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Author: ktoliver

articles/azure-cache-for-redis/includes/cache-delete-resource-group.md

@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@ Otherwise, to avoid charges, if you're finished with the resources, you can dele
 > [!WARNING]
 > Deleting a resource group is irreversible. When you delete a resource group, all the resources in the resource group are permanently deleted. Make sure that you do not accidentally delete the wrong resource group or resources. If you created the resources inside an existing resource group that has resources you want to keep, you can delete each resource individually instead of deleting the resource group.
 
-### To delete a resource group
+### Delete a resource group
 
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com), and then select **Resource groups**.
 
 1. Select the resource group you want to delete.
 
-   If there are many resource groups, use the **Filter for any field...** box, type the name of your resource group you created for this article. Select the resource group in the results list.
+   If there are many resource groups, in **Filter for any field**, enter the name of the resource group you created for this article. Select the resource group in the list of search results.
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/cache-delete-resource-group/cache-delete-resource-group.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing a list of resource groups to delete in the working pane.":::
 

articles/azure-cache-for-redis/includes/redis-access-policy.md

@@ -8,20 +8,22 @@ ms.date: 08/16/2024
 ms.topic: include
 ---
 
-## Add the Redis access policy
+## Add a new Redis user access policy
 
-You need to assign a data access policy to the identity that accesses Azure Cache for Redis. For this example, you assign a data access policy to the same Microsoft Entra ID account you use to sign in to the Azure CLI or Visual Studio.
+The identity that accesses Azure Cache for Redis must be assigned a data access policy. For this example, you assign a data access policy to the same Microsoft Entra ID account that you use to sign in to the Azure CLI or Visual Studio.
 
-1. Select **Settings** Resource menu on the cache and select the **Data Access Configuration**.
+1. In the Azure portal, go to your cache.
+
+1. On the service menu, under **Settings**, select **Data Access Configuration**.
 
 1. On the **Data Access Configuration** pane, select **Add** > **New Redis User**.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/redis-access-policy/assign-access-policy.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the data access configuration screen.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="media/redis-access-policy/assign-access-policy.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the data access configuration pane with New Redis User highlighted.":::
 
-1. On the **New Redis User** page, select the **Data Contributor** policy, and select **Next: Redis Users**.
+1. On the **New Redis User** pane, select the **Data Contributor** policy, and then select **Next: Redis Users**.
 
-1. Choose **Select Member** to open the flyout menu. Search for your user account and select it from the results.
+1. Choose **Select Member** to open the flyout menu. Search for your user account and select it in the results.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/redis-access-policy/select-user.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Redis user tab in the working pane with select member highlighted with a red box.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="media/redis-access-policy/select-user.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Redis User tab on the New Redis User pane with Select member highlighted.":::
 
 1. Select **Review + assign** to assign the policy to the selected user.

articles/azure-cache-for-redis/includes/redis-cache-passwordless.md

@@ -8,10 +8,12 @@ ms.date: 08/16/2024
 ms.topic: include
 ---
 
-### Retrieve the host name from the Azure portal
+### Get the host name
 
-The cache client needs the host name and port for the cache to connect to your Azure Cache for Redis server. Some clients might refer to these items by slightly different names. You can get the host name and ports from the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
+To connect to your Azure Cache for Redis server, the cache client needs the cache's host name and other information. Some clients might refer to the items by using slightly different names. You can get the host name in the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
-- Select **Overview** from the Resource menu. The host name is of the form `<DNS-name>.redis.cache.windows.net`.
+1. In the Azure portal, go to your cache.
+1. On the service menu, select **Overview**.
+1. Under **Essentials**, for **Host name**, select the **Copy** icon to copy the host name value. The host name value has the form `<DNS name>.redis.cache.windows.net`.
 
-  :::image type="content" source="media/redis-cache-access-keys/redis-cache-hostname-ports.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing Azure Cache for Redis properties with a red box around the host name.":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/redis-cache-access-keys/redis-cache-hostname-ports.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing Azure Cache for Redis properties with the host name highlighted.":::