Copy edits + add packet core to release notes

Author: b-branco

articles/private-5g-core/azure-private-5g-core-release-notes-2210.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 11/01/2022
 
 # Azure Private 5G Core 2210 release notes
 
-The following release notes identify the new features, critical open issues, and resolved issues for the 2210 release for the Azure Private 5G Core (AP5GC). The release notes are continuously updated, and critical issues requiring a workaround are added here as they're discovered. Before deploying this new version, carefully review the information contained in these release notes.
+The following release notes identify the new features, critical open issues, and resolved issues for the 2210 release for the Azure Private 5G Core (AP5GC) packet core. The release notes are continuously updated, and critical issues requiring a workaround are added here as they're discovered. Before deploying this new version, carefully review the information contained in these release notes.
 
 This article applies to the AP5GC 2210 release (PMN-4-18-0). This release is compatible with the ASE Pro GPU running the ASE 2209 release and is supported by the 2022-04-01-preview [Microsoft.MobileNetwork API version](/rest/api/mobilenetwork).
 

articles/private-5g-core/whats-new.md

@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@ ms.date: 10/24/2022
 
 # What's new in Azure Private 5G Core?
 
-The Azure Private 5G Core online services and packet core (edge components) receive improvements on an ongoing basis. To help you stay up to date with the most recent developments, this article provides:
+The Azure Private 5G Core online services and packet core receive improvements on an ongoing basis. To help you stay up to date with the most recent developments, this article describes:
 
-- Details of new online services features.
-- Details of improvements to existing online services features.
+- New features for the online services.
+- Improvements to existing features for the online services.
 - Online services bug fixes.
-- Notifications of new packet core releases. These updates will link to the relevant release note for further information.
+- New packet core releases. These updates will link to the relevant release notes for further information.
 
 This page is updated on a monthly basis to list what's new with Azure Private 5G Core since the previous month's update. <!-- TODO: update with agreed update frequency -->
 <!-- In future: If you're looking for items older than six months, you can find them in Archive for What's new in Azure Private 5G Core. -->