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Author: Bharathi Selvaraj

articles/energy-data-services/how-to-enable-eds.md

@@ -15,11 +15,16 @@ ms.date: 03/14/2024
 
 External Data Sources (EDS) is a capability in [OSDU™](https://osduforum.org/) that allows data from an [OSDU™](https://osduforum.org/) compliant external data source to be shared with an Azure Data Manager for Energy resource. EDS is designed to pull specified data (metadata) from OSDU-compliant data sources via scheduled jobs while leaving associated dataset files (LAS, SEG-Y, etc.) stored at the external source for retrieval on demand.
 
-See [The OSDU Forum 2Q 2022 Newsletter - EDS](https://osduforum.org/wp-content/uploads/2022/06/The-OSDU-Forum-2Q-2022-Newsletter.pdf) for additional details  
+See [The OSDU Forum 2Q 2022 Newsletter - EDS](https://osduforum.org/wp-content/uploads/2022/06/The-OSDU-Forum-2Q-2022-Newsletter.pdf) for additional details.  
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > OSDU community shipped EDS as a preview feature in M18 Release
 
+> [!IMPORTANT]
+> Limit your Identity Provider (IdP) token to read operations only.
+>
+> Protect your search and delivery wrapper APIs from unauthorized access. As a best practice, ensure only Azure Data Manager for Energy can access data through your wrapper APIs. This helps with data discovery and delivery for EDS Preview.
+
 ## Prerequisites
 
 1. Create a new or use an existing key vault to store secrets managed by [OSDU™](https://osduforum.org/) secret service. To learn how to create a key vault with the Azure portal, see  [Quickstart: Create a key vault using the Azure portal](../key-vault/general/quick-create-portal.md).
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@ See [The OSDU Forum 2Q 2022 Newsletter - EDS](https://osduforum.org/wp-content/u
 1. In the **Access configuration** tab, under **Permission model** select **Vault access policy**: 
     [![Screenshot of create a key vault.](media/how-to-enable-eds/create-a-key-vault.jpg)](media/how-to-enable-eds/create-a-key-vault.jpg#lightbox)
 1. Give permission to Azure Data Manager for Energy Service Principal (SPN) on key vault (existing or new). How to give access to Azure Data Manager for Energy SPN - [Assign an Azure Key Vault access policy (CLI) | Microsoft Learn](../key-vault/general/assign-access-policy.md?tabs=azure-portal).
-    1. Under **Access Policies**, select **+ Create** to create an access policy: 
+    1. Under **Access Policies**, select **Create** to create an access policy: 
         1. In the Permissions tab, select the permissions:
         [![Screenshot of select permissions.](media/how-to-enable-eds/select-permissions.jpg)](media/how-to-enable-eds/select-permissions.jpg#lightbox) 
         1. Under the Principal selection pane, enter `AzureEnergyRpaaSAppProd`.
@@ -44,13 +49,17 @@ See [The OSDU Forum 2Q 2022 Newsletter - EDS](https://osduforum.org/wp-content/u
 To enable External Data Source Preview on your Azure Data Manager for Energy, create an Azure support ticket with the following information: 
 - Subscription ID 
 - Azure Data Manager for Energy developer tier resource name
-- Data partition name (the data partition in which EDS needs to be enabled) 
+- Data partition name (the data partition in which EDS needs to be enabled)
 - Key Vault name (created in [Prerequisites](#prerequisites)) 
 
 > [!NOTE]
+> EDS ingest does not have [multi data partition support](https://community.opengroup.org/osdu/platform/data-flow/ingestion/external-data-sources/core-external-data-workflow/-/issues/51)
+> 
 > EDS Preview will be enabled only on the Developer Tier. 
 
-We notify you once EDS preview is enabled in your subscription.
+
+
+We notify you once EDS preview is enabled in your Azure Data Manager for Energy resource.
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [How to register an external data source with Azure Data Manager for Energy?](how-to-register-eds.md)