Merge pull request #126759 from gy-mate/sqldb-app

`tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app`: correct steps, add note, improve grammar

Author: v-dirichards

articles/app-service/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ In this tutorial, you learn how to:
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 * An Azure account with an active subscription. If you don't have an Azure account, you [can create one for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
-* A GitHub account. you can also [get one for free](https://github.com/join).
+* A GitHub account. You can also [get one for free](https://github.com/join).
 * Knowledge of ASP.NET Core development.
 * **(Optional)** To try GitHub Copilot, a [GitHub Copilot account](https://docs.github.com/copilot/using-github-copilot/using-github-copilot-code-suggestions-in-your-editor). A 30-day free trial is available.
 
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ First, you set up a sample data-driven app as a starting point. For your conveni
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         **Step 2:** In the GitHub fork:
         1. Select **main** > **starter-no-infra** for the starter branch. This branch contains just the sample project and no Azure-related files or configuration.
-        1. Select **Code** > **Create codespace on starter-no-infra**.
+        1. Select **Code** > **Codespaces** > **Create codespace on starter-no-infra**.
         The codespace takes a few minutes to set up.
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@@ -212,9 +212,10 @@ The creation wizard generated the connectivity variable for you already as [.NET
         1. Select the **Networking** tab.
         1. Unselect **Enable public access**.
         1. Select **Create a private endpoint**.
-        1. In **Resource Group**, select **msdocs-core-sql-tutorial**.
+        1. In **Resource group**, select **msdocs-core-sql-tutorial**.
         1. In the dialog, in **Location**, select the same location as your App Service app.
         1. In **Name**, type **msdocs-core-sql-XYZVvaultEndpoint**.
+        1. In **Location**, select the same location as your App Service app.
         1. In **Virtual network**, select **msdocs-core-sql-XYZVnet**.
         1. In **Subnet**, **msdocs-core-sql-XYZSubnet**.
         1. Select **OK**.
@@ -265,7 +266,7 @@ The creation wizard generated the connectivity variable for you already as [.NET
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         **Step 7: Configure the Redis connector to use Key Vault secrets** 
-        1. In the Service Connectors page, select the checkbox next to the Cache for Redis connector, then select **Edit**.
+        1. In the Service Connector page, select the checkbox next to the Cache for Redis connector, then select **Edit**.
         1. Select the **Authentication** tab.
         1. Select **Store Secret in Key Vault**.
         1. Under **Key Vault Connection**, select the key vault you created. 
@@ -425,7 +426,7 @@ With the SQL Database protected by the virtual network, the easiest way to run [
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         **Step 1:** Back in the App Service page, in the left menu, 
         1. Select **Development Tools** > **SSH**.
-        1. Select **Go**.
+        1. Select **Go**. (The start up takes a few minutes.)
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         :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-generate-db-schema-1.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to open the SSH shell for your app from the Azure portal." lightbox="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-generate-db-schema-1.png":::