Additional replica items

Author: niklarin

articles/cosmos-db/mongodb/vcore/quickstart-cross-region-replica-portal.md

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 ## Connect to primary cluster and ingest data
 
-Get the connection string you need to connect to this primary cluster using your application code.
+Get the connection string you need to connect to the primary (read-write) cluster in the Azure portal.
 
 1. From the Azure Cosmos DB for MongoDB vCore primary cluster page, select the **Connection strings** navigation menu option under **Settings**.
 
@@ -129,68 +129,72 @@ Get the connection string you need to connect to this primary cluster using your
     > [!IMPORTANT]
    > The connection string in the portal does not include the username and password values. You must replace the `<user>` and `<password>` placeholders with the credentials you entered when you created the cluster.
 
-1. In MongoDB shell, connect to the primary cluster using the connection string.
+1. In command line, use the MongoDB shell to connect to the primary cluster using the connection string.
 
 ```cmd
-mongosh mongodb+srv://<user>@<cluster_name>.mongocluster.cosmos.azure.com/?tls=true&authMechanism=SCRAM-SHA-256&retrywrites=false&maxIdleTimeMS=120000
+mongosh mongodb+srv://<user>@<primary_cluster_name>.mongocluster.cosmos.azure.com/?tls=true&authMechanism=SCRAM-SHA-256&retrywrites=false&maxIdleTimeMS=120000
 ```
 
-1. Create a *my_script.js* script file to run from the MongoDB shell. This script file creates two collections and inserts documents with data into those collections.
+### Ingest data
+
+Create a *my_script.js* script file to run from the MongoDB shell. 
 
 ```JavaScript
-let dogDocs = [
-  {
-    name: "pooch",
-    breed: "poodle",
-    weight: "6 lbs"
-  },
-  {
-    name: "mutt",
-    breed: "bulldog",
-    weight: "10 lbs"
-  }
-];
-
-let catDocs = [
-  {
-    name: "minni", 
-    breed: "persian",
-    color: "white"
-  },
-  {
-    name: "tinkle",
-    breed: "bombay",
-    color: "black"
-  }
-];
-
-let dogIndex = { name : 1 };
-let catIndex = { name : 1 };
-
-let collInfoObjs = [ 
-  { coll: "dogs", data: dogDocs, index: dogIndex }, 
-  { coll: "cats", data: catDocs, index: catIndex } 
-];
-
-for (obj of collInfoObjs) {
-    db[obj.coll].insertMany(obj.data);
-    db[obj.coll].createIndex(obj.index);
-}
+    let dogDocs = [
+      {
+        name: "pooch",
+        breed: "poodle",
+        weight: "6 lbs"
+      },
+      {
+        name: "mutt",
+        breed: "bulldog",
+        weight: "10 lbs"
+      }
+    ];
+    
+    let catDocs = [
+      {
+        name: "minni", 
+        breed: "persian",
+        color: "white"
+      },
+      {
+        name: "tinkle",
+        breed: "bombay",
+        color: "black"
+      }
+    ];
+    
+    let dogIndex = { name : 1 };
+    let catIndex = { name : 1 };
+    
+    let collInfoObjs = [ 
+      { coll: "dogs", data: dogDocs, index: dogIndex }, 
+      { coll: "cats", data: catDocs, index: catIndex } 
+    ];
+    
+    for (obj of collInfoObjs) {
+        db[obj.coll].insertMany(obj.data);
+        db[obj.coll].createIndex(obj.index);
+    }
 ```
 
-1. Run the script from the MongoDB shell.
+This script file creates two collections and inserts documents with data into those collections.
+
+Run the script from the MongoDB shell.
 
 ```MongoDB Shell
 load(my_script.js);
 ```
 
-1. In the MongoDB shell, read data from the database.
+In the MongoDB shell, read data from the database.
 
 ```MongoDB Shell
 db.dogs.find();
 db.cats.find();
 ```
-
+    
 ## Connect to read replica cluster in another region and read data
 
 Get the connection string for the read cluster replica in another region.
@@ -199,20 +203,30 @@ Get the connection string for the read cluster replica in another region.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/quickstart-cross-region-replication/global-distribution-page-on-primary-cluster.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the global distribution preview page in the primary cluster propteries.":::
 
-1. Select the cluster replica name to open the read cluster replica properties in the Azure portal.
+1. Select *cluster replica name* to open the read cluster replica properties in the Azure portal.
 
 1. On the replica cluster sidebar, under **Cluster management**, select **Connection strings**.
 
 1. Copy the value from the **Connection string** field.
 
     > [!IMPORTANT]
-   > The connection string in the portal does not include the username and password values. You must replace the `<user>` and `<password>` placeholders with the credentials you entered when you created the cluster.
+   > The connection string of the read replica cluster in the portal contains unique replica cluster name that you selected during replica creation. The username and password values for the read replica cluster are always the same as the ones on its primary cluster.
 
-1. In MongoDB shell, connect to the read replica cluster using its connection string.
+1. In command line, use the MongDB shell to connect to the read replica cluster using its connection string.
 
 ```cmd
 mongosh mongodb+srv://<user>@<cluster_replica_name>.mongocluster.cosmos.azure.com/?tls=true&authMechanism=SCRAM-SHA-256&retrywrites=false&maxIdleTimeMS=120000
 ```
+### Read data from replica cluster
+
+In the MongoDB shell, read data from the database.
+
+```MongoDB Shell
+db.dogs.find();
+db.cats.find();
+```
+
+
 
 
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