edit pass: neon-serverless-postgres-ga

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/partner-solutions/includes/view-edit-connection.md

@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ ms.date: 02/25/2025
 ms.author: malev
 ---
 
-To review, edit or delete your existing connections:
+To review, edit, or delete your existing connections:
 
-1. Navigate to your application in the Azure portal and open Service Connector from the left menu.
+1. Go to your application in the Azure portal. On the left menu, open **Service Connector**.
 
 1. Select a connection's checkbox and explore the following options:
 

articles/partner-solutions/neon/create-service-connection.md

@@ -31,24 +31,24 @@ Follow these steps to connect an app to Neon Serverless Postgres:
 
      :::image type="content" source="./media/service-connection/create-connection.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal that shows the button for creating a connection.":::
 
-1. Enter or select the following information.
+1. Enter or select the following information:
 
     | Setting                    | Example                       | Description                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       |
     |----------------------------|-------------------------------|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
     | **Service type**           | *Neon Serverless Postgres*    | The name of the target service: **Neon Serverless Postgres**.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     |
     | **Connection name**        | *neon_postgres_01*            | The name of the connection between the Azure compute resource and the Neon Serverless Postgres resource. Use the connection name that Service Connector provides, or enter your own connection name. Connection names can contain only letters, numbers (0-9), periods (.), and underscores (_). |
     | **Neon Postgres hostname** | *contoso-compute.gwc.azure.neon.tech* | The host name of the Neon Serverless Postgres resource. The host name is displayed in the Neon portal, on the **Connect** menu, under **Connection string**.                                                                                                                              |
-    | **Neon Postgres database** | *database*                    | The name of the database within the Neon Serverless Postgres resource. The database name is displayed in the Neon portal, on the **Connect** menu, under **Database**.                                                                                                                            |
+    | **Neon Postgres database name** | *database*                    | The name of the database within the Neon Serverless Postgres resource. The database name is displayed in the Neon portal, on the **Connect** menu, under **Database**.                                                                                                                            |
     | **Client type**            | *Python*                      | The database client type.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         |
 
      :::image type="content" source="./media/service-connection/create-basics-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal that shows the Basics tab for creating a connection.":::
 
 1. Select **Next: Authentication**, and then select or enter the following information:
 
    1. Select **Database credentials**, and then enter your database username and password.
-   1. Select **Store Secret in Key Vault**, and then select an Azure Key Vault connection if you already have one.
+   1. Select **Store Secret In Key Vault**, and then select an Azure Key Vault connection if you already have one.
 
-      If you don't have a Key Vault connection, select **Create new** to create one. For step-by-step instructions for creating a new connection to Key Vault, refer to [Connect Azure services and store secrets in Azure Key Vault](../../service-connector/tutorial-portal-key-vault.md#create-a-key-vault-connection-in-app-service).
+      If you don't have a Key Vault connection, select **Create new** to create one. For step-by-step instructions on creating a new connection to Key Vault, refer to [Connect Azure services and store secrets in Azure Key Vault](../../service-connector/tutorial-portal-key-vault.md#create-a-key-vault-connection-in-app-service).
    1. Optionally, select **Advanced** and edit the provided environment variables.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/service-connection/create-authentication-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal that shows the Authentication tab for creating a connection.":::

articles/partner-solutions/neon/create.md

@@ -13,7 +13,6 @@ This quickstart shows you how to create a Neon Serverless Postgres resource by u
 ## Prerequisites
 
 [!INCLUDE [create-prerequisites](../includes/create-prerequisites.md)]
-
 - You must [subscribe to Neon](overview.md#subscribe-to-neon).
 
 ## Create a resource