, we encourage you to contact our customer support team.
 
 ## See also
 
-Learn how to [Tutorial: Get started with Enterprise IoT](tutorial-getting-started-eiot-sensor.md).
+To learn more, see [Tutorial: Get started with enterprise IoT](tutorial-getting-started-eiot-sensor.md).