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Author: v-albemi

articles/app-service/includes/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3.md

@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@ ms.author: daberry
 ms.topic: include
 ms.date: 01/29/2022
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-After saving, the page will refresh and display the address for the remote Git repository.<br>
+After you save the page, it will refresh and display the address for the remote Git repository.<br>
 <br>
 Copy the value of the **Git Clone Uri** as this value will be used to set up a Git remote in a later step.

articles/app-service/includes/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ ms.author: daberry
 ms.topic: include
 ms.date: 07/26/2023
 ---
-On the *Deployment Center* page
+On the *Deployment Center* page:
 
 1. Navigate to the **Local Git/FTPS credentials** tab.
 1. Locate the local git username and password under the **Application scope** credentials.

articles/app-service/includes/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git.md

@@ -10,32 +10,32 @@ You can deploy your application code from a local Git repository to Azure by con
 
 | Instructions    | Screenshot |
 |:----------------|-----------:|
-| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 1](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to locate your App Service using the search toolbar at the top of the Azure portal." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1.png"::: |
-| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 2](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to navigate to the deployment center in App Service and select Local Git as the deployment method." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2.png"::: |
-| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 3](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing the deployment center after saving and the remote Git URL to use for deployments." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3.png"::: |
-| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 4](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing the location of the deployment credentials in the deployment center in App Service." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4.png"::: |
+| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 1.](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to locate your App Service using the search toolbar at the top of the Azure portal." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-1.png"::: |
+| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 2.](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to navigate to the deployment center in App Service and select Local Git as the deployment method." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-2.png"::: |
+| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 3.](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing the deployment center after saving and the remote Git URL to use for deployments." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-3.png"::: |
+| [!INCLUDE [Deploy local Git Azure portal 4.](./deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4.md)] | :::image type="content" source="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4-240px.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing the location of the deployment credentials in the deployment center in App Service." lightbox="../../media/quickstart-python/deploy-local-git-azure-portal-4.png"::: |
 
 Next, in the root directory of your application, configure a [Git remote](https://git-scm.com/book/en/v2/Git-Basics-Working-with-Remotes) that points to Azure using the Git URL of the Azure remote obtained in a previous step.
 
 ```bash
 git remote add azure <git-deployment-url>
 ```
 
-You can now push code from your local Git repository to Azure using the Git remote you just configured. The default deployment branch for App Service is `master`, but many Git repositories are moving away from `master` to `main`. You can either specify the mapping from local branch name to remote branch name in the push (as shown below), or you can configure your [`DEPLOYMENT_BRANCH` app setting](../../deploy-local-git.md?tabs=cli#change-deployment-branch).
+You can now push code from your local Git repository to Azure using the Git remote you just configured. The default deployment branch for App Service is `master`, but many Git repositories are moving away from `master` and using `main`. You can either specify the mapping from local branch name to remote branch name in the push (as shown below), or you can configure your [`DEPLOYMENT_BRANCH` app setting](../../deploy-local-git.md?tabs=cli#change-deployment-branch).
 
 ```bash
 git push azure main:master
 ```
 
-The first time you push code to Azure, Git will prompt you for the Azure deployment credentials you obtained in the previous step. Git will then cache these credentials so you won't have to reenter them on subsequent deployments.
+The first time you push code to Azure, Git will prompt you for the Azure deployment credentials you obtained in the previous step. Git will then cache these credentials so you won't have to re-enter them on subsequent deployments.
 
 ### [Azure CLI](#tab/deploy-instructions-azcli)
 
 First, configure the deployment source for your web app to be local Git using the `az webapp deployment source` command.  This command will output the URL of the remote Git repository that you will be pushing code to.  Make a copy of this value as you will need it in a later step.
 
 [!INCLUDE [CLI deploy configure](./deploy-local-instructions-cli-1.md)]
 
-Retrieve the deployment credentials for your application.  These will be needed for Git to authenticate to Azure when you push code to Azure in a later step.
+Retrieve the deployment credentials for your application. Git will need these to authenticate to Azure when you push code to Azure in a later step.
 
 [!INCLUDE [CLI deploy retrieve credentials](./deploy-local-instructions-cli-2.md)]
 
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ Next, in the root directory of your application, configure a [Git remote](https:
 git remote add azure <git-deployment-url>
 ```
 
-You can now push code from your local Git repository to Azure using the Git remote you just configured. The default deployment branch for App Service is `master`, but many Git repositories are moving away from `master` to `main`. You can either specify the mapping from local branch name to remote branch name in the push (as shown below), or you can configure your [`DEPLOYMENT_BRANCH` app setting](../../deploy-local-git.md?tabs=cli#change-deployment-branch).
+You can now push code from your local Git repository to Azure using the Git remote you just configured. The default deployment branch for App Service is `master`, but many Git repositories are moving away from `master` and using `main`. You can either specify the mapping from local branch name to remote branch name in the push (as shown below), or you can configure your [`DEPLOYMENT_BRANCH` app setting](../../deploy-local-git.md?tabs=cli#change-deployment-branch).
 
 ```bash
 git push azure main:master
 ```
 
-The first time you push code to Azure, Git will prompt you for the Azure deployment credentials you obtained in a previous step. Git will then cache these credentials so you won't have to reenter them on subsequent deployments.
+The first time you push code to Azure, Git will prompt you for the Azure deployment credentials you obtained in a previous step. Git will then cache these credentials so you won't have to re-enter them on subsequent deployments.

articles/app-service/includes/quickstart-python/stream-logs-visual-studio-code-2.md

@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@ ms.author: daberry
 ms.topic: include
 ms.date: 01/29/2022
 ---
-The console logs appear in VS Code's Output window. Refresh the home page in the app or attempt other requests to generate some log messages.<br>
+The console logs appear in the VS Code Output window. Refresh the home page in the app or attempt other requests to generate some log messages.<br>
 <br>
 You will see any log messages generated by your app as well as other messages generated by the service in the output.

articles/app-service/quickstart-python.md

@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ Azure App Service supports multiple methods to deploy your application code to A
 
 ---
 
-Having issues? Refer first to the [Troubleshooting guide](./configure-language-python.md#troubleshooting), otherwise, [let us know](https://aka.ms/PythonAppServiceQuickstartFeedback).
+Having issues? Refer first to the [Troubleshooting guide](./configure-language-python.md#troubleshooting). If that doesn't help, [let us know](https://aka.ms/PythonAppServiceQuickstartFeedback).
 
 ## Configure startup script
 
@@ -283,19 +283,19 @@ For FastAPI, you must configure a custom startup command for App Service to run
 
 ## Browse to the app
 
-Browse to the deployed application in your web browser at the URL `http://<app-name>.azurewebsites.net`. If you see a default app page, wait a minute and refresh the browser.
+Browse to the deployed application in your web browser by using the URL `http://<app-name>.azurewebsites.net`. If you see a default app page, wait a minute and refresh the browser.
 
 The Python sample code is running a Linux container in App Service using a built-in image.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-python/run-app-azure.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the app running in Azure":::
 
 **Congratulations!** You've deployed your Python app to App Service.
 
-Having issues? Refer first to the [Troubleshooting guide](./configure-language-python.md#troubleshooting), otherwise, [let us know](https://aka.ms/PythonAppServiceQuickstartFeedback).
+Having issues? Refer first to the [Troubleshooting guide](./configure-language-python.md#troubleshooting). If that doesn't help, [let us know](https://aka.ms/PythonAppServiceQuickstartFeedback).
 
 ## Stream logs
 
-Azure App Service captures all messages output to the console to assist you in diagnosing issues with your application. The sample apps include `print()` statements to demonstrate this capability.
+Azure App Service captures all message output to the console to assist you in diagnosing issues with your application. The sample apps include `print()` statements to demonstrate this capability.
 
 ### [Flask](#tab/flask)
 
@@ -311,11 +311,11 @@ Azure App Service captures all messages output to the console to assist you in d
 
 ---
 
-The contents of the App Service diagnostic logs can be reviewed using the Azure CLI, VS Code, or Azure portal.
+You can review the contents of the App Service diagnostic logs by using the Azure CLI, VS Code, or the Azure portal.
 
 ### [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
-First, you need to configure Azure App Service to output logs to the App Service filesystem using the [az webapp log config](/cli/azure/webapp/log#az-webapp-log-config) command.
+First, you need to configure Azure App Service to output logs to the App Service filesystem by using the [az webapp log config](/cli/azure/webapp/log#az-webapp-log-config) command.
 
 [!INCLUDE [CLI stream logs configure](./includes/quickstart-python/stream-logs-cli-1.md)]