Merge pull request #234333 from husamhilal/main

Updated information related to scaling up AVS cluster

Author: American-Dipper

articles/azure-vmware/introduction.md

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 # What is Azure VMware Solution?
 
-Azure VMware Solution provides you with private clouds that contain VMware vSphere clusters built from dedicated bare-metal Azure infrastructure. Azure VMware Solution is available in Azure Commercial and in Public Preview in Azure Government.The minimum initial deployment is three hosts, but more hosts can be added one at a time, up to a maximum of 16 hosts per cluster. All provisioned private clouds have VMware vCenter Server, VMware vSAN, VMware vSphere, and VMware NSX-T Data Center. As a result, you can migrate workloads from your on-premises environments, deploy new virtual machines (VMs), and consume Azure services from your private clouds. For information about the SLA, see the [Azure service-level agreements](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/sla/azure-vmware/v1_1/) page.
+Azure VMware Solution provides you with private clouds that contain VMware vSphere clusters built from dedicated bare-metal Azure infrastructure. Azure VMware Solution is available in Azure Commercial and in Public Preview in Azure Government.The minimum initial deployment is three hosts, but more hosts can be added, up to a maximum of 16 hosts per cluster. All provisioned private clouds have VMware vCenter Server, VMware vSAN, VMware vSphere, and VMware NSX-T Data Center. As a result, you can migrate workloads from your on-premises environments, deploy new virtual machines (VMs), and consume Azure services from your private clouds. For information about the SLA, see the [Azure service-level agreements](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/sla/azure-vmware/v1_1/) page.
 
 Azure VMware Solution is a VMware validated solution with ongoing validation and testing of enhancements and upgrades. Microsoft manages and maintains the private cloud infrastructure and software. It allows you to focus on developing and running workloads in your private clouds to deliver business value.
 
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 ## AV36P and AV52 node sizes available in Azure VMware Solution
 
- The new node sizes increase memory and storage options to optimize your workloads. The gains in performance enable you to do more per server, break storage bottlenecks, and lower transaction costs of latency-sensitive workloads. The availability of the new nodes allow for large latency-sensitive services to be hosted efficiently on the Azure VMware Solution infrastructure.
+ The new node sizes increase memory and storage options to optimize your workloads. The gains in performance enable you to do more per server, break storage bottlenecks, and lower transaction costs of latency-sensitive workloads. The availability of the new nodes allows for large latency-sensitive services to be hosted efficiently on the Azure VMware Solution infrastructure.
 
 **AV36P key highlights for Memory and Storage optimized Workloads:**
 

articles/azure-vmware/media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss5-add-hosts-to-cluster.png

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    :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss2-select-add-cluster.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to add a cluster to an Azure VMware Solution private cloud." lightbox="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss2-select-add-cluster.png" border="true":::
 
-1. Use the slider to select the number of hosts and then select **Save**.
+2. Use the slider to select the number of hosts and then select **Save**.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss3-configure-new-cluster.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to configure a new cluster." lightbox="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss3-configure-new-cluster.png" border="true":::
 
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 1. In your Azure VMware Solution private cloud, under **Manage**, select **Clusters**.
 
-1. Select the cluster you want to scale, select **More** (...), then select **Edit**.
+2. Select the cluster you want to scale, select **More** (...), then select **Edit**.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss4-select-scale-private-cloud-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing where to edit an existing cluster." lightbox="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss4-select-scale-private-cloud-2.png" border="true":::
 
-1. Use the slider to select the number of hosts and then select **Save**.
+3. Click **Add Host** to add a host to the cluster. Repeat that to reach the desired number of hosts, and then select **Save**.
+
+   :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss5-add-hosts-to-cluster.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing how to add additional hosts to an existing cluster." lightbox="media/tutorial-scale-private-cloud/ss5-add-hosts-to-cluster.png" border="true":::
 
    The addition of hosts to the cluster begins.
 
+   >[!NOTE] 
+   >The hosts will be added to the cluster in parallel.
+
 ## Next steps
 
 If you require another Azure VMware Solution private cloud, [create another private cloud](tutorial-create-private-cloud.md) following the same networking prerequisites, cluster, and host limits.