edit pass: tutorial-develop-for-linux-on-windows

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/iot-edge/includes/iot-edge-version-1.4.md

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 **Applies to:** ![IoT Edge 1.4 checkmark](./media/iot-edge-version/yes-icon.png) IoT Edge 1.4
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> IoT Edge 1.5 LTS and IoT Edge 1.4 are [supported releases](../support.md#releases). IoT Edge 1.4 LTS is end of life on November 12, 2024. If you are on an earlier release, see [Update IoT Edge](../how-to-update-iot-edge.md).
+> Azure IoT Edge 1.5 LTS and IoT Edge 1.4 are [supported releases](../support.md#releases). IoT Edge 1.4 LTS is reaching the end of service on November 12, 2024. If you're on an earlier release, see [Update IoT Edge](../how-to-update-iot-edge.md).