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Author: msmbaldwin

articles/payment-hsm/access-payshield-manager.md

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 To create a VM on your new subnet:
 
 1. select "Virtual machines" from the "Create a Resource" screen of the Azure portal:
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   :::image type="content" source="./media/portal-create-vm-1.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the portal resource picker.":::
 1. On the "Basics" tab of the creation screen, select the resource group that contains your payment HSM ("myResourceGroup"):
   :::image type="content" source="./media/portal-create-vm-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the portal main VM creation screen.":::

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 ## Why use Azure Payment HSM?
 
-Momentum is building as financial institutions move some or all of their payment applications to the cloud, requiring a migration from the legacy on-premises (on-premise) applications and HSMs to a cloud-based infrastructure that isn't generally under their direct control. Often it means a subscription service rather than perpetual ownership of physical equipment and software. Corporate initiatives for efficiency and a scaled-down physical presence are the drivers for this shift. Conversely, with cloud-native organizations, the adoption of cloud-first without any on-premises presence is their fundamental business model. Whatever the reason, end users of a cloud-based payment infrastructure expect reduced IT complexity, streamlined security compliance, and flexibility to scale their solution seamlessly as their business grows.
+Momentum is building as financial institutions move some or all of their payment applications to the cloud, requiring a migration from the legacy on-premises applications and HSMs to a cloud-based infrastructure that isn't generally under their direct control. Often it means a subscription service rather than perpetual ownership of physical equipment and software. Corporate initiatives for efficiency and a scaled-down physical presence are the drivers for this shift. Conversely, with cloud-native organizations, the adoption of cloud-first without any on-premises presence is their fundamental business model. Whatever the reason, end users of a cloud-based payment infrastructure expect reduced IT complexity, streamlined security compliance, and flexibility to scale their solution seamlessly as their business grows.
 
 The cloud offers significant benefits, but challenges when migrating a legacy on-premises payment application (involving payment HSMs) to the cloud must be addressed: