Raise acrolinx scores to merge

Author: cwatson-cat

articles/sentinel/multiple-workspace-view.md

@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ If you onboard Microsoft Sentinel to the Microsoft Defender portal, see [Microso
 
 ## Entering multiple workspace view
 
-When you open Microsoft Sentinel, you are presented with a list of all the workspaces to which you have access rights, across all selected tenants and subscriptions. To the left of each workspace name is a checkbox. Selecting the name of a single workspace will bring you into that workspace. To choose multiple workspaces, select all the corresponding checkboxes, and then select the **View incidents** button at the top of the page.
+When you open Microsoft Sentinel, you're presented with a list of all the workspaces to which you have access rights, across all selected tenants and subscriptions. Selecting the name of a single workspace brings you into that workspace. To choose multiple workspaces, select all the corresponding checkboxes, and then select the **View incidents** button at the top of the page.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Multiple Workspace View now supports a maximum of 100 concurrently displayed workspaces.
 >
 
-Note that in the list of workspaces, you can see the directory, subscription, location, and resource group associated with each workspace. The directory corresponds to the tenant.
+In the list of workspaces, you can see the directory, subscription, location, and resource group associated with each workspace. The directory corresponds to the tenant.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/multiple-workspace-view/workspaces.png" alt-text="Screenshot of selecting multiple workspaces.":::
 
@@ -40,11 +40,11 @@ Multiple workspace view is currently available only for incidents. This page loo
 
 - The counters at the top of the page - *Open incidents*, *New incidents*, *Active incidents*, etc. - show the numbers for all of the selected workspaces collectively.
 
-- You'll see incidents from all of the selected workspaces and directories (tenants) in a single unified list. You can filter the list by workspace and directory, in addition to the filters from the regular **Incidents** screen.
+- You see incidents from all of the selected workspaces and directories (tenants) in a single unified list. You can filter the list by workspace and directory, in addition to the filters from the regular **Incidents** screen.
 
-- You'll need to have read and write permissions on all the workspaces from which you've selected incidents. If you have only read permissions on some workspaces, you'll see warning messages if you select incidents in those workspaces. You won't be able to modify those incidents or any others you've selected together with those (even if you do have permissions for the others).
+- You need to have read and write permissions on all the workspaces from which you've selected incidents. If you have only read permissions on some workspaces, you see warning messages if you select incidents in those workspaces. You aren't able to modify those incidents or any others you've selected together with those (even if you do have permissions for the others).
 
-- If you choose a single incident and click **View full details** or **Actions** > **Investigate**, you will from then on be in the data context of that incident's workspace and no others.
+- If you choose a single incident and select **View full details** or **Actions** > **Investigate**, you'll from then on be in the data context of that incident's workspace and no others.
 
 ## Next steps