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 ### Log Analytics agent retirement
 
-As of August 31, 2024, the [Log Analytics Agent (MMA/OMS) is retired](https://azure.microsoft.com/updates/were-retiring-the-log-analytics-agent-in-azure-monitor-on-31-august-2024/). If you've been using the Log Analytics agent in your Microsoft Sentinel deployment, we recommend that you migrate to the Azure Monitor Agent (AMA).
+As of August 31, 2024, the [Log Analytics Agent (MMA/OMS) is retired](https://azure.microsoft.com/updates/were-retiring-the-log-analytics-agent-in-azure-monitor-on-31-august-2024/). 
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+Log collection from many appliances and devices is now supported by the Common Event Format (CEF) via AMA, Syslog via AMA, or Custom Logs via AMA data connector in Microsoft Sentinel. For more information, see
+[Find your Microsoft Sentinel data connector](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/sentinel/data-connectors-reference).
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+If you've been using the Log Analytics agent in your Microsoft Sentinel deployment, we recommend that you migrate to the Azure Monitor Agent (AMA). For more information, see [AMA migration for Microsoft Sentinel](ama-migrate.md).
 
-For more information, see [AMA migration for Microsoft Sentinel](ama-migrate.md).
 
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