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Author: v-ksreedevan

articles/migrate/add-server-credentials.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ The [Azure Migrate appliance](migrate-appliance.md) is a lightweight appliance u
 > [!Note]
 > Currently, the discovery of ASP.NET web apps is only available in the appliance used for discovery and assessment of servers running in a VMware environment.
 
-If you want to use these features, you can provide server credentials by following the steps below. In case of servers running on vCenter Server(s) and Hyper-V host(s)/cluster(s), the appliance will attempt to automatically map the credentials to the servers to perform the discovery features.
+If you want to use these features, you can provide server credentials by following the steps below. For servers running on vCenter Server(s) and Hyper-V host(s)/cluster(s), the appliance will attempt to automatically map the credentials to the servers to perform the discovery features.
 
 ## Add server credentials
 
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ The types of server credentials supported are listed in the table below:
 
 Type of credentials | Description
 --- | ---
-**Domain credentials** | You can add **Domain credentials** by selecting the option from the drop-down in the **Add credentials** modal. <br/><br/> To provide domain credentials, you need to specify the **Domain name** which must be provided in the FQDN format (for example, prod.corp.contoso.com). <br/><br/> You also need to specify a friendly name for credentials, username, and password. It is recommended to provide the credentials in the UPN format, for example, [email protected]. <br/><br/> The domain credentials added will be automatically validated for authenticity against the Active Directory of the domain. This is to prevent any account lockouts when the appliance attempts to map the domain credentials against discovered servers. <br/><br/>For the appliance to validate the domain credentials with the domain controller, it should be able to resolve the domain name. Ensure that you have provided the correct domain name while adding the credentials else the validation will fail.<br/><br/> The appliance will not attempt to map the domain credentials that have failed validation. You need to have at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one non-domain credential to start the discovery.<br/><br/>The domain credentials mapped automatically against the Windows servers will be used to perform software inventory and can also be used to discover web apps, and SQL Server instances and databases _(if you have configured Windows authentication mode on your SQL Servers)_.<br/> [Learn more](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/authentication-in-sql-server) about the types of authentication modes supported on SQL Servers.
+**Domain credentials** | You can add **Domain credentials** by selecting the option from the drop-down in the **Add credentials** modal. <br/><br/> To provide domain credentials, you need to specify the **Domain name** which must be provided in the FQDN format (for example, prod.corp.contoso.com). <br/><br/> You also need to specify a friendly name for credentials, username, and password. It's recommended to provide the credentials in the UPN format, for example, [email protected]. <br/><br/> The domain credentials added will be automatically validated for authenticity against the Active Directory of the domain. This is to prevent any account lockouts when the appliance attempts to map the domain credentials against discovered servers. <br/><br/> To validate the domain credentials with the domain controller, the appliance should be able to resolve the domain name. Ensure that you've provided the correct domain name while adding the credentials else the validation will fail.<br/><br/> The appliance won't attempt to map the domain credentials that have failed validation. You need to have at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one non-domain credential to start the discovery.<br/><br/>The domain credentials mapped automatically against the Windows servers will be used to perform software inventory and can also be used to discover web apps, and SQL Server instances and databases _(if you've configured Windows authentication mode on your SQL Servers)_.<br/> [Learn more](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/authentication-in-sql-server) about the types of authentication modes supported on SQL Servers.
 **Non-domain credentials (Windows/Linux)** | You can add **Windows (Non-domain)** or **Linux (Non-domain)** by selecting the required option from the drop-down in the **Add credentials** modal. <br/><br/> You need to specify a friendly name for credentials, username, and password.
-**SQL Server Authentication credentials** | You can add **SQL Server Authentication** credentials by selecting the option from the drop-down in the **Add credentials** modal. <br/><br/> You need to specify a friendly name for credentials, username, and password. <br/><br/> You can add this type of credentials to discover SQL Server instances and databases running in your VMware environment, if you have configured SQL Server authentication mode on your SQL Servers.<br/> [Learn more](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/authentication-in-sql-server) about the types of authentication modes supported on SQL Servers.<br/><br/> You need to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one Windows (Non-domain) credential so that the appliance can complete the software inventory to discover SQL installed on the servers before it uses the SQL Server authentication credentials to discover the SQL Server instances and databases.
+**SQL Server Authentication credentials** | You can add **SQL Server Authentication** credentials by selecting the option from the drop-down in the **Add credentials** modal. <br/><br/> You need to specify a friendly name for credentials, username, and password. <br/><br/> You can add this type of credentials to discover SQL Server instances and databases running in your VMware environment, if you've configured SQL Server authentication mode on your SQL Servers.<br/> [Learn more](/dotnet/framework/data/adonet/sql/authentication-in-sql-server) about the types of authentication modes supported on SQL Servers.<br/><br/> You need to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one Windows (Non-domain) credential so that the appliance can complete the software inventory to discover SQL installed on the servers before it uses the SQL Server authentication credentials to discover the SQL Server instances and databases.
 
 > [!Note]
 > Currently, the SQL Server authentication credentials can only be provided in appliance used for discovery and assessment of servers running in VMware environment.
@@ -51,19 +51,19 @@ Feature | Windows credentials | Linux credentials
 
 ### Recommended practices to provide credentials
 
-- It is recommended to create a dedicated domain user account with the [required permissions](add-server-credentials.md#required-permissions), which is scoped to perform software inventory, agentless dependency analysis and discovery of web app, and SQL Server instances and databases on the desired servers.
-- It is recommended to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one non-domain credential to initiate software inventory.
-- To discover SQL Server instances and databases, you can provide domain credentials, if you have configured Windows authentication mode on your SQL Servers.
-- You can also provide SQL Server authentication credentials if you have configured SQL Server authentication mode on your SQL Servers but it is recommended to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one Windows (Non-domain) credential so that the appliance can first complete the software inventory.
+- It's recommended to create a dedicated domain user account with the [required permissions](add-server-credentials.md#required-permissions), which is scoped to perform software inventory, agentless dependency analysis and discovery of web app, and SQL Server instances and databases on the desired servers.
+- It's recommended to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one non-domain credential to initiate software inventory.
+- To discover SQL Server instances and databases, you can provide domain credentials, if you've configured Windows authentication mode on your SQL Servers.
+- You can also provide SQL Server authentication credentials if you've configured SQL Server authentication mode on your SQL Servers but it's recommended to provide at least one successfully validated domain credential or at least one Windows (Non-domain) credential so that the appliance can first complete the software inventory.
 
 ## Credentials handling on appliance
 
 - All the credentials provided on the appliance configuration manager are stored locally on the appliance server and not sent to Azure.
 - The credentials stored on the appliance server are encrypted using Data Protection API (DPAPI).
-- After you have added credentials, appliance attempts to automatically map the credentials to perform discovery on the respective servers.
+- After you've added credentials, appliance attempts to automatically map the credentials to perform discovery on the respective servers.
 - The appliance uses the credentials automatically mapped on a server for all the subsequent discovery cycles until the credentials are able to fetch the required discovery data. If the credentials stop working, appliance again attempts to map from the list of added credentials and continue the ongoing discovery on the server.
-- The domain credentials added will be automatically validated for authenticity against the Active Directory of the domain. This is to prevent any account lockouts when the appliance attempts to map the domain credentials against discovered servers. The appliance will not attempt to map the domain credentials that have failed validation.
-- If the appliance cannot map any domain or non-domain credentials against a server, you will see "Credentials not available" status against the server in your project.
+- The domain credentials added will be automatically validated for authenticity against the Active Directory of the domain. This is to prevent any account lockouts when the appliance attempts to map the domain credentials against discovered servers. The appliance won't attempt to map the domain credentials that have failed validation.
+- If the appliance can't map any domain or non-domain credentials against a server, you'll see "Credentials not available" status against the server in your project.
 
 ## Next steps