Pat changes

Author: asergaz

articles/iot-operations/connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-mqtt-bridge.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.date: 11/15/2023
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to bridge Azure IoT MQ to another MQTT broker so that I can integrate Azure IoT MQ with other messaging systems.
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-# Connect Azure IoT MQ Preview MQTT bridge to other MQTT brokers
+# Connect Azure IoT MQ Preview MQTT bridge cloud connector to other MQTT brokers
 
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articles/iot-operations/develop/howto-develop-mqttnet-apps.md

@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ ms.date: 11/15/2023
 #CustomerIntent: As an developer, I want to understand how to use MQTTnet to develop distributed apps that talk with Azure IoT MQ.
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-# Use MQTTnet to develop distributed application workloads that talk with Azure IoT MQ Preview
+# Use MQTTnet to develop distributed application workloads that connect to Azure IoT MQ Preview
 
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-[MQTTnet](https://dotnet.github.io/MQTTnet/) is an open-source, high performance .NET library for MQTT based communication. This article uses a Kubernetes service account token to connect to Azure IoT MQ Preview MQTT broker using MQTTnet. You should use service account tokens to connect to in-cluster clients.
+[MQTTnet](https://dotnet.github.io/MQTTnet/) is an open-source, high performance .NET library for MQTT based communication. This article uses a Kubernetes service account token and MQTTnet to connect to Azure IoT MQ Preview. You should use service account tokens to connect to in-cluster clients.
 
 ## Sample code
 

articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-aks-edge-essentials-layered-network.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Configure Layered Network Management to enable Azure IoT Operations in an isolated network
+title: Configure Layered Network Management to use Azure IoT Operations in an isolated network
 description: Configure Azure IoT Layered Network Management service to enable Azure IoT Operations in an isolated network.
 author: PatAltimore
 ms.subservice: layered-network-management
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.date: 11/15/2023
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to Azure Arc enable AKS Edge Essentials clusters using Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
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-# Configure Layered Network Management Preview service to enable Azure IoT Operations Preview in an isolated network
+# Configure Layered Network Management Preview to use Azure IoT Operations Preview in an isolated network
 
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articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-l3-cluster-layered-network.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.date: 11/15/2023
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
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-# Configure level 3 cluster in Azure IoT Layered Network Management Preview service
+# Configure level 3 cluster in an isolated network with Azure IoT Layered Network Management Preview
 
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articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-connect-arc-enabled-servers.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 01/09/2024
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolated devices.
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-# Connect Azure Arc-enabled servers from an isolated network  environment using Azure IoT Layered Network Management Preview
+# Connect Azure Arc-enabled servers from an Azure IoT Layered Network Management Preview isolated network
 
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articles/iot-operations/view-analyze-data/tutorial-upload-mqtt-lakehouse.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 11/15/2023
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to learn how to send MQTT data from the edge to a lakehouse in the cloud.
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-# Upload MQTT data to Microsoft Fabric lakehouse using Azure IoT MQ Preview
+# Upload MQTT data from Azure IoT MQ Preview to Microsoft Fabric lakehouse
 
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