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Signed-off-by: Hannah Hunter <[email protected]>

Author: hhunter-ms

articles/azure-monitor/snapshot-debugger/snapshot-debugger.md

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ The Snapshot Debugger requires symbol files on the production server to:
 - Decode variables
 - Provide a debugging experience in Visual Studio
 
-By default, Visual Studio 2017 version 15.2 (or above) publishes symbols for release builds when it publishes to App Service. 
+By default, Visual Studio 2017 versions 15.2+ publishes symbols for release builds when it publishes to App Service. 
 
 In prior versions, you must add the following line to your publish profile `.pubxml` file so that symbols are published in release mode:
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ However, in App Service, the Snapshot Debugger can deoptimize throwing methods t
 
 ## Release notes for Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector
 
-This sectikon contains the release notes for the `Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector` NuGet package for .NET applications, which is used by the Application Insights Snapshot Debugger.
+This section contains the release notes for the `Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector` NuGet package for .NET applications, which is used by the Application Insights Snapshot Debugger.
 
 [Learn](./snapshot-debugger.md) more about the Application Insights Snapshot Debugger for .NET applications.
 
@@ -177,8 +177,8 @@ Addressed multiple improvements and added support for Azure Active Directory (Az
 - Added back `MinidumpWithThreadInfo` when writing dumps.
 - Added `CompatibilityVersion` to improve synchronization between the Snapshot Collector agent and the Snapshot Uploader on breaking changes.
 - Changed `SnapshotUploader` LogFile naming algorithm to avoid excessive file I/O in App Service.
-- Added pid, role name, and process start time to uploaded blob metadata.
-- Used `System.Diagnostics.Process` where possible in Snapshot Collector and Snapshot Uploader.
+- Added `pid`, `role name`, and `process start time` to uploaded blob metadata.
+- Used `System.Diagnostics.Process` in Snapshot Collector and Snapshot Uploader.
 
 #### New features
 Added Azure AD authentication to `SnapshotCollector`. To learn more about Azure AD authentication in Application Insights, see [Azure AD authentication for Application Insights](../app/azure-ad-authentication.md).
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ Switched to using `HttpClient` for all targets except `net45` because `WebReques
 - Deoptimization support (via ReJIT on attach) for .NET Core 3.0 applications.
 - Added symbols to NuGet package.
 - Set more metadata when you upload minidumps.
-- Added an `Initialized` property to `SnapshotCollectorTelemetryProcessor`. It's a `CancellationToken`, which is canceled when the Snapshot Collector is completely initialized and connected to the service endpoint.
+- Added an `Initialized` property to `SnapshotCollectorTelemetryProcessor`. It's a `CancellationToken`, which is canceled when the Snapshot Collector is initialized and connected to the service endpoint.
 - Snapshots can now be captured for exceptions in dynamically generated methods. An example is the compiled expression trees generated by Entity Framework queries.
 
 #### Bug fixes
@@ -234,10 +234,10 @@ Switched to using `HttpClient` for all targets except `net45` because `WebReques
 - Handle `InvalidOperationException` when you're deoptimizing dynamic methods (for example, Entity Framework).
 
 ### [1.3.5](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector/1.3.5)
-- Added support for sovereign clouds (older versions won't work in sovereign clouds).
+- Added support for sovereign clouds (older versions don't work in sovereign clouds).
 - Adding Snapshot Collector made easier by using `AddSnapshotCollector()`. For more information, see [Enable Snapshot Debugger for .NET apps in Azure App Service](./snapshot-debugger-app-service.md).
 - Use the FISMA MD5 setting for verifying blob blocks. This setting avoids the default .NET MD5 crypto algorithm, which is unavailable when the OS is set to FIPS-compliant mode.
-- Ignore .NET Framework frames when deoptimizing function calls. This behavior can be controlled by the `DeoptimizeIgnoredModules` configuration setting.
+- Ignore .NET Framework frames when deoptimizing function calls. Control this behavior with the `DeoptimizeIgnoredModules` configuration setting.
 - Added the `DeoptimizeMethodCount` configuration setting that allows deoptimization of more than one function call.
 
 ### [1.3.4](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector/1.3.4)
@@ -267,12 +267,12 @@ Fixed bug that was causing *SnapshotUploader.exe* to stop responding and not upl
 
 ### [1.3.0](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Microsoft.ApplicationInsights.SnapshotCollector/1.3.0)
 #### Changes
-- For applications that target .NET Framework, Snapshot Collector now depends on Microsoft.ApplicationInsights version 2.3.0 or above.
-It used to be 2.2.0 or above.
+- For applications that target .NET Framework, Snapshot Collector now depends on Microsoft.ApplicationInsights version 2.3.0 or later.
+It used to be 2.2.0 or later.
 We believe this change won't be an issue for most applications. Let us know if this change prevents you from using the latest Snapshot Collector.
 - Use exponential back-off delays in the Snapshot Uploader when retrying failed uploads.
 - Use `ServerTelemetryChannel` (if available) for more reliable reporting of telemetry.
-- Use `SdkInternalOperationsMonitor` on the initial connection to the Snapshot Debugger service so that it's ignored by dependency tracking.
+- Use `SdkInternalOperationsMonitor` on the initial connection to the Snapshot Debugger service so that dependency tracking ignores it.
 - Improved telemetry around initial connection to Snapshot Debugger.
 - Report more telemetry for the:
   - App Service version.