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Co-authored-by: Batami Gold <[email protected]>

Author: ktoliver

articles/sentinel/sap/configure-snc.md

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-title: Deploy Microsoft Sentinel for SAP data connector with SNC
+title: Deploy the Microsoft Sentinel for SAP data connector with SNC
 description: Deploy the Microsoft Sentinel for SAP data connector to ingest NetWeaver and ABAP logs over a secure connection by using Secure Network Communications (SNC).
 author: batamig
 ms.author: bagol

articles/sentinel/sap/cross-workspace.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP apps in workspaces
+title: Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP apps across multiple workspaces
 description: Learn how to work with the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP applications in multiple workspaces for different deployment scenarios.
 author: batamig
 ms.author: bagol

articles/sentinel/sap/deploy-sap-btp-solution.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.date: 03/30/2023
 This article describes how to deploy the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP Business Technology Platform (BTP) system. The Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP BTP monitors and protects your SAP BTP system. It collects audit logs and activity logs from the BTP infrastructure and BTP-based apps, and then detects threats, suspicious activities, illegitimate activities, and more. [Read more about the solution](sap-btp-solution-overview.md).
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> The Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP BTP solution is currently in preview. The [Azure Preview Supplemental Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/) include additional legal terms that apply to Azure features that are in beta, preview, or otherwise not yet released into general availability.
+> The Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP BTP solution is currently in PREVIEW. The [Azure Preview Supplemental Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/) include additional legal terms that apply to Azure features that are in beta, preview, or otherwise not yet released into general availability.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Before you begin, verify that:
 - Your organization uses SAP BTP (in a Cloud Foundry environment) to streamline interactions with SAP applications and other business applications.
 - You have an SAP BTP account (which supports BTP accounts in the Cloud Foundry environment). You can also use a [SAP BTP trial account](https://cockpit.hanatrial.ondemand.com/).
 - You have the SAP BTP auditlog-management service and service key (see [Set up the BTP account and solution](#set-up-the-btp-account-and-solution)).
-- You can create an [Azure Functions app](../../azure-functions/functions-overview.md) by using the Microsoft.Web/Sites, Microsoft.Web/ServerFarms, Microsoft.Insights/Components, and Microsoft.Storage/StorageAccounts permissions.
+- You can create an [Azure function app](../../azure-functions/functions-overview.md) by using the Microsoft.Web/Sites, Microsoft.Web/ServerFarms, Microsoft.Insights/Components, and Microsoft.Storage/StorageAccounts permissions.
 - You can create [data collection rules and endpoints](../../azure-monitor/essentials/data-collection-rule-overview.md) by using these permissions:
   - Microsoft.Insights/DataCollectionEndpoints and Microsoft.Insights/DataCollectionRules.
   - Assign the Monitoring Metrics Publisher role to the function app.
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ To set up the BTP account and the solution:
 1. Complete all configuration steps, including the function app deployment and the Azure Key Vault access policy configuration.
 1. Make sure that BTP logs are flowing into the Microsoft Sentinel workspace:
 
-    1. Log in to your BTP subaccount and run a few activities that generate logs, such as logins, adding users, changing permissions, and changing settings.
+    1. Sign in to your BTP subaccount and run a few activities that generate logs, such as sign-ins, adding users, changing permissions, and changing settings.
     1. Allow 20 to 30 minutes for the logs to start flowing.
     1. On the **SAP BTP** connector page, confirm that Microsoft Sentinel receives the BTP data, or query the **SAPBTPAuditLog_CL** table directly.
 

articles/sentinel/sap/deploy-sap-security-content.md

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Track your SAP solution deployment journey through this series of articles:
 
 1. [Deploy the data connector agent](deploy-data-connector-agent-container.md)
 
-1. **Deploy the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP applications from the content hub** (*YOU ARE HERE*)
+1. **Deploy the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP applications from the content hub** (*You are here*)
 
 1. [Configure the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP applications](deployment-solution-configuration.md)