updates for acrolinx

Author: TerryLanfear

articles/security/fundamentals/database-security-checklist.md

@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@ ms.subservice: security-fundamentals
 ms.topic: article
 ms.tgt_pltfrm: na
 ms.workload: na
-ms.date: 01/28/2023
+ms.date: 01/29/2023
 ms.author: terrylan
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 # Azure database security checklist
 
-To help improve security, Azure Database includes a number of built-in security controls that you can use to limit and control access.
+To help improve security, Azure Database includes many built-in security controls that you can use to limit and control access.
 
-These include:
+Security controls include:
 
 * A firewall that enables you to create [firewall rules](/azure/azure-sql/database/firewall-configure) limiting connectivity by IP address,
 * Server-level firewall accessible from the Azure portal
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ These include:
 Cloud computing requires new security paradigms that are unfamiliar to many application users, database administrators, and programmers. As a result, some organizations are hesitant to implement a cloud infrastructure for data management due to perceived security risks. However, much of this concern can be alleviated through a better understanding of the security features built into Microsoft Azure and Microsoft Azure SQL Database.
 
 ## Checklist
-We recommend that you read the [Azure Database Security Best Practices](/azure/azure-sql/database/security-best-practice)  article prior to reviewing this checklist. You will be able to get the most out of this checklist after you understand the best practices. You can then use this checklist to make sure that you've addressed the important issues in Azure database security.
+We recommend that you read the [Azure Database Security Best Practices](/azure/azure-sql/database/security-best-practice)  article prior to reviewing this checklist. You'll be able to get the most out of this checklist after you understand the best practices. You can then use this checklist to make sure that you've addressed the important issues in Azure database security.
 
 
 |Checklist Category| Description|
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ We recommend that you read the [Azure Database Security Best Practices](/azure/a
 |<br>Microsoft Defender for Cloud| <ul><li>[Data Monitoring](../../security-center/security-center-remediate-recommendations.md) Use Microsoft Defender for Cloud as a centralized security monitoring solution for SQL and other Azure services.</li></ul>|        
 
 ## Conclusion
-Azure Database is a robust database platform, with a full range of security features that meet many organizational and regulatory compliance requirements. You can easily protect data by controlling the physical access to your data, and using a variety of options for data security at the file-, column-, or row-level with Transparent Data Encryption, Cell-Level Encryption, or Row-Level Security. Always Encrypted also enables operations against encrypted data, simplifying the process of application updates. In turn, access to auditing logs of SQL Database activity provides you with the information you need, allowing you to know how and when data is accessed.
+Azure Database is a robust database platform, with a full range of security features that meet many organizational and regulatory compliance requirements. You can easily protect data by controlling the physical access to your data, and using various options for data security at the file-, column-, or row-level with Transparent Data Encryption, Cell-Level Encryption, or Row-Level Security. Always Encrypted also enables operations against encrypted data, simplifying the process of application updates. In turn, access to auditing logs of SQL Database activity provides you with the information you need, allowing you to know how and when data is accessed.
 
 ## Next steps
 You can improve the protection of your database against malicious users or unauthorized access with just a few simple steps. In this tutorial you learn to:

articles/security/fundamentals/event-support-ticket.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.subservice: security-fundamentals
 ms.topic: article
 ms.tgt_pltfrm: na
 ms.workload: na
-ms.date: 01/28/2023
+ms.date: 01/29/2023
 ms.author: terrylan
 
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@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ Visit the [Microsoft Security Response Center](https://msrc.microsoft.com/create
 You can also create a tailored, Azure support request in the Azure portal. Visit the Azure portal [here](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.Support). Follow the prompts to receive recommended solutions or to log a support request.
 
 ## Next steps
-[MSRC](https://msrc.microsoft.com/create-report) is part of the defender community. Learn more about how MSRC helps to protect customers and the broader ecosystm.
+[MSRC](https://msrc.microsoft.com/create-report) is part of the security community. Learn how MSRC helps to protect customers and the broader ecosystem.