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Author: tarTech23

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/device-inventory.md

@@ -19,7 +19,6 @@ For example:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/device-inventory/azure-device-inventory.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Defender for IoT Device inventory page in the Azure portal." lightbox="media/device-inventory/azure-device-inventory.png":::
 
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 ## Supported devices
 
 Defender for IoT's device inventory supports the following device classes:
@@ -49,7 +48,6 @@ Defender for IoT device inventory is available in the following locations:
 | **Microsoft Defender XDR** | Enterprise IoT devices detected by Microsoft Defender for Endpoint agents | Correlate devices across Microsoft Defender XDR in purpose-built alerts, vulnerabilities, and recommendations. |
 |**OT network sensor consoles**     |   Devices detected by that OT sensor      |    - View all detected devices across a network device map<br><br>- View related events on the **Event timeline** |
 |**An on-premises management console**     |  Devices detected across all connected OT sensors          | Enhance device data by importing data manually or via script  |
-| 
 
 For more information, see:
 
@@ -101,7 +99,7 @@ The following table lists the columns available in the Defender for IoT device i
 > [!NOTE]
 > Noted features listed below are in PREVIEW. The [Azure Preview Supplemental Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/) include other legal terms that apply to Azure features that are in beta, preview, or otherwise not yet released into general availability.
 
-|Name  |Description
+|Name  |Description |
 |---------|---------|
 |**Authorization** *   |Editable. Determines whether or not the device is marked as *authorized*. This value might need to change as the device security changes.  |
 |**Business Function**     | Editable. Describes the device's business function. |

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/ot-deploy/update-device-inventory.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 
 # Verify and update your detected device inventory
 
-This article is one in a series of articles describing the [deployment path](../ot-deploy/ot-deploy-path.md) for OT monitoring with Microsoft Defender for IoT, and describes how to review your device inventory and enhance security monitoring with fine-tuned device details.
+This article is one in a series of articles describing the [deployment path](../ot-deploy/ot-deploy-path.md) for Opertaional Technology (OT) monitoring with Microsoft Defender for IoT, and describes how to review your device inventory and enhance security monitoring with fine-tuned device details.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/deployment-paths/progress-fine-tuning-ot-monitoring.png" alt-text="Diagram of a progress bar with Fine-tune OT monitoring highlighted." border="false" lightbox="../media/deployment-paths/progress-fine-tuning-ot-monitoring.png":::
 
@@ -21,15 +21,15 @@ Before performing the procedures in this article, make sure that you have:
 
 This step is performed by your deployment teams.
 
-## View your device inventory on the Azure portal
+## View the device inventory on your OT sensor
 
 1. Sign into your OT sensor and select the **Device inventory** page.
 
-1. Select **Edit Columns** to view additional information in the grid so that you can review the data detected for each device.
+1. Select **Edit Columns** to make changes to the grid layout and display more data fields for reviewing the data detected for each device.
 
-    We especially recommend reviewing data for the **Name**, **Class**, **Type**, and **Subtype**, **Authorization**, **Scanner device**, and **Programming device** columns.
+    We especially recommend reviewing data for the **Name**, **Type**, **Authorization**, **Scanner device**, and **Programming device** columns.
 
-1. Understand the devices that the OT sensor's detected, and identify any sensors where you'll need to identify device properties.
+1. Review the devices listed in the device inventory, and identify the devices whose device properties must be edited.
 
 ## Edit device properties per device
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ For each device where you need to edit device properties:
 
 ## Merge duplicate devices
 
-As you review the devices detected on your device inventory, note whether multiple entries have been detected for the same device on your network.
+As you review the devices detected on your device inventory, note whether multiple entries were detected for the same device on your network.
 
 For example, this might occur when you have a PLC with four network cards, a laptop with both WiFi and a physical network card, or a single workstation with multiple network cards.
 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ The devices and all their properties are merged in the device inventory. For exa
 
 ## Enhance device data (optional)
 
-You may want to increase device visibility and enhance device data with more details than the default data detected.
+You might want to increase device visibility and enhance device data with more details than the default data detected.
 
 - To increase device visibility to Windows-based devices, use the Defender for IoT [Windows Management Instrumentation (WMI) tool](../detect-windows-endpoints-script.md).