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articles/service-fabric/overview-managed-cluster.md

@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@ ms.date: 03/12/2024
 
 Service Fabric managed clusters are an evolution of the Azure Service Fabric cluster resource model that streamlines your deployment and cluster management experience.
 
-The Azure Resource Model (ARM) template for traditional Service Fabric clusters requires you to define a cluster resource alongside a number of supporting resources, all of which must be "wired up"  correctly (upon deployment and throughout the lifecycle of the cluster) in order for the cluster and your services to function properly. In contrast, the encapsulation model for Service Fabric managed clusters consists of a single, *Service Fabric managed cluster* resource. All of the underlying resources for the cluster are abstracted away and managed by Azure on your behalf.
+The Azure Resource Model (ARM) template for traditional Service Fabric clusters requires you to define a cluster resource alongside a number of supporting resources, These resources must be configured correctly for the cluster and your services to function properly. In contrast, the encapsulation model for Service Fabric managed clusters consists of a single, *Service Fabric managed cluster* resource. All of the underlying resources for the cluster are abstracted away and managed by Azure on your behalf.
 
 **Service Fabric traditional cluster model**
 ![Service Fabric traditional cluster model][sf-composition]
 
 **Service Fabric managed cluster model**
 ![Service Fabric encapsulated cluster model][sf-encapsulation]
 
-In terms of size and complexity, the ARM template for a Service Fabric managed cluster is about 100 lines of JSON, versus some 1000 lines required to define a typical Service Fabric cluster:
+In terms of size and complexity, the ARM template for a Service Fabric managed cluster is about 100 lines of JSON, versus some 1,000 lines required to define a typical Service Fabric cluster:
 
 | Service Fabric resources | Service Fabric managed cluster resources |
 |----------|-----------|
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Service Fabric managed clusters provide a number of advantages over traditional
 **Best practices by default**
 - Simplified reliability and durability settings
 
-There is no additional cost for Service Fabric managed clusters beyond the cost of underlying resources required for the cluster, and the same Service Fabric SLA applies for managed clusters.
+There's no extra cost for Service Fabric managed clusters beyond the cost of underlying resources required for the cluster, and the same Service Fabric Service Leval Agreement (SLA) applies for managed clusters.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > There is no migration path from existing Service Fabric clusters to managed clusters. You will need to create a new Service Fabric managed cluster to use this new resource type.
@@ -64,15 +64,15 @@ Service Fabric managed clusters are available in both Basic and Standard SKUs.
 | Feature | Basic | Standard |
 | ------- | ----- | -------- |
 | Network resource (SKU for [Load Balancer](../load-balancer/skus.md), [Public IP](../virtual-network/ip-services/public-ip-addresses.md)) | Basic | Standard |
-| Min node (VM instance) count | 3 | 5 |
+| Min node (virtual machine instance) count | 3 | 5 |
 | Max node count per node type | 100 | 1000 |
 | Max node type count | 1 | 50 |
 | Add/remove node types | No | Yes |
 | Zone redundancy | No | Yes |
 
 ## Feature support
 
-The capabilities of managed clusters will continue to expand. See [managed cluster configuration options documentation](how-to-managed-cluster-configuration.md) or managedClusters [Bicep & ARM templates](/azure/templates/microsoft.servicefabric/allversions) for more information.
+See [managed cluster configuration options documentation](how-to-managed-cluster-configuration.md) or managedClusters [Bicep & ARM templates](/azure/templates/microsoft.servicefabric/allversions) for more information.
 
 
 ## Next steps

articles/service-fabric/tutorial-managed-cluster-deploy.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Deploy a Service Fabric managed cluster
-description: In this tutorial, you will deploy a Service Fabric managed cluster for testing.
+description: In this tutorial, you deploy a Service Fabric managed cluster for testing.
 ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.author: tomcassidy
 author: tomvcassidy
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.date: 03/12/2024
 
 # Tutorial: Deploy a Service Fabric managed cluster
 
-In this tutorial series we will discuss:
+In this tutorial series, we discuss:
 
 > [!div class="checklist"]
 > * How to deploy a Service Fabric managed cluster 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ This part of the series covers how to:
 
 Before you begin this tutorial:
 
-* Create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) if you don't already have an Azure subscription
+* Create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) if you don't already have an Azure subscription.
 
 * Install the [Service Fabric SDK and PowerShell module](service-fabric-get-started.md).
 
@@ -62,14 +62,14 @@ New-AzResourceGroup -Name $resourceGroup -Location $location
 
 ### Create a Service Fabric managed cluster
 
-In this step, you will create a Service Fabric managed cluster using the New-AzServiceFabricManagedCluster PowerShell command. The following example creates a cluster named myCluster in the resource group named myResourceGroup. This resource group was created in the previous step in the eastus2 region.
+In this step, you create a Service Fabric managed cluster using the New-AzServiceFabricManagedCluster PowerShell command. The following example creates a cluster named myCluster in the resource group named myResourceGroup. This resource group was created in the previous step in the eastus2 region.
 
 For this step, provide your own values for the following  parameters:
 
 * **Cluster Name**: Enter a unique name for your cluster, such as *mysfcluster*.
-* **Admin Password**: Enter a password for the admin to be used for RDP on the underlying VMs in the cluster.
-* **Client Certificate Thumbprint**: Provide the thumbprint of the client certificate that you would like to use to access your cluster. If you do not have a certificate, follow [set and retrieve a certificate](../key-vault/certificates/quick-create-portal.md) to create a self-signed certificate.
-* **Cluster SKU**: Specify the [type of Service Fabric managed cluster](overview-managed-cluster.md#service-fabric-managed-cluster-skus) to deploy. *Basic* SKU clusters are meant for test deployments only, and do not allow for node type addition or removal.
+* **Admin Password**: Enter a password for the admin to be used for Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP) on the underlying VMs in the cluster.
+* **Client Certificate Thumbprint**: Provide the thumbprint of the client certificate that you would like to use to access your cluster. If you don't have a certificate, follow [set and retrieve a certificate](../key-vault/certificates/quick-create-portal.md) to create a self-signed certificate.
+* **Cluster SKU**: Specify the [type of Service Fabric managed cluster](overview-managed-cluster.md#service-fabric-managed-cluster-skus) to deploy. *Basic* SKU clusters are meant for test deployments only, and don't allow for node type addition or removal.
 
 ```powershell
 $clusterName = "<unique cluster name>"
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ New-AzServiceFabricManagedCluster -ResourceGroupName $resourceGroup -Location $l
 
 ### Add a primary node type to the Service Fabric managed cluster
 
-In this step, you will add a primary node type to the cluster that you have just created. Every Service Fabric cluster must have at least one primary node type.
+In this step, you add a primary node type to the cluster that you created. Every Service Fabric cluster must have at least one primary node type.
 
 For this step, provide your own values for the following  parameters: