Learn Editor: Update release-notes-2024.md

Author: shellyhaverkamp

articles/healthcare-apis/release-notes-2024.md

@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ This article describes features, enhancements, and bug fixes released in 2024 fo
 
 ### FHIR service
 
-#### Scaling enhancement to Import operation
+#### Scaling enhancement to the Import operation
 
-The scaling logic for import operations has been improved enabling multiple jobs to be executed in parallel. This change has an impact on audit logs for import operation. Audit logs for individual import jobs will now have multiple rows, with each row corresponding to an internal processing job. 
+The scaling logic for import operations was improved, enabling multiple jobs to be executed in parallel. This change impacts audit logs for the import operation. Audit logs for individual import jobs have multiple rows, with each row corresponding to an internal processing job. 
 
-#### Bug Fixes
-- **Fixed: HTTP Status Code for Long-Running Requests** FHIR requests that take longer than 100 seconds to execute will now return an HTTP 408 status code instead of HTTP 500. 
-- **Fixed: History request in bundle** Prior to the fix, history request in a bundle returned HTTP status code 404.
+#### Bug fixes
+- **Fixed: HTTP status code for long-running requests**. FHIR requests that take longer than 100 seconds to execute return an HTTP 408 status code instead of HTTP 500. 
+- **Fixed: History request in bundle**. Prior to the fix, history request in a bundle returned HTTP status code 404.
 
 #### Stand-alone FHIR converter (preview)