Pre-review fixes

Author: cynthn

articles/virtual-machines/azure-compute-gallery.md

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ For more information, see [Share using RBAC](./share-gallery.md).
 
 ### Shared directly to a tenant or subscription
 
-Give specific subscriptions or tenants access to an direct shared Azure Compute Gallery. Sharing a gallery with tenants and subscriptions give them read-only access to your gallery. For more information, see [Share a gallery with subscriptions or tenants](./share-gallery-direct.md).
+Give specific subscriptions or tenants access to a direct shared Azure Compute Gallery. Sharing a gallery with tenants and subscriptions give them read-only access to your gallery. For more information, see [Share a gallery with subscriptions or tenants](./share-gallery-direct.md).
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Azure Compute Gallery – direct shared gallery is currently in PREVIEW and subject to the [Preview Terms for Azure Compute Gallery](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).

articles/virtual-machines/create-gallery.md

@@ -127,15 +127,15 @@ PUT https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/{subscriptionId}/resourceGroups/{
 1. Complete all of the details on the page.
 1. At the bottom of the page, select **Next: Sharing method**.
     :::image type="content" source="media/create-gallery/create-gallery.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing where to select to go on to sharing methods.":::
-1. On the **Sharing** tab, select **xxxxxxxxx**.
+1. On the **Sharing** tab, select **RBAC + share directly**.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="media/create-gallery/sharing-type.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the option to share using both role-based access control and a community gallery.":::
+   :::image type="content" source="media/create-gallery/share-direct.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the option to share using both role-based access control and share directly.":::
 
-1. xxx
+1. When you are done, select **Review + create**.
 1. After validation passes, select **Create**.
 1. When the deployment is finished, select **Go to resource**.
 
-To start sharing the gallery with a subscription or tenant, use see [Share a gallery with a subscription or tenant](./share-gallery-direct.md).
+To start sharing the gallery with a subscription or tenant, see [Share a gallery with a subscription or tenant](./share-gallery-direct.md).
 
 ### [CLI](#tab/clidirect)
 

articles/virtual-machines/media/create-gallery/share-direct.png

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ During the preview:
 - Only the owner of a subscription, or a user or service principal assigned to the `Compute Gallery Sharing Admin` role at the subscription or gallery level will be able to enable group-based sharing.
 - You need to create a new gallery,  with the property `sharingProfile.permissions` set to `Groups`. When using the CLI to create a gallery, use the `--permissions groups` parameter. You can't use an existing gallery, the property can't currently be updated.
 - PowerShell, Ansible, and Terraform aren't supported at this time.
-- **Known issue**: When creating a VM from a direct shared image using the Azure portal, if you you select a region, select an image, then change the region, you will get an error message: "You can only create VM in the replication regions of this image" even when the image is replicated to that region. To get rid of the error, select a different region, then switch back to the region you want. If the image is available, it should clear the error message.
+- **Known issue**: When creating a VM from a direct shared image using the Azure portal, if you select a region, select an image, then change the region, you will get an error message: "You can only create VM in the replication regions of this image" even when the image is replicated to that region. To get rid of the error, select a different region, then switch back to the region you want. If the image is available, it should clear the error message.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/virtual-machines/share-gallery-direct.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ ms.custom: devx-track-azurecli, devx-track-azurepowershell
 
 Create a VM from a [specialized image version](./shared-image-galleries.md#generalized-and-specialized-images) stored in an Azure Compute Gallery (formerly known as Shared Image Gallery). If you want to create a VM using a generalized image version, see [Create a VM from a generalized image version](vm-generalized-image-version.md).
 
-This article shows how to create a VM from a a specialized image:
+This article shows how to create a VM from a specialized image:
 - [In your own gallery](#create-a-vm-from-your-gallery) 
 - Shared to a [community gallery](#create-a-vm-from-a-community-gallery-image)
 - [Directly shared to your subscription or tenant](#create-a-vm-from-a-gallery-shared-with-your-subscription-or-tenant)
@@ -28,9 +28,6 @@ This article shows how to create a VM from a a specialized image:
 > When you create a new VM from a specialized image, the new VM retains the computer name of the original VM. Other computer-specific information, like the CMID, is also kept. This duplicate information can cause issues. When copying a VM, be aware of what types of computer-specific information your applications rely on.  
 
 
-Replace resource names as needed in these examples.
-
-
 ## Create a VM from your gallery
 
 
@@ -296,7 +293,7 @@ az vm create\
 ### [Portal](#tab/portal2)
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> **Known issue**: In the Azure portal, if you you select a region, select an image, then change the region, you will get an error message: "You can only create VM in the replication regions of this image" even when the image is replicated to that region. To get rid of the error, select a different region, then switch back to the region you want. If the image is available, it should clear the error message.
+> **Known issue**: In the Azure portal, if you select a region, select an image, then change the region, you will get an error message: "You can only create VM in the replication regions of this image" even when the image is replicated to that region. To get rid of the error, select a different region, then switch back to the region you want. If the image is available, it should clear the error message.
 >
 > You can also use the Azure CLI to check what images are shared with you. For example, you can use `az sig list-shared --location westus" to see what images are shared with you in the West US region.